Hikaru Uchiha Posted May 9, 2011 Report Share Posted May 9, 2011 [center]This is my finished set, which I have dubbed Divine Element Dragons. Hope you like it! [u]Recently edited![/u] [spoiler=Divine Element Dragon (Centerpiece)][img]http://img859.imageshack.us/img859/5400/371988g.jpg[/img] [/spoiler][spoiler=Divine Elemental Dragons][img]http://img828.imageshack.us/img828/7884/371988.jpg[/img] [img]http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/7884/371988.jpg[/img] [img]http://img196.imageshack.us/img196/7884/371988.jpg[/img] [img]http://img857.imageshack.us/img857/7884/371988.jpg[/img] [img]http://img21.imageshack.us/img21/7884/371988.jpg[/img] [img]http://img62.imageshack.us/img62/7884/371988.jpg[/img] [/spoiler][spoiler=Minor Elemental Dragons][img]http://img14.imageshack.us/img14/7884/371988.jpg[/img] [img]http://img26.imageshack.us/img26/7556/371988u.jpg[/img] [img]http://img815.imageshack.us/img815/7556/371988u.jpg[/img] [img]http://img824.imageshack.us/img824/7884/371988.jpg[/img] [img]http://img36.imageshack.us/img36/7884/371988.jpg[/img] [img]http://img5.imageshack.us/img5/466/371988f.jpg[/img] [/spoiler][spoiler=Elemental Dragon Strike (Magic Cards)][img]http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/7884/371988.jpg[/img] [img]http://img10.imageshack.us/img10/3874/371988h.jpg[/img] [img]http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/7884/371988.jpg[/img] [img]http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/7884/371988.jpg[/img] [img]http://img850.imageshack.us/img850/466/371988f.jpg[/img] [img]http://img32.imageshack.us/img32/7884/371988.jpg[/img] [/spoiler][spoiler=Divine Elements (Trap Cards)][img]http://img96.imageshack.us/img96/7884/371988.jpg[/img] [img]http://img703.imageshack.us/img703/2451/371988x.jpg[/img] [img]http://img585.imageshack.us/img585/7884/371988.jpg[/img] [img]http://img40.imageshack.us/img40/6027/371988d.jpg[/img] [img]http://img808.imageshack.us/img808/7884/371988.jpg[/img] [img]http://img3.imageshack.us/img3/7884/371988.jpg[/img][/spoiler][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blue Eyes Awesome Dude Posted May 11, 2011 Report Share Posted May 11, 2011 Very nice! but they need some sort of critical weakness (like how Earthbound Immortals need field cards) or they are too powerful. Aside from that very good. I give this a 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hikaru Uchiha Posted May 12, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 12, 2011 [quote name='Blue Eyes Awesome Dude' timestamp='1305112090' post='5202651'] Very nice! but they need some sort of critical weakness (like how Earthbound Immortals need field cards) or they are too powerful. Aside from that very good. I give this a 7/10 [/quote] I think that the good cards out in the set (the Divine dragons) all have a sufficient disadvantage, especially Divine Element Dragon, which needs 3 monsters of every attribute to already be in the out-of-play pile to be special summoned. I'll keep that in mind though, thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Catterjune Posted May 13, 2011 Report Share Posted May 13, 2011 Divine Element Dragon: Sucks. You have to have eighteen monsters RFG-ed, or 21 if Divine counts. If I even have to ask if Divine counts that means your OCG is bad. That's not even mentioning how underpowered for it's cost the effect is. Divine [Blank] Dragon: Seem way too easy to summon with no drawback and huge attack. Getting cards of certain attribs into the grave is absurdely easy in Yu-Gi-Oh. Minor [Blank] Dragon: Make your borked overpowered dragons more consistent.'Kay. Also, "move a card to your hand" isn't correct OCG. [Blank] Dragon Strike: It's like [url=http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Offerings_to_the_Doomed]Offerings to the Doomed[/url], only more situational and more terrible. Divine [Blank] It either screws you over or screws over you and your opponent. If you draw it without a dragon ready (or with a dragon already in play) you're screwed. Also making an identical card and changing one word in it's effect, one word in it's title, and new art doesn't count as making 25 original cards IMO. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Musicafee Posted May 14, 2011 Report Share Posted May 14, 2011 [quote name='PikaPerson01' timestamp='1305310674' post='5205680'] Divine Element Dragon: Sucks. You have to have eighteen monsters RFG-ed, or 21 if Divine counts. If I even have to ask if Divine counts that means your OCG is bad. That's not even mentioning how underpowered for it's cost the effect is. Divine [Blank] Dragon: Seem way too easy to summon with no drawback and huge attack. Getting cards of certain attribs into the grave is absurdely easy in Yu-Gi-Oh. Minor [Blank] Dragon: Make your borked overpowered dragons more consistent.'Kay. Also, "move a card to your hand" isn't correct OCG. [Blank] Dragon Strike: It's like [url=http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Offerings_to_the_Doomed]Offerings to the Doomed[/url], only more situational and more terrible. Divine [Blank] It either screws you over or screws over you and your opponent. If you draw it without a dragon ready (or with a dragon already in play) you're screwed. Also making an identical card and changing one word in it's effect, one word in it's title, and new art doesn't count as making 25 original cards IMO. [/quote] Do you have to be so critical over a card game? Don't be a geek by critisizing everyone's cards. So they're not perfect. Who cares? He/She's using his/her imagination. Don't belittle him/her! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MysticTopazDragon Posted May 16, 2011 Report Share Posted May 16, 2011 [quote name='Hikaru Uchiha' timestamp='1304950555' post='5198516'] [center]This is my finished set, which I have dubbed Divine Element Dragons. Hope you like it! Wow!!!!!!!!! Where did you get your artworks? I love them, and the cards themselves are awesome. I wanted to ask if you're an artist, usually artists have pics this good. I have some Dragons that I wanted to give some artworks to. Please let me know if you have any suggestions. [img]http://img859.imageshack.us/img859/5400/371988g.jpg[/img] [img]http://img853.imageshack.us/img853/7884/371988.jpg[/img] [img]http://img204.imageshack.us/img204/7884/371988.jpg[/img] [img]http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/7884/371988.jpg[/img] [img]http://img821.imageshack.us/img821/7884/371988.jpg[/img] [img]http://img823.imageshack.us/img823/7884/371988.jpg[/img] [img]http://img854.imageshack.us/img854/7884/371988.jpg[/img] [img]http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/7884/371988.jpg[/img] [img]http://img833.imageshack.us/img833/7884/371988.jpg[/img] [img]http://img841.imageshack.us/img841/7884/371988.jpg[/img] [img]http://img52.imageshack.us/img52/1018/371988a.jpg[/img] [img]http://img688.imageshack.us/img688/7884/371988.jpg[/img] [img]http://img863.imageshack.us/img863/7884/371988.jpg[/img] [img]http://img69.imageshack.us/img69/7884/371988.jpg[/img] [img]http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/7884/371988.jpg[/img] [img]http://img851.imageshack.us/img851/7884/371988.jpg[/img] [img]http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/7884/371988.jpg[/img] [img]http://img703.imageshack.us/img703/7884/371988.jpg[/img] [img]http://img853.imageshack.us/img853/3927/371988q.jpg[/img] [img]http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/7884/371988.jpg[/img] [img]http://img716.imageshack.us/img716/7884/371988.jpg[/img] [img]http://img849.imageshack.us/img849/7884/371988.jpg[/img] [img]http://img813.imageshack.us/img813/7884/371988.jpg[/img] [img]http://img855.imageshack.us/img855/7884/371988.jpg[/img] [img]http://img190.imageshack.us/img190/466/371988f.jpg[/img][/center] [/quote] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simping For Hina Posted May 16, 2011 Report Share Posted May 16, 2011 [quote name='Musicafee' timestamp='1305346559' post='5207032'] Do you have to be so critical over a card game? Don't be a geek by critisizing everyone's cards. So they're not perfect. Who cares? He/She's using his/her imagination. Don't belittle him/her! [/quote] Criticism is the entire reason people post them.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hikaru Uchiha Posted May 17, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 17, 2011 [quote name='PikaPerson01' timestamp='1305310674' post='5205680'] Divine Element Dragon: Sucks. You have to have eighteen monsters RFG-ed, or 21 if Divine counts. If I even have to ask if Divine counts that means your OCG is bad. That's not even mentioning how underpowered for it's cost the effect is. Divine [Blank] Dragon: Seem way too easy to summon with no drawback and huge attack. Getting cards of certain attribs into the grave is absurdely easy in Yu-Gi-Oh. Minor [Blank] Dragon: Make your borked overpowered dragons more consistent.'Kay. Also, "move a card to your hand" isn't correct OCG. [Blank] Dragon Strike: It's like [url=http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Offerings_to_the_Doomed]Offerings to the Doomed[/url], only more situational and more terrible. Divine [Blank] It either screws you over or screws over you and your opponent. If you draw it without a dragon ready (or with a dragon already in play) you're screwed. Also making an identical card and changing one word in it's effect, one word in it's title, and new art doesn't count as making 25 original cards IMO. [/quote] Well it [i]is[/i] a element-focused set, so I need a dragon for every element. And I can't completely change the name for every dragon. I could add some names, but I'm not good at that... I'd probably just use the words for the elements in Latin or something... (i.e. Ventus, Terrus, Obscurus, Aquos, etc.) As for the Trap cards, you obviously wouldn't use them unless you have cards you could still play. The idea for those was that the more Divine Dragons you summon, the more you would limit your opponent's summons. And since you already have the Divine Dragon(s) on the field, you wouldn't need many other monsters because they are all powerhouses. I admit that the Minor Dragons are a bit dull adn simple, but I didn't want the set to be too powerful. I just wanted some powerhouses, and a bunch of combos to go with them/get them out. I've been considering changing the Dragon Strike cards so that they require a specific element OR a dragon, instead of a dragon with a specific attribute. Or requiring that you remove a monster of that attribute from play from either your field or graveyard. As for your complaint about Divine Element Dragon (the centerpiece of the set). DED can only be summoned if there are 3 monsters of every attribute [i]already[/i] in your out-of-play pile (not including Divine... duh...). This make him very hard to summon, which is fair considering he's stronger than Blue-Eyes Ultimate [i]and[/i] has an awesome effect. I'm planning on adding more cards for removing the monsters from play P.S. What is the correct OCG for "moving a card to your hand"? And for the out-of-play pile? I'm still not 100% sure how to word it... P.S.S. What does "borked" mean??? P.S.S.S. @Daemon: I want people to evaluate them and to give me suggestions on how to make them better, not to just criticize them... P.S.S.S.S. @TopazDragon: I drew the art myself on about half of them, but I stole the basic outline from other online pictures. Basically, I copied other peoples' work, then added my own little extras and changed some things around. Or I did the reverse, drawing my own dragon, then adding stuff that other people used in their pictures. A few (2 or 3) of them are originals though. And before anyone asks, yes I made sure they weren't copyrighted. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TCG warrior Posted May 17, 2011 Report Share Posted May 17, 2011 3 small things: 1. You asked for the correct OCG for moving a card to the hand: "add 1 card from your deck to your hand" 2. Graveyard is one word and should be capitilized when using correct OCG, so change "grave yard" into "Graveyard" 3. the set sucks, though most pics are really good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goldenbjr8 Posted May 17, 2011 Report Share Posted May 17, 2011 For a newbie, awesome! For a cardmaker 7/10. Needs better OCG. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hikaru Uchiha Posted May 23, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 23, 2011 [quote name='goldenbjr8' timestamp='1305658237' post='5215078'] For a newbie, awesome! For a cardmaker 7/10. Needs better OCG. [/quote] Thanks! I'm also currently making a new set, [b]The Reptilian Revolution[/b], which I hope to finish sometime within this week or the next one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goldenbjr8 Posted May 25, 2011 Report Share Posted May 25, 2011 [quote name='Hikaru Uchiha' timestamp='1306171135' post='5227287'] Thanks! I'm also currently making a new set, [b]The Reptilian Revolution[/b], which I hope to finish sometime within this week or the next one. [/quote] When will it come out, I am waiting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Sleeping Dude Posted May 25, 2011 Report Share Posted May 25, 2011 ever heard of spoilers my computer freezed in 5 secs to see some bad OCG cards suggestion, before you make a card try to roam in Yu-Gi-Oh! Wikia and read the correct OCG so you won't get bad OCG cards... @Musicafee: [img]http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4098/4776496646_95a783596d.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hikaru Uchiha Posted May 25, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 25, 2011 [quote name='goldenbjr8' timestamp='1306306407' post='5230449'] When will it come out, I am waiting. [/quote] I have about 4 cards out of about 15-20 (don't know how many to make) I'm also working on a set called [b]An Amphibian Assault[/b]. I want to study herpetology* in college. *The study of reptiles and amphibians. [u][b]NOT HERPES![/b][/u] I can't even count how many times people have thought that! I makes me furious! @AngryBird: No, I don't know to make spoilers in this forum. I know how to in other forums, but not this one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TCG warrior Posted May 25, 2011 Report Share Posted May 25, 2011 [quote name='Hikaru Uchiha' timestamp='1306346542' post='5231027'] @AngryBird: No, I don't know to make spoilers in this forum. I know how to in other forums, but not this one. [/quote] [code][spoiler]here your text, images etc.[/spoiler][/code] For as far as I know, most forums use this method for spoilers. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hikaru Uchiha Posted May 25, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 25, 2011 [quote name='TCG warrior' timestamp='1306346914' post='5231033'] [code][spoiler]here your text, images etc.[/spoiler][/code] For as far as I know, most forums use this method for spoilers. [/quote] Oh, that's the same as in the other forums I use. Except they require the word "spoiler" to be in all caps. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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