[Contest] Write Me A Fan Fic!

[The Dark Knight]

PikaPerson01: I felt that yeah, the whole class presentation thing was a cool idea, but it just came off as bad.
evilfusion: Since yours was better, I can get more analytical: although I feel the end of the duel could've been done differently and the use of Kycoo was a poor choice for character, as I feel the character would've researched Kaiba beforehand and known his cards fairly well to predict the use of cards like Return from the Different Dimension and Dimension Fusion. Otherwise there were a bunch of little details that I found incredibly well-articulated and, even though my character was the loser, I found it incredibly well-done. Congrats.

so yeah, evilfusion is the winner and gets the 300 points

[evilfusion]

Yay!

*shrug* I just used the cards you provided. If I wanted him to make a really stupid move, I'd have had him remove X-Head and Z-Metal, instead of the monsters with the highest ATK (as most people would in a real duel), thus actually fulfilling his comeback strategy (and could have then had Kaiba get Pot of Greed for Dimension Fusion and Y Dragon).

At the time of writing, I wasn't even sure if Kaiba would use RFG retrieval. I make duels up on the spot.

But I did know Kaiba would win. The reason is simply that I consider Kaiba THE best player in the original series and his deck and strategies are vastly superior to Yugi's, and Yugi only wins because he's the main character and it'll fulfill the plot.

[Catterjune]

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PikaPerson01: I felt that yeah, the whole class presentation thing was a cool idea, but it just came off as bad.
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Fair enough. I did it in about an hour, an I insulted every character many times throughout the course of it. o_0