celloboymat Posted February 21, 2011 Report Share Posted February 21, 2011 Hope this is remotely realistic [img]http://img259.imageshack.us/img259/1589/367286.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n8thegr8 Posted February 21, 2011 Report Share Posted February 21, 2011 Um its pretty good but the pic is kinda bad. try to get 1 that is a higher quality and has a background. Im not great at OCG but im pretty sure it should be [u]When this card destroys an opponents monster, you gain 500 life points.[/u] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
·Toot Posted February 21, 2011 Report Share Posted February 21, 2011 Correct OCG: When this card destroyes a monster by battle, the controller of this card gains 500 Life Points. effect is kinda bland but eh... pic is kinda bad but eh... its an okayish card for a noob i rate with a 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
:bcoe Posted February 21, 2011 Report Share Posted February 21, 2011 Ya its realistic, just not that good. 2200 ATK for a 6 star is not very powerful especially with a weak effect (DEF is good but its not reason enough to use it). Life points aren't all that important even when your talking about at least 1000-2000. Picture and OCG are pretty good, just need to add 'by battle' or 'as a result of battle'. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted February 22, 2011 Report Share Posted February 22, 2011 Card is decent but underpowered. Suggestions: -make it about 2400 ATK -make the Life increasing effect at least 1000. -add some damage effect (for the opponent) like: "[i]and inflict 800 damage to your opponent[/i]" -give it some ATK increasing effect, at least a temporal one. For example, when its attacking only, or something along the lines. Then it'll be funnier. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
celloboymat Posted March 2, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 2, 2011 So is this better? [img]http://img855.imageshack.us/img855/1589/367286.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♠>:Stick-Man:<♠ Posted March 2, 2011 Report Share Posted March 2, 2011 The only problem I see with this is the picture. Every thing else seems okay besides the OCG fact that Life Points is capitalized. 7' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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