lmpossible Posted May 25, 2011 Report Share Posted May 25, 2011 [B]This is my first card here I may need a little help, please don't yell at me if I made a obvious mistake, but if I did could you help me fix it?[/b] [img]http://img30.imageshack.us/img30/2420/419511.jpg[/img] LORE: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effects of "Jester of Nothing". This card is not effected by the effects of Spell/Trap cards on your opponents side of the field. Once per turn during your Draw Phase you may draw a extra card. Jester of nothing, my second card. [img]http://img708.imageshack.us/img708/2420/419511.jpg[/img] LORE: This card cannot be special summoned. Once per turn you can discard 1 card from your hand to put 1 "Green Spore" token on this card. You may discard 4 "Green Spore" tokens from this card to Special summon "Eternal Colossal" from your hand, deck or graveyard. This card cannot be destroyed by battle. You take no battle damage from battles involving this card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted May 26, 2011 Report Share Posted May 26, 2011 it looks nothing like a dragon and show us the Jester of Nothing card first Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lmpossible Posted May 26, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 26, 2011 I'm sorry... I was going to make it a dragon and forgot to change it. And my plan was to show you Jester of Nothing after I got a comment. So I guess I'll show it now, just my internet is really slow, it took it about 15 minutes to get me here ><' And will change that bug. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted May 26, 2011 Report Share Posted May 26, 2011 Hmm unaffected by S/T and letting you draw 1 more card during Draw Phase sounds right to me considering its a heavy Level 10 and a [i]nomi[/i] ([i]nomi[/i] means that it says: [b]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned, except by...[/b] meaning it can't ever be revived or Summoned any other way) Although I really need to look at the card that Summons it to have a proper judgment.... I'll wait... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lmpossible Posted May 26, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 26, 2011 Okey, updated it with Jester of Nothing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted May 26, 2011 Report Share Posted May 26, 2011 Ok, I just erased my comment in the other thread so that I can re-post it here with a few changes. (Looking at how your monster is Level 3 here in comparison with the Level 10 over there). [quote=here]This card cannot be special summoned. Once per turn[color=red],[/color] you can discard 1 card from your hand to put 1 [color=red]Green Spore Counter[/color] on this card. You [color=red]can remove[/color] 4 [color=red]Green Spore Counters[/color] from this card to Special [color=red]S[/color]ummon [color=red]1[/color] "Eternal Colossal" from your hand, [color=red]D[/color]eck or [color=red]G[/color]raveyard. This card cannot be destroyed by battle. You take no battle damage from battles involving this card.[/quote] ^Those are the precise grammar corrections for the game. Note that: -Counters and Tokens are not the same. Tokens are monsters that are NOT cards, while Counters are just what the name suggests. In this way, when you state the name of a Token, you need quotations (" ") but that is not the case with the name of Counters. Also, neither Counters or Tokens can be "discarded". -Yugioh always says "[b]can[/b]" instead of "may". Other than that there's only that some words get capitalized and some don't. Now about the card itself ^-^ I think it takes too much time. 4 turns of discarding is a little too much... maybe reduce it to 2 or 3. About the Battle Damage being 0. Maybe it is too much of a wall. Maybe have a specific amount of damage always be inflicted other than 0. Something like making the damage always 800 or something along the lines. It looks fun though. ~hope I was helpful~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lmpossible Posted May 26, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 26, 2011 Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted May 26, 2011 Report Share Posted May 26, 2011 you can't put a token on the card did you mean a counter? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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