EndlessOcean Posted March 21, 2011 Report Share Posted March 21, 2011 Any good? [img]http://img233.imageshack.us/img233/610/299673.jpg[/img] Lore: There can only be 1 face-up "Earthbound Immortal" monster on the Field. If there is no face up Field Spell Card, destroy this card. Your opponent cannot select this card as an attack target. This card can attack your opponent directly. Once per turn you can tribute 1 monster you control to have 1 monster you control gain 1000 ATK until the End Phase. If your opponent activates a Spell or Trap Card that destroys a monster(s) on the field, you can Tribute one monster to Negate the activation of the Spell or Trap card and destroy it. Image Credit goes to Raphtil from deviantart. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mecha Love Posted March 21, 2011 Report Share Posted March 21, 2011 Overused pic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EndlessOcean Posted March 21, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 21, 2011 Really? I'll change it, but is the rest good? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
UTouch=UDIE Posted March 21, 2011 Report Share Posted March 21, 2011 an earthbound tending to be a hydra? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mecha Love Posted March 21, 2011 Report Share Posted March 21, 2011 overall it is a good card ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EndlessOcean Posted March 21, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 21, 2011 Thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legacy117 Posted March 21, 2011 Report Share Posted March 21, 2011 Based on my ranking system, I would give the card the following rank: A Rank Reason being is that the effect is well-thought out, its original, minor OCG errors (can't really pinpoint them out if there are any), and a great picture. The only thing that throws me off is the name. It reminds me of Earthbound Immortal Cusillu. I would change it to have a less similar sounding name. This is just my opinion. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Near Rivers Posted March 21, 2011 Report Share Posted March 21, 2011 Change the attack upgrade so that it only last until the end of the turn, otherwise you could have a severly OP monster on your field in only a few short turns. Other than that, great job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EndlessOcean Posted March 21, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 21, 2011 @Both of you: thanks! I'll change. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EndlessOcean Posted March 21, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 21, 2011 Oh Btw I can't edit yet I'm on my Ipod Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EndlessOcean Posted March 22, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 22, 2011 EDIT:ed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squirrel Girl Posted March 22, 2011 Report Share Posted March 22, 2011 Add the thing I bold to make it like a real EI There can only be 1 face-up "Earthbound Immortal" monster on the Field. If there is no face up Field Spell Card, destroy this card. [b]Your opponent cannot select this card as an attack target. This card can attack your opponent directly.[/b] Once per turn you can tribute 1 monster you control to have 1 monster you control gain 1000 ATK until the End Phase. If your opponent activates a Spell or Trap Card that destroys a monster(s) on the field, you can Tribute one monster to Negate the activation of the Spell or Trap card and destroy it. Really great card except the thing I mentioned. It's balanced and I like the pic. Really good card, keep up the good work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EndlessOcean Posted March 22, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 22, 2011 Changes Have been made. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Niv-Mizzet Posted March 22, 2011 Report Share Posted March 22, 2011 That is possibly the most real card I have ever seen on these forums, just a few tiny OCG errors like capitalization. 9.99999999/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EndlessOcean Posted March 22, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 22, 2011 Thanks a lot, any particular mistakes? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Cakey Posted March 23, 2011 Report Share Posted March 23, 2011 By a lucky accident, you coincidentally picked a creature that is actually a genuine Nazca line. Congratulations. Anyway, I was impressed at the quality of the card...though shouldn't it be a Reptile? If you feel like it (and I know you don't), trying researching a name that would work for an EBI. Also, every other EBI only has one "personal" effect, this has two. You could keep either one, but if you are to keep the first DEFINITELY make the effect permanent. A -1 for just a temporary 1000 ATK boost? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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