The Sleeping Dude Posted April 30, 2011 Report Share Posted April 30, 2011 [center][b]Cyber Dragon Archfiend[/b] [img]http://i1234.photobucket.com/albums/ff415/ks2ill34/createcard-1.jpg[/img] [i]Lore: 1 Machine-Type Tuner + Red Dragon Archfiend If this card attacks, destroy all face-down Defense Position monsters your opponent controls at the end of the Damage Step. All monsters you control, except this card, must attack, if possible.[/i] OP'D?/UP'd?/balanced?[/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mecha Love Posted April 30, 2011 Report Share Posted April 30, 2011 It's effect is more or less that of rda. Make it more interesting I'd say....... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Sleeping Dude Posted May 2, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 2, 2011 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♠Decietful King♠ Posted May 2, 2011 Report Share Posted May 2, 2011 That's the exact same effect as RDA just saying Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darj Posted May 2, 2011 Report Share Posted May 2, 2011 This card has huge potential, and yet you came with an effect similar to Red Dragon. First, I suggest to make it a Fusion, Red Dragon+Cyber Dragon, as its name implies, would be nice. And since it would be a DARK Fusion monster, you would be making a great use of "Overload Fusion". Now, naturally it should have an improved effect than Red Dragon, so I suggest you give him an Effect that gets rid of your opponent's Defense Position Monster, I was thinking in something like: "Destroy all Defense Position monsters your opponent controls ". (This effect would be permanent, so any Defense Postion monsters you opponent Summons, or any monster he/she changes to Defense Position are immediately destroyed, while "Cyber Dragon Archfiend" is face-up"). Then, since one single effect is too bland, I suggest to add at least a second effect. Considering that it is a Machine, you could give an ATK-boosting effect. And now that it would be a Synchro Fusion Monsters, I guess you can make it a bit overpowered. What do you think of the next effect? "If this card attacks or is attacked, during the Damage Step you can remove from play 1 (only) Machine-Type monster from your Graveyard, to have this card gain the ATK of that monster until the End Phase." (yeah, I copy/pasted Gae Bulg's Effect, but I think it suits Cyber Dragon Archfiend). A third effect would be nice, but I cannot think in anything else right now. I hope this helps you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Sleeping Dude Posted May 2, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 2, 2011 alright i got you.. This what i followed from Frex's tips Make it a fusion not similar to RDA ATK-boosting second effect Here's a new effect Posting only the Lore because of YCM Uploader failure: [center][i]Cyber Dragon + Red Dragon Archfiend This card cannot be Special Summoned from the Extra Deck except by Fusion Summon with the above cards as Fusion-Material. Once per turn, you can destroy all Defense Position monsters your opponent controls. If this card destroys a monster by battle, it gains the destroyed monster's ATK and can attack once again. During each End Phase, the turn player must return all monsters on the field to their owner's hand that did not attack this turn.[/i][/center] How about now? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boss Z Posted May 2, 2011 Report Share Posted May 2, 2011 [quote name='AngryBird' timestamp='1304315831' post='5183555'] [center][i]Cyber Dragon + Red Dragon Archfiend This card cannot be Special Summoned from the Extra Deck except by Fusion Summon with the above cards as Fusion-Material. Once per turn, you can destroy all Defense Position monsters your opponent controls. If this card destroys a monster by battle, it gains the destroyed monster's ATK and can attack once again. During each End Phase, the turn player must return all monsters on the field to their owner's hand that did not attack this turn.[/i][/center] How about now? [/quote] MUCH Better!! But I have something to say: That is OPed, namely for there is no OPT clause on the attacking again and because the ATK Gain is permanent... if you fix those 2 things it'd be a very boss card that would he the fusion of 2 of YuGiOh's biggest Pro's cards... lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Sleeping Dude Posted May 2, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 2, 2011 Cyber Dragon + Red Dragon Archfiend This card cannot be Special Summoned from the Extra Deck except by Fusion Summon with the above cards as Fusion-Material. Once per turn, you can destroy all Defense Position monsters your opponent controls. If this card destroys a monster by battle, it gains ATK equal to the ATK of the destroyed monster (until the End Phase) and attack once again. During each End Phase, the turn player must return all monsters on the field to their owner's hand that did not attack this turn. I don't know what OPT means but i cleared the until the end phase.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted May 2, 2011 Report Share Posted May 2, 2011 This card is pretty bland. Like said above it is pretty much like RDA. Put in that it deals damage through defense, just to spice it up a little and then add something else that is a bit more creative. I can see that this could be a good card it just needs something more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Sleeping Dude Posted May 3, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 3, 2011 what card did you just read the one image or non image Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Garthfunkle Vii Backwards Posted May 3, 2011 Report Share Posted May 3, 2011 [quote name='Elemental Dragon' timestamp='1304149698' post='5178243'] It's effect is more or less that of rda. Make it more interesting I'd say....... [/quote] [quote name='♠Decietful King♠' timestamp='1304302903' post='5183211'] That's the exact same effect as RDA just saying [/quote] [quote name='Talos the Wind Ninja' timestamp='1304350904' post='5183922'] This card is pretty bland. Like said above it is pretty much like RDA. Put in that it deals damage through defense, just to spice it up a little and then add something else that is a bit more creative. I can see that this could be a good card it just needs something more. [/quote] [quote name='Herman The German' timestamp='1304395523' post='5185346'] beside of the machine tuner i do not see the "cyber dragon" part of all this [/quote] i have to agree with these guys on this help me im horrible abomination that does not deserve to live (that right im human) LOL if you agree with this put it in your SIGNTURE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Sleeping Dude Posted May 3, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 3, 2011 [quote name='Herman The German' timestamp='1304395523' post='5185346'] i have to agree with these guys on this help me im horrible abomination that does not deserve to live (that right im human) LOL if you agree with this put it in your SIGNTURE [/quote] [quote name='AngryBird' timestamp='1304315831' post='5183555'] alright i got you.. This what i followed from Frex's tips Make it a fusion not similar to RDA ATK-boosting second effect Here's a new effect Posting only the Lore because of YCM Uploader failure: [center][i]Cyber Dragon + Red Dragon Archfiend This card cannot be Special Summoned from the Extra Deck except by Fusion Summon with the above cards as Fusion-Material. Once per turn, you can destroy all Defense Position monsters your opponent controls. If this card destroys a monster by battle, it gains the destroyed monster's ATK and can attack once again. During each End Phase, the turn player must return all monsters on the field to their owner's hand that did not attack this turn.[/i][/center] How about now? [/quote] *cough* Blind *cough* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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