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Lore: When this card is Normal Summoned, you must draw 1 card from the bottom of their deck. If the card you drew is a Monster Card, increase this card's ATK by 1000 points until the End Phase. If this card is destroyed by a card effect, during the same turn this effect was activated, inflict 1000 points of damage to both player's Life Points.
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2 versions of the lore, since there are 2 ways to update this

[i]When this card is Normal Summoned, draw 1 card from the bottom of your deck. If that card is a Monster Card, you can reveal it to give this card 1000 ATK until the End Phase. If this card is destroyed by a card effect during the turn this effect is activated, inflict 1000 points of damage to both players.[/i]

[i]When this card is Normal Summoned, draw 1 card from the bottom of your deck and reveal it. If that card is a Monster Card, this card gains 1000 ATK until the End Phase. If this card is destroyed by a card effect during the turn this effect is activated, inflict 1000 points of damage to both players.[/i]

Once agains you have a clever idea. I like that quality in a card maker. This card has potential as well. You can potentially attack and destroy an annoying monster with it (stardust or bryonac for example) and the fact that it replaces itself when normal summoned even if you don't get the ATK boost is another plus. If it let you use the effect when special summoned, then that might be over powered.

I'd also love to use this in proxy duels with my friends with your permission. (You will recieve full credit for your idea, I'm not going to claim its mine)
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2 versions of the lore, since there are 2 ways to update this

[i]When this card is Normal Summoned, draw 1 card from the bottom of your deck. If that card is a Monster Card, you can reveal it to give this card 1000 ATK until the End Phase. If this card is destroyed by a card effect during the turn this effect is activated, inflict 1000 points of damage to both players.[/i]

[i]When this card is Normal Summoned, draw 1 card from the bottom of your deck and reveal it. If that card is a Monster Card, this card gains 1000 ATK until the End Phase. If this card is destroyed by a card effect during the turn this effect is activated, inflict 1000 points of damage to both players.[/i]

Once agains you have a clever idea. I like that quality in a card maker. This card has potential as well. You can potentially attack and destroy an annoying monster with it (stardust or bryonac for example) and the fact that it replaces itself when normal summoned even if you don't get the ATK boost is another plus. If it let you use the effect when special summoned, then that might be over powered.

I'd also love to use this in proxy duels with my friends with your permission. (You will recieve full credit for your idea, I'm not going to claim its mine)
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Thanks for the OCG fixes, I will try to update the card as soon as possible. Relating to Proxy duels, I don't mind if people use the cards I've made but you must give me credit
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