BFG Studios Posted June 24, 2011 Report Share Posted June 24, 2011 Read [size="3"][b]'About this Card'[/b][/size] below the card to see why i made this card [size="3"][b]Please help me choose which 1 is better[/b][/size] [color="#FF0000"][size="4"][b]#1[/b][/size][/color] [img]http://img15.imageshack.us/img15/2952/390021.jpg[/img] Lore: [size="4"][b] When this card is Summoned, you can banish up to 8 monsters from your Graveyard. This card gains 500 ATK for each monster banished. When this card is destroyed, return all monsters banished by this card's effect to the Graveyard, and banish this card. If this card's ATK was 3000 or more, the monsters used stay banished. [/b][/size] [color="#FF0000"][size="4"][b]#2[/b][/size][/color] [img]http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/8885/390021n.jpg[/img] Lore: [size="4"][b] When this card is Summoned, you can banish up to 8 monsters from your Graveyard. This card gains 500 ATK for each monster banished. This card then loses 250 ATK for each other turn it is on the field. When this card is destroyed, return all monsters banished by this card's effect to the Graveyard, and banish this card. [/b][/size] (not the best with OCG... see any errors? let me know!) (is this card OP'd? ... let me know how!) [size="3"][u][b]About this Card[/b][/u][/size] This card is a cool plant monster that can do something cool (i think) Like real plants, this card grows (gains ATK) by getting its nutrients (monsters) When a real plant dies, it doesn't come back... thus this card being banished and having everything returned its also a Plant because the girl in the pic is green and in the forest... but still Artwork by: JazinKay Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Strawberry Posted June 24, 2011 Report Share Posted June 24, 2011 Minor OCG problem: "send all monsters banished by this effect back to the Graveyard and banish this card." Love the card though. 10/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BFG Studios Posted June 24, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 24, 2011 [quote name='SmileyOfChaos' timestamp='1308915489' post='5307227'] Minor OCG problem: "send all monsters banished by this effect back to the Graveyard and banish this card." Love the card though. 10/10. [/quote] thanks for the quick fix lol, and thanks for the rate... like i said, im not amazing with ocg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BFG Studios Posted June 25, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 25, 2011 any other thoughts? bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BFG Studios Posted June 25, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 25, 2011 Seriously, no one likes Plants? give more feedback! (plz) bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hyaku_hachi Posted June 25, 2011 Report Share Posted June 25, 2011 Isn't this card too OP? I think there should be a limit to how many monsters you can banish because this will totally own everything if you have plenty monsters in your graveyard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BFG Studios Posted June 25, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 25, 2011 I changed the OCG... use up to 8 monster for a nice 4000 ATK, if you want to do so Still OP'd? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BFG Studios Posted June 26, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 26, 2011 any other thoughts, anyone? bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ЯчυКδ ңґεηđдϊ Posted June 26, 2011 Report Share Posted June 26, 2011 For a level 2 it's OP'd either increase level or decrease monster limit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BFG Studios Posted June 26, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 26, 2011 I'll make it Level 4 because then it would be at risk of being put into DEF Position Is it still OP'd?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BFG Studios Posted June 27, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 27, 2011 any other feedback anyone? bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Lez Posted June 27, 2011 Report Share Posted June 27, 2011 Flip face-up = sort of Summoning, right? Imo OP'd only need 8 monsters in your Graveyard to summon a monster with 4000 ATK, 7 for a 3500..6 for a 3000... How about a Drawback? only if Special Summoned for example? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BFG Studios Posted June 27, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 27, 2011 I think being Special Summoned would make it a lot better in balance... thanks for the idea Trust me, when i have the time, i will work on changing the OCG and lore Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Lez Posted June 27, 2011 Report Share Posted June 27, 2011 No Problem^^ Drawbacks are my speciality xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
newhat Posted June 28, 2011 Report Share Posted June 28, 2011 This is altered OCG: [quote]When this card is Summoned, you can banish up to 8 monsters from your Graveyard. This card gains 500 ATK for each monster banished. When this card is destroyed, return all monsters banished by this card's effect to the Graveyard. and banish this card.[/quote] You don't need to say "its ATK is 0 unless it's face-up". That is automatically the case. It's average. To become powerful, this card needs lots of set-up, or Magical Merchant. If Magical Merchant's used, this card's ATK might hit 4000. The returning effect is also nice; it keeps your mojo flowing unless this monster's bounced or removed. Number of cards I've seen with this image: 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BFG Studios Posted June 30, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 30, 2011 i'm still not sure if this card is still OP'd, but you guys let me know... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Garthfunkle Vii Backwards Posted June 30, 2011 Report Share Posted June 30, 2011 a lv 4 that can get up 4000 atk with no cost well Gren Maju Da Eiza is lv 3 and as we all know he can be come quite powerfull with more or less no cost at all Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BFG Studios Posted June 30, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 30, 2011 [quote name='Herman The German' timestamp='1309411464' post='5321532'] a lv 4 that can get up 4000 atk with no cost well Gren Maju Da Eiza is lv 3 and as we all know he can be come quite powerfull with more or less no cost at all [/quote] i knew some drawbacks were needed... i came up with that new effect at the end. Hopefully it isn't confusing and the OCG isn't wrong Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Garthfunkle Vii Backwards Posted June 30, 2011 Report Share Posted June 30, 2011 stay bannished HHHHHHHHHHHMMMMMMMMMMMMM ..................... i say ................. aproved can you look at my new command archtype ??? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BFG Studios Posted July 1, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 1, 2011 added 1 other thing to the OCG, is it still OP'd? (hopefully not) is the OCG wrong? (hopefully it isn't) is the card good??? bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BFG Studios Posted July 2, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 2, 2011 *bump* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BFG Studios Posted July 2, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 2, 2011 anybody? i would just like at least 1 more piece of feedback (hopefully possitive ) *bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Marco Polo Posted July 2, 2011 Report Share Posted July 2, 2011 Since when "banish" is correct OCG? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BFG Studios Posted July 3, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 3, 2011 [quote name='Ilan' timestamp='1309632570' post='5328366'] Since when "banish" is correct OCG? [/quote] at least since the 24th of May, 2011 and a few other things have been changed too... check the link for more! http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/250644-konami-new-card-grammar-rules/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LRPXD Posted July 3, 2011 Report Share Posted July 3, 2011 I say it's a good card but needs drawbacks I assume you intend to keep it a 4-star monster my suggestions are: -instead of it increasing by 500 make it 300 or 350 -OR "This card gains 500 ATK for each [b]Plant-Type[/b] monster(s) banished." -OR "decrease this card's ATK and DEF by 250 each turn". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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