Loiden Posted June 19, 2011 Report Share Posted June 19, 2011 [img]http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/1400/406641.jpg[/img] This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned from your hand when you take 2000-3000 damage. This cards ATK and DEF are equal to the amount of damage you took. During the End Phase of your turn, you pay 100 Life Points or destroy this card. pic by*Shimmering-Sword on deviantART Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Northern Sage Posted June 19, 2011 Report Share Posted June 19, 2011 [quote name='Loiden' timestamp='1308490376' post='5294896'] [img]http://img198.imageshack.us/img198/1400/406641.jpg[/img] Lore:This card cannot be normal summoned or set. This card can only be spcial summoned when you take 2000-3000 damage. Negate the damage. This cards ATK and DEF are equal to the negated damage. pic by*Shimmering-Sword on deviantART [/quote] OPed. Can be summoned from anywhere, negates any form of damage and turns into a beatstick easily. I think taking out the part where the damage is negated would make it at least a bit less broken. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
newhat Posted June 19, 2011 Report Share Posted June 19, 2011 [quote]Can be summoned from anywhere[/quote] By its wording, it can only be Summoned from the hand as Gorz is. Gorz requires you to take the damage, but it gives you two (usually strong) monsters. This gives you one, but its ATK is always equal to the ATK of the Token Gorz would have given you. This card's like The Golden Apples. The wording should be as follows, I think: [quote]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned when you would take 2000-3000 damage from a battle or a card effect. Special Summon this card from your hand and reduce that damage to 0. This card's ATK and DEF are both equal to the damage you would have taken.[/quote] It's not broken, but it's overpowered. I suggest you add "The effect of 'Damage Titan' can only be used once per Duel." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Loiden Posted June 19, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 19, 2011 updated!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Iaashadow Posted June 19, 2011 Report Share Posted June 19, 2011 like it... sort of. I can see myself using this in a couple of decks. 8/10 good! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bebe3434 Posted June 19, 2011 Report Share Posted June 19, 2011 You might wanna specify where it can be summoned from, and if it can be summoned from anywhere, then you might wanna reduce the summoning effect to once per duel. Other than that its pretty good, its less situational than gorz, but i think the 100 life points during the end phase is unnecessary. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
·Toot Posted June 19, 2011 Report Share Posted June 19, 2011 Correct OCG: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned when you take 2000-3000 damage. This cards ATK and DEF are equal to the amount of damage you took. During the End Phase of each turn, you must pay 100 Life Points (This is not optional). This is kinda Op'ed, but for some reason I'm seeing it Up'ed it doesn't seem all that broken, you just gain a nice 3k atk if your hit with the right amount of damage. You probably have some sort of burn that lets you use gift while you have rainbow life or that other card i can't remember the name to Maybe give it a little more drawback nothing to big because it might cause it to be Up'ed you want the right amount, maybe something that counts as drawback, but would also help the card out o_O I give it a 7.5/10 until the OCG and Op'ed is fixed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Loiden Posted June 20, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 20, 2011 Updated again!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alice Moonflowyr Posted June 20, 2011 Report Share Posted June 20, 2011 [quote name='♣Toot♣' timestamp='1308498287' post='5295173'] Correct OCG: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned when you take 2000-3000 damage. This cards ATK and DEF are equal to the amount of damage you took. During the End Phase of each turn, you must pay 100 Life Points (This is not optional). This is kinda Op'ed, but for some reason I'm seeing it Up'ed it doesn't seem all that broken, you just gain a nice 3k atk if your hit with the right amount of damage. You probably have some sort of burn that lets you use gift while you have rainbow life or that other card i can't remember the name to Maybe give it a little more drawback nothing to big because it might cause it to be Up'ed you want the right amount, maybe something that counts as drawback, but would also help the card out o_O I give it a 7.5/10 until the OCG and Op'ed is fixed [/quote] Hmmm.....I agree with your fix exept I would say "During the End Phase of each turn, this cards controller takes 100 points of damage." <BR>7/10 for the card. It is so cool! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted June 20, 2011 Report Share Posted June 20, 2011 [color=blue] Here's what's wrong with some of the above posts: -When a card specifies "[i]from the Graveyard[/i]" or "[i]from the Deck[/i]", it is understood its from those places. When a card doesn't say, its common sense that its just from the hand because your hand is where your available resources are. The reason the newest OCG (Emperor Wisel) specifies "from the hand" is because it is [b]foolproof[/b] but it shouldn't be needed at all. You aren't using the newest OCG so with more reason you shouldn't add such obvious statement. -"[i]During the End Phase of each turn"[/i] implies that you will be paying during both players' End Phases. Not sure if that was your intention but but that's what it does right now. Now to your OCG fix from me: [/color][quote=Effect] This card cannot be [b]N[/b]ormal [b]S[/b]ummoned or [b]S[/b]et. This card can only be [b]S[/b]p[b]e[/b]cial [b]S[/b]ummoned when you take 2000-3000 damage. Negate the damage. This card[b]'s[/b] ATK and DEF are equal to the negated damage. [/quote][color=blue] As part of the OCG fix, you only need one question mark on each ATK and DEF stats. I didn't change the "2000-3000" part because its understood and the other way is unnecessarily long in comparison. Not sure where it stands in balance though. Looks overpowered but at the same time not as useful as Gorz. I'll just let it be. When comparing its a little different in a lot of ways even though the idea was the same. [/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Loiden Posted June 22, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 22, 2011 updated!does someone like the new effect?I made a new effect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted June 26, 2011 Report Share Posted June 26, 2011 [s]Good to see that all my suggestions and comments were completely ignored and passed by. That the "from the hand" part written for fools to understand was implemented after all and that ATK/DEF still has four question marks each when only one should be there. ¬_¬[/s] Card is ok (in balance). People compare it with Gorz but this card has many differences. -It will only be 1 monster and not monster + token with high ATK like Gorz is. -It is a semi-nomi unlike Gorz, Tragoedia, or Battle Fader. -Instead of an extra effect, it has a cost to be paid continuously. Not much of a cost, but a cost nonetheless. -You need to receive a specific amount of damage. If you get attacked by a bunch of 1900 ATK monsters it will be really funny. Same if you get attacked by 5000 ATK monster. ....... actually, I call underpowered. Its good that its not on pair with Gorz considering Gorz is broken, but still underpowered. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SNASHU Posted July 17, 2011 Report Share Posted July 17, 2011 i would use this card in my battle aswell... i think it is really good!! the effect is usefull, i like the picture... it suits it. i give this a 8/10 WELL DONE BUDDY Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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