Techfiend Posted May 31, 2011 Report Share Posted May 31, 2011 This is a card I just put together very quicklyy and I am problably still going to change it. I know it's not very good, but still, tell me what you think, and please rate and comment. [img]http://img818.imageshack.us/img818/7491/417207.jpg[/img] Lore: When this card is Summoned, place 1 Black Arrow Counter on this card. Once per turn during your Battle Phase, you can move 1 Black Arrow Counter on a face-up monster to another face-up monster. A monster with a Black Arrow Counter is switched to Defense Position and its battle position cannot be changed. In addition, that monster loses 300 DEF during each of its controller's End Phases. If the DEF of a monster with a Black Arrow Counter becomes 0, destroy it and place 1 Black Arrow Counter on this card. If this card is destroyed while it has a Black Arrow Counter, destroy 1 monster your opponent controls during your opponent's next End Phase. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted May 31, 2011 Report Share Posted May 31, 2011 what's is the purpose of the black arrow counters Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
·Toot Posted May 31, 2011 Report Share Posted May 31, 2011 OCG fix When this card is Summoned, place 1 "Black Arrow" Counter on this card. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, your opponent takes 200 damage during his/her Standby Phase. During your Battle Phase, you can place 1 "Black Arrow" Counter on 1 of your opponent's monsters. I was kind of wondering what the counters were for as well All it is a bland card with a burn effect. That's unless you have some sort of archetype going with your black arrow counters. If not... Eh... Pointless The pic is ehish, I used it once before I rate with a 6/10 sorryEDIT: If you add some support to the counter thing, I might give it a higher rating Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Techfiend Posted June 1, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 1, 2011 Thank you for the constructive tips. I changed the effect a bit and changed the picture. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Techfiend Posted June 1, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 1, 2011 Bump! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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thanonyx Posted June 2, 2011 Report Share Posted June 2, 2011 There's already a card called Soul Hunter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted June 2, 2011 Report Share Posted June 2, 2011 [quote name='thanonyx' timestamp='1306976128' post='5247760'] There's already a card called Soul Hunter. [/quote] *Goes to check* ..... oh god! [URL=http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Soul_Hunter]Click Here for Wikia link to that card[/URL] As for the new OCG fix: [quote=Here] When this card is Summoned, place 1 Black Arrow Counter on this card. During your Battle Phase, you can place 1 Black Arrow Counter on 1 monster your opponent controls. A monster with a Black Arrow Counter is switched to Defense Position and cannot be switched. Also, it looses 300 DEF each of its controller's turns. If the DEF of a monster with Black Arrow Counters becomes 0, destroy it and place 1 Black Arrow Counter on this card. If this card is destroyed while it has a Black Arrow Counter, destroy 1 monster your opponent controls during your opponent's End Phase. [/quote] I like the card. It has defensive tactics in it. Only I wish it didn't affect itself too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Techfiend Posted June 3, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 3, 2011 Ok good to know I will change the name then. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Techfiend Posted June 3, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 3, 2011 Bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Techfiend Posted June 4, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 4, 2011 Bump! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
newhat Posted June 4, 2011 Report Share Posted June 4, 2011 So much bump. Seems pretty good. Stalls attacks, gets rid of Spy+, yep yep. Changes itself to Defense Position when it's Summoned, so it's no Stardust killer. Probably won't get killed the turn after it's Summoned. It's a little slow. Consider giving it the ability to move the counter from one monster to another once per turn instead. Something like this: [quote]When this card is Summoned, place 1 Black Arrow Counter on this card. Once per turn during your Battle Phase, you can move 1 Black Arrow Counter on a face-up monster to another face-up monster. A monster with a Black Arrow Counter is switched to Defense Position and its battle position cannot be changed. In addition, that monster loses 300 DEF during each of its controller's End Phases. If the DEF of a monster with a Black Arrow Counter becomes 0, destroy it and place 1 Black Arrow Counter on this card. If this card is destroyed while it has a Black Arrow Counter, destroy 1 monster your opponent controls during your opponent's next End Phase.[/quote] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Techfiend Posted June 4, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 4, 2011 Thanks. I am going to change it again based on your tip. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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