Blue-Eyes Legacy Posted February 24, 2011 Report Share Posted February 24, 2011 Hey guys, Here's my first realistic card. I'd always dreamed of having a card similar to Luster Dragon, but with the Blue-Eyes flavor to it, so I came up with my own. UPDATED AS OF 6:39PM, 2/24/2011: [img]http://img814.imageshack.us/img814/849/368926.jpg[/img] Tell me what you guys think! Comments and criticism is welcome. By the way, I found the drawing through Google, but I swapped the background to something more ambient and interesting. New Support Card for BEWD/BEWD Decks: [img]http://img822.imageshack.us/img822/849/368926.jpg[/img] I'm still playing around with the wording of this monster's effect, so be patient. New Card: [img]http://img109.imageshack.us/img109/849/368926.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CNo.101 S.H. Death Knight Posted February 24, 2011 Report Share Posted February 24, 2011 this thread god to the "other card" section, even though does seem bait realistic but we evaluate effects here not vanillas, sorry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blue-Eyes Legacy Posted February 24, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 24, 2011 [quote name='Yusei & Akiza' timestamp='1298545018' post='5031153'] this thread god to the "other card" section, even though does seem bait realistic but we evaluate effects here not vanillas, sorry. [/quote] Made some changes to make it eligible. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jekashi Posted February 24, 2011 Report Share Posted February 24, 2011 nice effect support for blue eyes decks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
†Marksman†Posted February 24, 2011 Report Share Posted February 24, 2011 Wow, I like this card. It seems I've had a new liking for blue-eyes cards, especially Blue-Eyes White Dragon. As I really like that card, this card is supporting it, making me like this card. :3 It really does support blue-eyes decks though, and those are pretty fun to use. I'd like to have this card, so 10/10 for sure. P.S. Add a lore in the future, if you would be so kind. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ (Actual rating/feedback here.) The OCG doesn't seem to be bad, so I can't make that get in the way of the rating. Picture is really cool, if you ask me. Looks like a young version of blue eyes white, which it should. So that's good, and the effect. As said above, the effect really does support blue-eyes, so that is very good. I'm glad you made it a certain amount of turns though, as it seems it would be a little OP'd if you Summoned the blue eyes white when it was FIRST summoned, as the two cards are very strong. So, all this is leading me to say 10/10. :3 Keep it up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DG- Posted February 24, 2011 Report Share Posted February 24, 2011 [quote name='Yusei & Akiza' timestamp='1298545018' post='5031153'] this thread god to the "other card" section, even though does seem bait realistic but we evaluate effects here not vanillas, sorry. [/quote] 1. Wrong. 2. Vanillas are allowed. As for the card, "During the Standby Phase of the 3rd turn after this card is successfully Summoned, you can Special Summon 1 "Blue-Eyes White Dragon" from your Deck." That should be the correct effect, but I've been wrong before. As for this card, at least make it a 5 Star as to make it have some sort of drawback. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
judedudemude Posted February 24, 2011 Report Share Posted February 24, 2011 please add lore the effect takes forever to work (UP'ed) but if you make were it speacail summon to quickly make this card OP'ed maybe a counter thing and a surport card to help Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blue-Eyes Legacy Posted February 25, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 25, 2011 [quote name='judedudemude' timestamp='1298589985' post='5032280'] please add lore the effect takes forever to work (UP'ed) but if you make were it speacail summon to quickly make this card OP'ed maybe a counter thing and a surport card to help [/quote] Boy, I don't understand a thing you just said. Anyways, here's an updated image: [img]http://img814.imageshack.us/img814/849/368926.jpg[/img] [Dragon/Effect] During your third Standby Phase after this card is successfully Normal Summoned, Flip Summoned, or Special Summoned, you may offer this card as tribute to Special Summon 1 "Blue-Eyes White Dragon" from your hand or deck. Added that the card is tributed during the effect, but it's optional if you'd prefer to keep your BEYD up and running for whatever reason. Should I make it so BEWD wouldn't be able to attack during the turn it is special summoned? Also, I'll be making my own drawing soon so I don't need to steal one from Google. Support cards coming soon as well. How do add lore? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DG- Posted February 25, 2011 Report Share Posted February 25, 2011 This would be pretty perfect if you'd make it 5 stars and raise the ATK to 2000. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blue-Eyes Legacy Posted February 25, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 25, 2011 [quote name='-DG-' timestamp='1298602401' post='5032683'] This would be pretty perfect if you'd make it 5 stars and raise the ATK to 2000. [/quote] I dunno, that would ruin my vision for this card. The idea was a four star 1900ATK monster without any hindering effect + the Blue-Eyes theme. Maybe I'll do that for a different card... Like, tribute two monsters on your field to special summon a Blue-Eyes straight from the deck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blue-Eyes Legacy Posted February 25, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 25, 2011 New Card for the set, two more in the works: [img]http://img109.imageshack.us/img109/849/368926.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AsterikcAde Posted February 25, 2011 Report Share Posted February 25, 2011 Nice support for the Blue Eyes White Dragon and I can guess from your username that you are a big fan of the Blue Eyes White Dragon, you totally should make a set devoted to Blue Eyes, 9/10, very good start for a new member. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blue-Eyes Legacy Posted February 25, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 25, 2011 [quote name='AsterikcAde' timestamp='1298625488' post='5033091'] Nice support for the Blue Eyes White Dragon and I can guess from your username that you are a big fan of the Blue Eyes White Dragon, you totally should make a set devoted to Blue Eyes, 9/10, very good start for a new member. [/quote] Thanks! I'm seriously considering making a whole set. And yeah, I've always loved BEWD. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
judedudemude Posted February 26, 2011 Report Share Posted February 26, 2011 the new effect for the blue eyes young dragon is way better more or less balanced ill look at the maiden later Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
I Hate Snatch Steal Posted February 26, 2011 Report Share Posted February 26, 2011 [b]Fro your 1st cards, these are impressive.[/b] Your wordings are out of date, improvised, or off in some cases but the ideas are very solid and my early wordings weren't much better. Some wording references for you: http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Aurkus,_Lightsworn_Druid (Some slight adjustments to the wording given are made in your effect's case) "Blue-Eyes" monsters you control cannot be targeted by opponent's effects. ----------------------------------------------------------- http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Exiled_Force (Offer as a tribute becomes "tribute" as a verb) http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Fire_Trooper (If you want it to apply to normal, flip and special, just write "summon(ed)" http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Viser_Des (third should be 3rd) During your 3rd Standby Phase after this card is summoned, you can tribute it to Special Summon 1 "Blue-Eyes White Dragon" from your hand or deck. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------- http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Ghost_Gardna 3rd sentence of Maiden should be, "...When "Blue-Eyes White Dragon" you control is selected as the target of an effct you can change the target to this card". ------------------------------------------------------------ Love the young dragon. Maiden looks good too. The knight has a soild effect I can't see the stats as I type this so can't fully rate Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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