Jump to content

[OOC] Yu-Gi-Oh! Duelist Diaries [ Started / Accepting]


Tokyo Duel

Recommended Posts

  • Replies 296
  • Created
  • Last Reply
Hey, thought I'd try my hand at RPing. I've had a bit of practice in Avatar Arena, a game where you control a being that's based on your avatar and fight in a (massive) arena. I plan on investing two characters, one Signer and one Dark Signer. I'll start with the Signer, cause I gotta finalize stuff on the Dark Signer. So without further ado...

[b]Name:[/b] Simonachi Lervako (often called Simon for short)
[b]Pronunciation:[/b] Sye-mon-nah-chee Lur-vah-coe
[b]Age:[/b] Appears to be 20-something-or-rather, but his true age is unknown
[b]Gender:[/b] Male
[b]Appearance:[/b] [spoiler=Here][img]http://i825.photobucket.com/albums/zz178/JazinKay/Warriors/nnbuihujk.png[/img][/spoiler]
[b]Personality:[/b] Brave and noble, but completely and utterly reckless, Simonachi will often throw the caution of his own life, and the lives of his allies, to the wind. He has his excuses for doing so in one hand, such as claiming that life is not without its risks and that sometimes you only truly feel alive when you "stare down death right in the eyes", as he quotes. But at times, he might not even respond, instead portraying mixed emotions. All he knows is that the world is in danger, and that he's willing to pay any price to set things right.
[b]Mark:[/b] He has a mark of the Crimson Dragon's torso wrapped around his rib cage.
[b]Affiliation:[/b] Signer
[b]Deck Name:[/b] Harbinger of Dark World
[b]Deck Type:[/b] This deck focuses heavily on Dark World cards, but Simonachi does use Clear Vice Dragon and Clear World, which he states are both there as a backup plan.
[b]Ace Card:[/b]
[img]http://img715.imageshack.us/img715/7398/219713a.jpg[/img]

[spoiler=Lore, in case you can't read it]1 Tuner + 2 or more non-Tuner "Dark World" monsters
During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than this card's ATK, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent's Life Points. If at least 1 Tuner monster and at least 2 non-Tuner "Dark World" monsters have been sent from the hand to the Graveyard by a card effect, you can check the Levels of all monsters in that were sent from your hand to your Graveyard at that time before activating any card effects. If the total Levels of those cards were 9 or higher, you can Special Summon this card from your Extra Deck, Graveyard or Removed From Play Zone.[/spoiler]

Image Credit goes to Jazin Kay for both images.
Link to comment
Share on other sites

Dark Signer now.

[b]Name:[/b] Tovee Coma
[b]Pronunciation:[/b] Toe-vee Coe-mah
[b]Age:[/b] 26
[b]Gender:[/b] Female
[b]Appearance:[/b] [spoiler=Here][img]http://i825.photobucket.com/albums/zz178/JazinKay/Machines/fgbdjhgsdg.jpg[/img]
^This is what Tovee looks like as a Dark Signer (except her clothes are about the same colour the standard Dark Signer robes of course), which she becomes AFTER her 1st duel with Simonachi Lervako. During that duel however, she has blonde hair, brown eyes and a more human look to her. She also dons a Sector Security uniform at that stage.[/spoiler]
[b]Personality:[/b] A female Security Sector officer who dies sometime immediately after Simonachi defeats her in a duel. She will been revived by the Dark Signers, but under one condition: that she hunts down Simonachi and destroys him once and for all. As a Dark Signer, Tovee loses all form of emotion, almost acting in some cases like she was no more than a zombie. Tovee will also say that she's not interested in the other Dark Signers' cause, but instead was only looking for an excuse to make Simonachi pay for what he had done to her. To Tovee, it makes no difference in whether Simonachi defeats her in a rematch, but she'll refuse to fight anyone else.
[b]Mark:[/b] Tyrannosaurus Rex. This appears on her back, which is completely bear otherwise.
[b]Affiliation:[/b] Dark Signer
[b]Deck Name:[/b] Vanquishers of Ancient's Past (During 1st duel with Simonachi, however, she uses the standard Pursuit Deck)
[b]Deck Type:[/b] Dinosaur Deck. Has some staples such as Star Blast, Soul Exchange and Monster Reborn, as well as a Dark Tuner by the name of Cretaceous Nightmare. This is a Level -12 Tuner that allows her to tune with her high level Dinosaurs for an insanely powerful Jurrac Velphito.
[b]Ace Card:[/b]
[img]http://img580.imageshack.us/img580/9482/219713.jpg[/img]

[spoiler=Lore, in case you can't read it]There can only be 1 face-up "Earthbound Immortal" monster on the field. If there is no face-up Field Spell Card on the field, destroy this card. Your opponent cannot select this card as an attack target. This card can attack your opponent directly. If your opponent activates a Spell or Trap Card in response to this card's attack, you can return this card to your hand and end your own Battle Phase immediately to negate that card's effect and destroy the card. Both players then take Battle Damage equal to this card's ATK. If the Duel would end in a Draw because of this effect, you win the Duel instead. You can only activate this ability once every 3 turns in the current Duel.[/spoiler]

Image Credit goes to Jazin Kay for Tovee and ~Raphtil for Earthbound Immortal Ruina Occasus.
Link to comment
Share on other sites

[quote name='TheFinalFan' timestamp='1298776825' post='5037391']
Clearly, you did not read up on any of the other apps to check...
[/quote]

Ya think? Cause I'm pretty sure I have checked all of them to make sure my descriptions were long enough and that I didn't try to take signs and stuff and everything seems checked in my book. Alright, I realize I might've ballsed some stuff up, and if I have I can fix it. I just need time to think and I need to know what I've done wrong. Trust me on this, but I can fix it.

So where have I gone wrong? (I know about from the Signer Dragon, assuming by atrocious you mean badly OP'ed/way too easy to powerplay, but where else?)
Link to comment
Share on other sites

[b]Name: [/b]Daisuke Minari

[b]Age: [/b]18

[b]Gender: [/b]Male

[b]Appereance: [spoiler][img]http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_T-aiGVd3BI0/TUDbqyMMToI/AAAAAAAAAKg/h8vN1lM9y1U/s1600/byakuran02.jpg[/img][/spoiler][/b]

[b]Personality: [/b]He is very calm and very inteligent. He loves to play strategy games and is always down to earth. He likes to help people, even if it doesnt help him at all. IF you dont know him, he will seem very cold and mean. But once he gets to know you, he will be one of the best people you could have. He is protective with people he cares about.

[b]Mark:[/b] Heart.

[b]Affiliation: [/b]Signer

[b]Deck Name: [/b]Von Version X

[b]Deck Type: Von[/b]
(Mostly Beast)

[b]Ace Card:[/b][img]http://img828.imageshack.us/img828/6484/50125.jpg[/img]

[i]When this card is Synchro Summoned, Its ATK and DEF becomes equal to the number of "Von" Monsters in your Graveyard x 600. When this card is Destroyed, you can Special Summon the "Von" Monsters used for its Summoning. Once per turn, You can remove from play one "Von" Monster to increase the ATK of this card equal to the card as well as its effect until end of turn.[/i]
Link to comment
Share on other sites

[quote name='Daisuke28' timestamp='1298784085' post='5037590']
I looked at all the Apps from page 1, no one has the torso. There was one but it wasnt accepted :P
[/quote]

Because apparently it was a ludicrous amount of fail <_<

Again, I can fix it. I REALLY need some help as where I went wrong though but still...

EDIT: Started by toning down both characters' ace monsters, as both of them I feel were OP'ed (See edited posts for details). Eh, its a start.

Link to comment
Share on other sites

I think pretty much all the Dark Signers are there already. But that's only a thought. I'm not entirely sure where we are specifically other than the first Ener-D Reactor. So it's probable. Want a close encounter of the Albus kind?

And nobody said anything about Exceed Monsters. Are we allowed them or not? I'm actually getting around to making a proper deck for Al so I'm contemplating what to have.
Link to comment
Share on other sites

Archived

This topic is now archived and is closed to further replies.


×
×
  • Create New...