ltorres666 Posted March 9, 2011 Report Share Posted March 9, 2011 These are some of the First cards I've ever created. This set has been put together over the course of a year, it's gradually grown over time as I came up with new ideas for the "Death" cards. I created this set with the intent to really blur the lines of the removed from play zone and the graveyard. I also tried to make sure that none of my cards were too broken or OPed. I've also tried to make them as realistic as possible, and I know there are a few OCG errors, but most of them where to make sure the text was large enough to be read. Anyway, feel free to critique, comment and rate. Also, don't really judge the images too harshly, I just google searched all of the pics, I claim no ownership of any of the pictures. [img]http://img847.imageshack.us/img847/5535/219511c.jpg[/img] [img]http://img845.imageshack.us/img845/6113/219511f.jpg[/img] [img]http://img845.imageshack.us/img845/791/219511l.jpg[/img] [img]http://img847.imageshack.us/img847/7186/219511uw.jpg[/img][img]http://img219.imageshack.us/img219/1513/219511.jpg[/img] [img]http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/1513/219511.jpg[/img][img]http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/3660/219511r.jpg[/img] [img]http://img683.imageshack.us/img683/1513/219511.jpg[/img][img]http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/1513/219511.jpg[/img] [img]http://img851.imageshack.us/img851/1513/219511.jpg[/img][img]http://img832.imageshack.us/img832/1513/219511.jpg[/img] [img]http://img832.imageshack.us/img832/6983/219511g.jpg[/img][img]http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/1513/219511.jpg[/img] [img]http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/1513/219511.jpg[/img][img]http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/5475/219511s.jpg[/img] [img]http://img847.imageshack.us/img847/9223/219511h.jpg[/img][img]http://img847.imageshack.us/img847/9623/219511u.jpg[/img] [img]http://img814.imageshack.us/img814/1513/219511.jpg[/img][img]http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/1513/219511.jpg[/img] [img]http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/5245/219511e.jpg[/img][img]http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/5587/219511m.jpg[/img] [img]http://img535.imageshack.us/img535/644/219511k.jpg[/img][img]http://img846.imageshack.us/img846/1513/219511.jpg[/img] [img]http://img842.imageshack.us/img842/644/219511k.jpg[/img][img]http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/6006/219511b.jpg[/img] [img]http://img708.imageshack.us/img708/1513/219511.jpg[/img][img]http://img849.imageshack.us/img849/1513/219511.jpg[/img] [img]http://img34.imageshack.us/img34/1513/219511.jpg[/img][img]http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/2294/219511t.jpg[/img] [img]http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/6006/219511b.jpg[/img][img]http://img849.imageshack.us/img849/9623/219511u.jpg[/img] [img]http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/2075/219511p.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mecha Love Posted March 9, 2011 Report Share Posted March 9, 2011 Death....... Pleasent. Minor OCG fixes are needed but the set looks good but as I say.......not pleasent. Good cards mate! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ltorres666 Posted March 12, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 12, 2011 [quote name='Elemental Dragon' timestamp='1299697280' post='5062752'] Death....... Pleasent. Minor OCG fixes are needed but the set looks good but as I say.......not pleasent. Good cards mate! [/quote] thanks, was hoping for more comments tho, guess I'll have to re-post some other time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ltorres666 Posted March 14, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 14, 2011 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Six Samz 500 Posted March 14, 2011 Report Share Posted March 14, 2011 ther ok just some pics are a little blury and some freaky 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ltorres666 Posted March 14, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 14, 2011 still looking for some useful input??? Do you think it'd be a better idea to break the set up into different posts and add the lore so people would be more willing to actually look at my cards? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ltorres666 Posted March 15, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 15, 2011 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Organized Chaos Posted March 15, 2011 Report Share Posted March 15, 2011 Interesting idea for a set. i like the macarbe pics and ideas but a few of the effects need a little work. Death Scythe is Oped because it can set up DAD, return the selected monster to your deck instead of letting it attack twice this turn. Death Seeker's second effect is also Oped, I would say it can only be activated when it's sent from the field to the graveyard. Uvall should only be able to add 1 card with it's effect, Charon is Oped because it can Special Summon from Graveyard. that's all the OPed cards I can see. I think you should post them seperatley and post the lore so people can correct OCG errors. Quite a good set at the moment 9/10 + rep. Good work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ltorres666 Posted March 15, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 15, 2011 [quote name='Endless Nightmares' timestamp='1300223597' post='5075646'] Interesting idea for a set. i like the macarbe pics and ideas but a few of the effects need a little work. Death Scythe is Oped because it can set up DAD, return the selected monster to your deck instead of letting it attack twice this turn. Death Seeker's second effect is also Oped, I would say it can only be activated when it's sent from the field to the graveyard. Uvall should only be able to add 1 card with it's effect, Charon is Oped because it can Special Summon from Graveyard. that's all the OPed cards I can see. I think you should post them seperatley and post the lore so people can correct OCG errors. Quite a good set at the moment 9/10 + rep. Good work [/quote] Thanks for the comments, I'll take them into consideration when I repost. Also for Death Scythe, I really want it to have the ability to attack twice, maybe I'll change it a little bit though. As for Uvall, if you use his effect to it's full extent you take 1500 damage, and it only lets you get cards from the set that I've created so it's not all that OPed, maybe I'll just get rid of his deck searching ability. and I don't think Charon is too OPed either since it only summons a level 4 and you have to pay 1000 life points, maybe I'll just make it where Charon only destroys a face down card, IDK yet. And I have Death Seeker the way he is because, as I said before, I was really trying to blur the lines of the remove from play zone and the graveyard. thanks again! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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