DJ BludLust Posted March 1, 2011 Report Share Posted March 1, 2011 [img]http://img822.imageshack.us/img822/654/98785.jpg[/img] Did the image in photoshop. The idea is that on Saturday morning cartoons rule. Any feedback is appriciated. EDIT: I made OCG corrections as pointed out. Thank you all again for the feedback, I plan to make a few more toon oriented cards, but hopefully a few others as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n8thegr8 Posted March 1, 2011 Report Share Posted March 1, 2011 WOW! Really really good first card!!! You have a few OCG mistakes like missing periods and i'm pretty sure the last sentence is off but AMAZING! Also maybe you could hink of a better name. IDK that might just be me. But great caard for a new member. 9.99999999/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Roblixinator Posted March 1, 2011 Report Share Posted March 1, 2011 my rating is the highest because this is better then any card i have EVER made.11/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HeadshotMagnet Posted March 2, 2011 Report Share Posted March 2, 2011 Ive seen some pretty bad cards from new members...but this is a good one. You rarely see new members with good cards. There are a few minor OCG errors, but other than that, the effect is great, there are also some capitalization errors and some missing periods I.E. life points = Life Points field = Field The last sentence is a bit off as well. Instead of saying "Life Point Cost" say something like "You must also pay 500 Life Points per turn. If you do not, destroy this card." This card gets an 8/10! Great Job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
judedudemude Posted March 2, 2011 Report Share Posted March 2, 2011 i like the name and the pic it fits pegusas very well lol the effect is pretty good too by the wya you miss spelled "frist" its spelled : F I R S T but you are forgiven Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DJ BludLust Posted March 2, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 2, 2011 Thanks for all the feedback, does anyone have a list of common OCG mistakes so I can avoid them? Also I know how to spell first, my fingers must have dyslexia lol. And by the way I am actually a pretty avid graphic designer so if anyone needs any artwork I would be glad to give it a go. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
judedudemude Posted March 2, 2011 Report Share Posted March 2, 2011 why did you change the card name form saturday cartoons ??? that horrible Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DJ BludLust Posted March 2, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 2, 2011 Oh I didn't know the name was that well liked lol I will revert it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
judedudemude Posted March 3, 2011 Report Share Posted March 3, 2011 its that its a toon card and that means to some extend pegaus plus i could see peguagas getting up at 7am on saturaday just to watch cartoons the name you pick just fit the card so well Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~British Soul~ Posted March 3, 2011 Report Share Posted March 3, 2011 wow, this is great for a first card i like how you have done the card pic, great work for a new member - 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted March 3, 2011 Report Share Posted March 3, 2011 [quote name='judedudemude' timestamp='1299048720' post='5045413'] why did you change the card name form saturday cartoons ??? that horrible [/quote] It's just a name you idiot, and it's his card. Don't go b i t c h i n g at people when they decide to change the name of their card, just because you think it's not a good name. On topic: What do you mean by "You do not have to pay for the effects of Toon Monsters" anyways? Did you mean the fact that they still have to Tribute to Summon them? Other than that, the card is good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
judedudemude Posted March 3, 2011 Report Share Posted March 3, 2011 @Zandaa Roaisu saturday cartoons fits this card waaayy better than "prime time" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DJ BludLust Posted March 3, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 3, 2011 [quote name='Zandaa Roaisu' timestamp='1299176287' post='5048350'] It's just a name you idiot, and it's his card. Don't go b i t c h i n g at people when they decide to change the name of their card, just because you think it's not a good name. On topic: What do you mean by "You do not have to pay for the effects of Toon Monsters" anyways? Did you mean the fact that they still have to Tribute to Summon them? Other than that, the card is good. [/quote] When attacking with a toon monster you must pay 500 life points because they attack directly Also since people are more into this thread than the other I put these in: [img]http://img823.imageshack.us/img823/654/98785.jpg[/img] [img]http://img852.imageshack.us/img852/8890/98785j.jpg[/img] My second and third cards, both done with 3ds max. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skymiles Posted March 3, 2011 Report Share Posted March 3, 2011 One word: Amazing! Did you make all of the images in Photoshop? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KardGame Posted March 3, 2011 Report Share Posted March 3, 2011 [quote name='DJ BludLust' timestamp='1299185387' post='5048621'] When attacking with a toon monster you must pay 500 life points because they attack directly Also since people are more into this thread than the other I put these in: [img]http://img823.imageshack.us/img823/654/98785.jpg[/img] [img]http://img852.imageshack.us/img852/8890/98785j.jpg[/img] My second and third cards, both done with 3ds max. [/quote] I really like tools of the trade. It looks and sounds cool. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DJ BludLust Posted March 3, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 3, 2011 [quote name='Skymiles' timestamp='1299193596' post='5049032'] One word: Amazing! Did you make all of the images in Photoshop? [/quote] Saturday Morning Cartoons is all PotoShop Tools Of The Trade is a combination of 3DS MAX and PhotoShop Back To The Drawing Board is all 3DS MAX, although i did the background and Toon Blue Eyes textures in PhotoShop. I would be happy to link anyone to software if they need it, unless being a pirate is frowned upon here, in which case I never said anything. And if anyone needs a rendering or art or something I would be glad to contribute what I can. [quote name='KardGame' timestamp='1299193735' post='5049040'] I really like tools of the trade. It looks and sounds cool. [/quote] Thanks so much, that one is one of my favorites too. It took a good hour for the art but it was well worth it compared to what it was originally. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kodamλ Posted March 9, 2011 Report Share Posted March 9, 2011 [quote=Raxtus][color=#1C2837][font=tahoma, arial, verdana, sans-serif]my rating is the highest because this is better then any card i have EVER made.11/10 [/quote][/font][/color] [color=#1C2837][font=tahoma, arial, verdana, sans-serif]So Raxtus, that means you must now rate all cards at least 11/10 now I have heard your reason[/font][/color] [color=#1C2837][font=tahoma, arial, verdana, sans-serif] [/font][/color] [color=#1C2837][font=tahoma, arial, verdana, sans-serif]Anyway... These cards are Really good I love the pictures and Effects 9/10[/font][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DJ BludLust Posted March 9, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 9, 2011 [quote name='<~BlackFire~>' timestamp='1299653144' post='5062065'] [/font][/color] [color=#1C2837][font=tahoma, arial, verdana, sans-serif]So Raxtus, that means you must now rate all cards at least 11/10 now I have heard your reason[/font][/color] [color=#1C2837][font=tahoma, arial, verdana, sans-serif] [/font][/color] [color=#1C2837][font=tahoma, arial, verdana, sans-serif]Anyway... These cards are Really good I love the pictures and Effects 9/10[/font][/color] [/quote] Thank you kindly Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legacy117 Posted March 10, 2011 Report Share Posted March 10, 2011 [quote name='CREagle34' timestamp='1299031300' post='5044823'] Ive seen some pretty bad cards from new members...but this is a good one. You rarely see new members with good cards. There are a few minor OCG errors, but other than that, the effect is great, there are also some capitalization errors and some missing periods I.E. life points = Life Points field = Field The last sentence is a bit off as well. Instead of saying "Life Point Cost" say something like "You must also pay 500 Life Points per turn. If you do not, destroy this card." This card gets an 8/10! Great Job! [/quote] Actually, "field" doesn't have to be capitalized unless it is in the context "[b]Field[/b] Spell Card". So, yeah. Just clearing that up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HeadshotMagnet Posted March 10, 2011 Report Share Posted March 10, 2011 o well thank you for the correction Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legacy117 Posted March 11, 2011 Report Share Posted March 11, 2011 [quote name='CREagle34' timestamp='1299731579' post='5063888'] o well thank you for the correction [/quote] No problem. I just usually very anal about grammar. Sorry for correcting you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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