Guest JoshIcy Posted February 5, 2008 Report Share Posted February 5, 2008 who here remembers embodiment of apophis? or that gadget thing that was a trap monster? well heres a interesting version for them... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted February 5, 2008 Report Share Posted February 5, 2008 The grammar is not good and the OCG is really just, not good. I suggest you check out Apop for some OCG help. But good thought and effort ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted February 5, 2008 Report Share Posted February 5, 2008 fixed, thanks dj.... i kinda brain-farted about that when making this... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chevalier Posted February 5, 2008 Report Share Posted February 5, 2008 Not bad, You probably got the OCG errors,Nice picture and interesting effect, 7.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted February 5, 2008 Report Share Posted February 5, 2008 Once you improve on your grammar, this card will be about perfect! For effort, you did a pretty good job! Next time, just put in a little more time in making your cards, in order to receive higher ratings and positive remarks / opinions from other members. Keep up the good work. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God Kaiba™ Posted February 5, 2008 Report Share Posted February 5, 2008 7.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John Dragon Posted February 5, 2008 Report Share Posted February 5, 2008 some OCG and grammar ..but nice pic .. :D .. 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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