Classic Posted June 23, 2011 Report Share Posted June 23, 2011 [font="Century Gothic"][color="#A0522D"][size="1.5"][center][b]Well this card was inspired by the picture... somehow o.o xD. I may make a Arch Type if its liked or... just because i feel like it xD. ✖ Abhorrent Creature - Vex ✖ [IMG]http://i677.photobucket.com/albums/vv140/gefhx/ABCR-AC1-1.png[/IMG] [Spoiler=✖ Effect ✖] Cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. If this card is in your hand while your opponent activates a Spell or Trap Card: You can negate the activation of that card, and Tribute 1 monster you control; Special Summon this card (from your hand). Once per turn: You can activate 1 of the following effects; ● Discard 1 Spell or Trap Card: Equip 1 of your opponent's Set Spell or Trap Card to this card as an Equip Card with no effect (it is moved to your Spell and Trap Zone. ● Discard 1 card: Destroy 1 card equipped to this card by its own effect and inflict 500 damage to your opponent.[/spoiler] ✖ Abhorrent Creature - Vehemence ✖ [IMG]http://i677.photobucket.com/albums/vv140/gefhx/ABCR-AC002.png[/IMG] [Spoiler=✖ Effect ✖]During your opponent's Draw Phase, if you control no monsters: Discard 1 card; Special Summon this card (from your hand). When this card is Normal Summoned or Special Summoned by its own effect: Draw 1 card. Depending on which type of card you drew activate one of the following Effects: ● Spell: Destroy all Trap cards on the field; gain 200 Life Points for each card destroyed. ● Trap: Destroy all Spell cards on the field; inflict 200 damage to your opponent for each card destroyed. ● Monster: Destroy all face-up monsters on the field (including this card); both players draw cards until they have 6 cards in thier hand.[/spoiler] [/b][/center][/size][/color][/font] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ЯчυКδ ңґεηđдϊ Posted June 23, 2011 Report Share Posted June 23, 2011 [b]This card[/b] [b]c[/b]annot be Normal Summoned or Set. [b]This card cannot be Special Summoned, except by its own effect.[/b] If your opponent activates a Spell or Trap card: You can negate the activation of that card, and Tribute 1 monster you control; Special Summon this card (from your hand). Once per turn: You can discard 1 Spell or Trap card; Equip one of your opponent's Set Spell or Trap card's to this card as an Equip card with no effect (it is moved to your Spell and Trap Zone.) Once per turn: You can discard 1 card; Destroy 1 card Equipped to this card by its own effect and inflict 500 damage to your opponent. That's the only thing I seen that needed correction. Nice pic and I'd say make the archtype it would be entertainin. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Classic Posted June 23, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 23, 2011 [size="1.5"][color="#A0522D"][font="Century Gothic"][center]Thanks for rate, and fix but your fix is incorrect, thats the newest OCG look 'Meklord Emporer - Wisel' up on Yugioh Wikia. But once again thanks for rate ^^.[/center][/font][/color][/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ЯчυКδ ңґεηđдϊ Posted June 23, 2011 Report Share Posted June 23, 2011 [quote name='Classic' timestamp='1308867306' post='5305985'] [size="1.5"][color="#A0522D"][font="Century Gothic"][center]Thanks for rate, and fix but your fix is incorrect, thats the newest OCG look 'Meklord Emporer - Wisel' up on Yugioh Wikia. But once again thanks for rate ^^.[/center][/font][/color][/size] [/quote] God I hate all this new OCG... But yea your right. Haha. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Classic Posted June 23, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 23, 2011 [font="Century Gothic"][color="#556B2F"][size="1.5"][center]Yeh but eventually we'll be used to it.. xD. I also hate it xD. But my reasoning is IMO its a bit more confusing.[/center][/size][/color][/font] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted June 23, 2011 Report Share Posted June 23, 2011 OCG FIX as i know: If this card is in your hand while your opponent activates a Spell or Trap Card: You can negate the activation of that card, and Tribute 1 monster you control; Special Summon this card (from your hand). Once per turn: You can discard 1 Spell or Trap Card; equip 1 of your opponent's Set Spell or Trap Card to this card as an Equip Card with no effect (it is moved to your Spell and Trap Zone. Once per turn: You can discard 1 card; destroy 1 card equipped to this card by its own effect and inflict 500 damage to your opponent. It is rather odd when you use the Spell or Trap Card equipped to this card and you destroy it during the same turn. I would say that usually word "Once per turn" is used once in 1 monster's effect. But it is up to you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Classic Posted June 23, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 23, 2011 [color=blue][center][font="Century Gothic"][size="1.5"]You don't need to destroy it the same turn you take it o.o. Those are 2 Separate effects o.o maybe ill make it Once per turn you can activate 1 of the following effects... EDIT: Edited Effect[/size][/font][/center][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted June 23, 2011 Report Share Posted June 23, 2011 Well then it looks better now, . I think it is fine as it is 9.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
◊ Hᵃᵏᵃˢᵉ ◊ Posted June 23, 2011 Report Share Posted June 23, 2011 I like the card. It has good OCG, and the Effect is actually quite useful at times. I would love to see more of this archetype your thinking of. Keep up the card making, MyStiK. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Classic Posted June 23, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 23, 2011 [color="#A0522D"][font="Century Gothic"][size="1.5"][center]Thanks for rate! ^^[/center][/size][/font][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaster_rogue Posted June 24, 2011 Report Share Posted June 24, 2011 perfect, I love it the pic the effect everything is amazing, looks like really good I can't give another grade... 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Classic Posted June 24, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 24, 2011 [size="1.5"][font="Century Gothic"][color="#A0522D"][center]@ Mystik Sorry I missed you post xD. Glad you like the card ^^. I will probably think up another effect for another card after i get on my comp (IPad is not great for typing lol) @ jester Thanks fir the rate, glad you like it! ^^[/center][/color][/font][/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Classic Posted June 24, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 24, 2011 [font="Century Gothic"][size="1.5"][color="#A0522D"][center]Bump. I plan on adding another card within the next hour or two. EDIT: Added another card. IMO its good but not as good as the first Q.Q (xD) [/center][/color][/size][/font] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Classic Posted June 25, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 25, 2011 [font="Century Gothic"][color="#A0522D"][size="1"][center]Bump o.O[/center][/size][/color][/font] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Classic Posted June 27, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 27, 2011 [font="Century Gothic"][color="#A0522D"][size="1.5"][center]Gimeh Cawmints.bump[/center][/size][/color][/font] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Classic Posted June 27, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 27, 2011 [font="Century Gothic"][color="#000000"][center]Bump. Will Add a card when I get to my comp.[/center][/color][/font] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
newhat Posted June 28, 2011 Report Share Posted June 28, 2011 Does Vex negate as a cost for its Summon? 'Cause that's disturbing. Aside from the fact that you need room to take the cards, the stealing effect might as well just destroy. The third effect is pointless, since your opponent already can't use the card you took. Vehemence is a bit too good. Its cost is eliminated when it's Summoned. The destructive effects only affect face-up cards, I assume. The third effect is broken, since you can abuse it with a small hand to gain advantage. Particularly since it will still be the Draw Phase and you can bring out another Vehemence. I don't know what to think of the first one. It depends if it negates as a cost. The second one would be too good even at 0 ATK/DEF. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Classic Posted June 28, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 28, 2011 [font="Century Gothic"][color="#808000"][size="1.5"][center]First Card Comment: By the third effect, do you mean 'it is moved to your Spell and Trap Zone'? If so that's there as a drawback; as in it takes up one of your Zones. And yes it negates it but you also need to Tribute a monster. Second Card Comments: GAH! I just realized that. And maybe I will make it 'each player draws 3 cards' as it's third effect. And on the bring out another Vehemence remark, maybe it was Limited =P. But ya, i plan on editing this card when possible currently half asleep in 2 forearm/Wrist. Fiberglass casts, on my iPad >.<[/center][/size][/color][/font] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted June 28, 2011 Report Share Posted June 28, 2011 Both cards have effects that would screw your opponent. I love the effects you did to them. I love the high DEF points, too. Keep them coming. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Classic Posted June 28, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 28, 2011 [font="Century Gothic"][color="#A0522D"][size="1.5"][center]Thanks for feedback ^^. Glad you like them,[/center][/size][/color][/font] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Classic Posted June 29, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 29, 2011 [font="Century Gothic"][color="#483D8B"][center]Bump.[/center][/color][/font] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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