Ren✧ Posted February 8, 2011 Report Share Posted February 8, 2011 [center]Card Editing: Me[/center][center]Image Credit: HP Doom[/center][center]Attribute: EARTH[/center][center][img]http://img843.imageshack.us/img843/3262/kolthsuperiorhunter.png[/img][/center][center]You can Tribute 1 level 6 or higher Beast-Type monster to Tribute Summon this card. This card is destroyed if it is in face-up Defense Position. If this card destroys a monster by battle you can look at the top 3 cards of your opponent's Deck and send to the Graveyard all monsters with lower ATK points than the destroyed monster. If this card is selected as a target for a Spell Card, you can discard 1 Beast or Beast-Warrior-Type monster to negate the Spell Card and destroy it. If this card is selected as a target for a Trap Card you can remove from play 1 Beast and 1 Beast-Warrior-Type monster from your Graveyard to negate the Trap Card and destroy it. During each of your End Phases you must send to the Graveyard 1 monster on your side of the field or pay Life Points equal to the number of your Beast and Beast-Warrior-Type monsters that are removed from play and Graveyard x200.[/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Manpole Posted February 8, 2011 Report Share Posted February 8, 2011 fixed, and the same change should be done for the Trap card effect - [b]"If this card is targeted by a Spell Card, you can..."[/b] fixed ending - [b]"If you do not, this card's original ATK and DEF is reduced to 0."[/b] [b]"During each of your End Phases you must send to the Graveyard 1 monster on your side of the field or pay Life Points equal to the number of Beast and Beast-Warrior-Type monsters in your removed from play pile and Graveyard x300"[/b] - Now this I don't know how to fix, but I am almost sure that "in your removed from play pile" is incorrect wording. Also I think that paying 300 x the amount of cards removed from play / in your Grave is too much. Maybe change the cost to just 200. Overall I think the card is pretty sweet, but I think it should be done normally however (get rid of the shining corner and just put the normal Light attribute symbol) - better imo. edit: also if you could comment on my "Normal Monster Support" post that would be great. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted February 9, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 9, 2011 [quote name='Manpole' timestamp='1297153110' post='4996804'] fixed, and the same change should be done for the Trap card effect - [b]"If this card is targeted by a Spell Card, you can..."[/b] fixed ending - [b]"If you do not, this card's original ATK and DEF is reduced to 0."[/b] [b]"During each of your End Phases you must send to the Graveyard 1 monster on your side of the field or pay Life Points equal to the number of Beast and Beast-Warrior-Type monsters in your removed from play pile and Graveyard x300"[/b] - Now this I don't know how to fix, but I am almost sure that "in your removed from play pile" is incorrect wording. Also I think that paying 300 x the amount of cards removed from play / in your Grave is too much. Maybe change the cost to just 200. Overall I think the card is pretty sweet, but I think it should be done normally however (get rid of the shining corner and just put the normal Light attribute symbol) - better imo. edit: also if you could comment on my "Normal Monster Support" post that would be great. [/quote] thanks for your comment but i think i will keep the edits i am pretty fond of them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wero-vasto Posted February 9, 2011 Report Share Posted February 9, 2011 It has too many effects that I won't play it... at least can be Trade-In Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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