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Cold Shrill


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The story cold shrill is about the story of Roman Talus. A kid turn werewolf. This story is told from a 3rd person view.

 

[spoiler= Chapter 1: Reborn]

Roman Talus entered Jaestro Academy. He went to his locker and got all the things he needed. He walked towards his 1st class. While he was walking through the hallways, with a backpack carrying books that together weighed almost a ton. As he was was walking he saw, the girl of his dreams, Crystal Madison. As they walked past each other he said almost choking but hiding it he said,

 

"Hi Crystal. How's things?" Crystal replied,

 

"Hi Rome, I am doing well, thank you!" Almost everyone except, the headmaster and staff (but his teachers) called him Rome. Rome went through all his classes with speed and quickness. He had the guts to do something he should have done a long time ago. After school he got his stuff and walked up to Crystal and asked,

"Crystal do you want to see a movie with me?"

 

"I'd love to watch a movie with you Rome. What movie?" A close friend of Crystal's thought that them dating were a cute couple. She told Roman all the things Crystal hates/likes so he's get her quick and easy. Her movies were the ones that involved sci-fi. Zombies, Vampires and such.

 

"Clawed Fury, the new werewolf movie?" Rome said.

 

"Clawed Fury, I have been dying to see that! What time?" Crystal said

 

"7:30, I'll pick you up at 7?" Rome replied

 

"Alright. See you" Crystal replied. Rome had butterflies in his stomach instantly. Well later, Rome goes to pick her up, fighting his nervousness. He picks her up in his dad's GMC Yukon. She walks out her car waving bye to her parents, she enters the car.

 

"Ready?" He asked?

 

"All set" *clicks seat belt* Then, as once as she said that, they went to the theaters. This movie was intense. You saw a serial killer who was bitten by a werewolf. He went around killing people with his claws and scarfing their organs, not with guns, like he intended to.

 

After that they got in the car and took a road with apparently no cars on it. Then suddenly, when Rome looked away, had his Crystal pressed a certain button that stopped the car. It made them get out and start walking on a path in the forest she knew.

"Me and my dad used to hike all the time. But, ever since he got that job as a business man, we haven't been hanging out like we you used to." Suddenly she stopped him. Then he asked,

 

"Something wrong Crystal?" Suddenly Crystal changed. Her spine grew twice as big. Her hair grew all over her body. Her clothes became infused in her body. Making her a furry monster.

She was a werewolf. Suddenly, she bit at Rome's wrist. Rome dropped and started shaking and turning on the ground like he was being attacked at all directions.

 

"Yeah, I wanted to tell you this secret. I am werewolf. I know you would tell. So I turned you into a werewolf. So if you tell, I tell." she said in an explaining voice, "I need you to call me we have to talk about something." * Throws a piece of paper with the numbers 555-6723*

 

Roman grew his spine bigger than hers. He had gray fur while she had black. His body almost twice bigger than hers.

 

"Wait how do I change back!?" He asked anxiously.

 

"I knew you'd ask! Before you do that though look what you can do. Chase me!" Suddenly she ran faster than lightening. Then she ran up a tree using only her back paws. Amazing grip.

 

"That does look fun... But I need to Change back and get back to my dad's car." He replied to her.

 

"Alright, what you do is think about it. Which do you choose, if you choose human you must think about your human past and that's what you'll get and vice-versa."

 

Suddenly, Rome stands up and thinks about his past. Asking Crystal out, childhood memories, even his 1st day of school. Once he thought, He was back to his normal height. His clothes were back, and he asked a question that was quite pointless,

"Can we still go out? Now, were a perfect match."

 

"Maybe, just keep your mouth shut.." She said

 

"Will do" He replied like a soldier.

 

Then he remembers a good perk. He remembers all the pain he went through becoming a werewolf. Once he became one, he ran towards his car. Looked under the engine one more time. He was out of oil. Went to his trunk and got some oil, filled it up, closed it and drove off.

 

He called Crystal asking if she wanted a ride, she said she rather run. He tried to talk her out of it, but she wouldn't budge.

 

As soon as he went home he lied on his bed. He felt different. It was if he was reborn and he was more advanced then humans.

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