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My First Set - Freezecore Dragons [11/???]


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[quote name='Shooting Star Dragon' timestamp='1305083907' post='5202324']
Next three!
[spoiler=Frigid Linker]
Good, good. I like it. Nothing OP'd like the other cards. Completely balanced.
10/10[/spoiler]
[spoiler=North Rain]
Also balanced. But I recommend making the maximum of- Wait, both the posted lore and the card lore say different things D:<
It should be Card(s) if multiple on one card
8/10 until said problem's fixed[/spoiler]
[spoiler=Frozen Wyrm]
Good, good. I like it ^_^ good OCG, good effect, and I just love imagining how f***ed you'd be if a monster with one of those counters couldn't be destroyed by Card Effects XD
10/10[/spoiler]
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Thanks - Yes, I realize that North Rain was originally pretty OP'ed (a bit too much for that matter), so I nerfed it when retyping the lore.
I will see what I can do about the counters from earlier, but...we'll see what happens...

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[center][i]This card can be Special Summoned by sending a Level 4 or lower "Freezecore Dragon" to the Graveyard from the field. If this card was Special Summoned by this effect, destroy a card your opponent controls. During your opponent's Battle Phase, if this card is the target of an attack, destroy the attacking monster and decrease this card's DEF by 300. If this card's DEF reaches 0, increase the ATK by 300. Remove from play 1 face-down card that you control at your End Phase. During your Battle Phase, you can switch all of your opponent's monsters to Defence Position. If you do this, decrease your Life Points by 750.[/i][/center]

Sorry, I found this good picture...I wanted to use it :D

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♫You say whoa, whoa is me, I'm so whoa!♫

[spoiler=Daemon's OCG Fix/Balancing]
This card can be Special Summoned by sending a Level 4 or lower "Freezecore Dragon" [s]to the Graveyard from the field[/s] [i]from the field to the Graveyard[/i]. If this card was Special Summoned by this effect, destroy a [i]Level 3 or lower monster[/i] [s]card[/s] your opponent controls. [i]Once per turn,[/i] during your opponent's Battle Phase, if this card is [i]selected as an[/i] [s]the target of an[/s] attack [i]target[/i], [s]destroy[/s] [i]negate[/i] the attack[s]ing[/s] [s]monster[/s] and decrease this card's DEF by 300. If this card's DEF reaches 0, increase [s]the[/s] [i]this card's[/i] ATK by 300. [s]Remove from play 1 face-down card that you control at your End Phase.[/s] During your Battle Phase, you can switch all of your opponent's monsters to Defence Position. If you do this, decrease your Life Points by 750.[/spoiler]
You'll thank me later
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In my book (since I do play in tournaments), I do have to say that neither is actually usable, both of which are far too slow - the only thing I like about either version is the insta-destruction when Summoned - its whole DEF/ATK modifying effects are useless, seeing as how it's not going to last on the field long enough for either of those effects to work out.
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K, for destruction my rule of thumb is the same level as the monster with the effect or lower, unless it's really hard to summon. That one's easy as f*** to summon <_<

One minute as I look over the next three

Okay...
[spoiler=Glistering Phoenix]
Good, good, but because it'd be a Phoenix, I'd say making one of the required monsters FIRE to SS it, but that's just me ^_^
Nice and balanced, but I don't see any Phoenix traits in the picture, cause a Phoenix would be a bird D:<
To fit its name, I'd say making it a Winged Beast with the effect that it's also treated as a Dragon, or vice-versa
9/10[/spoiler]
[spoiler=Tidal Leviathan]
Ahem, Freeze Wrath? >_> you know the drill *ticks off list*
MAH SPELL AND TRAPS! FROZEN! [/fake fear]
Other than Freeze Wrath, it's good and balanced
9/10[/spoiler]
[spoiler=Delta Freeze]
Interesting. I like it actually ^_^ perfectly balanced
See the irony, a [b]freeze[/b] card with a [b]burn[/b] effect XD
10/10[/spoiler]
And that's all the cards ^_^

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Except for this effect from Neo-Blizzard "When this card destroys a monster by battle, inflict damage to your opponent equal to the destroyed monster's ATK" which could end up being TOO much a burn, everything else is just fine

perhaps change it to half the destroyed monster's ATK?

9.4/10
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Kay, these guys yell LOCKDOWN all over the place.

I found something that made me laugh.

Neo Crystal Summons "Ice Dragons"? I'm pretty sure you meant "Freezecore". xD

Then, maybe it's bring down the whole purpose, but I suggest these exessively locking Counters have a time limit? Like... melt after 3 turns?

EYE LEYKS DIS SET
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[quote name='BlindMonkey' timestamp='1305274787' post='5205224']
Kay, these guys yell LOCKDOWN all over the place.

I found something that made me laugh.

Neo Crystal Summons "Ice Dragons"? I'm pretty sure you meant "Freezecore". xD

Then, maybe it's bring down the whole purpose, but I suggest these exessively locking Counters have a time limit? Like... melt after 3 turns?

EYE LEYKS DIS SET
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Thanks for your comments :)
Yes, I meant Freezecore Dragon... As for your limiting idea, it does kinda defeat the purpose, but I'll see what I can do about it.

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