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Yellow-Eyes Purple Dragon


Mitchster234

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Right, unlike everyone else on this page, I will try to help you out. Here are the many flaws on this card:

 

1: It is Divine-attribute. The only realistic cards with that attribute are the playable versions of the God cards.

2: It is Divine-Beast type. The only realistic cards with that type are the playable versions of the God cards.

3: It has a Ritual monster's card frame. If it is a Ritual Monster, it needs to be Summoned by a corresponding Ritual Spell card, and has specific text stating so.

4: Flavor Text and an effect are in the same box. A Ritual monster never has flavor text.

5: The effect should be stated "This card may attack up to six times per Battle Phase."

6: Infinity is NEVER used as attack or defense in the actual game. I suggest something a little more manageable with its effect, like 2000-3000.

 

If you have any questions about how to write and make good cards, PM me. And never look at the anime (or at least the original) for card effect help.

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