Spoon Posted July 3, 2011 Report Share Posted July 3, 2011 I almost forgot I used that tag a while ago... oh well, time to revive it [center][IMG]http://img40.imageshack.us/img40/3217/screwo.jpg[/IMG] [quote]2 Level 2 monsters This card cannot be destroyed by card effects while it has Xyz Material Monsters. Once per turn, when your opponent's monster declares an attack: Banish 1 Normal Trap Card in your Graveyard; Negate the attack. During your opponent's turn: You can Detach 1 Xyz Material Monster from this card; Activate the effect of 1 Trap Card banished by this card's effect.[/quote][/center] Also: More LoL art! Edit: Just noticed that I forgot the "Once per turn" clause for the second effect... does anybody care? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CDDRodrigo Posted July 3, 2011 Report Share Posted July 3, 2011 I'd run this over Gachi Gachi in Ojamas any day. Amazing. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Resident Fascist Posted July 3, 2011 Report Share Posted July 3, 2011 [center][size="4"][b]DO WANT[/b][/size][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Althemia Posted July 3, 2011 Report Share Posted July 3, 2011 [font="Trebuchet MS"]Torrential Tribute three times in a single duel seems... =| But I have to say, this is a great Exceed. Good job. Also, yay Fiddlesticks.[/font] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BFG Studios Posted July 3, 2011 Report Share Posted July 3, 2011 good effect first of all, great Xyz template and artwork, i lol'ed at the name;) , and I love Zombies! (not to sure why it's WIND though... oh well, not that important) 9.5 / 10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xmon Posted July 3, 2011 Report Share Posted July 3, 2011 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glogatha Posted July 3, 2011 Report Share Posted July 3, 2011 8/10 :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spoon Posted July 3, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 3, 2011 [quote name='CDDRodrigo' timestamp='1309652187' post='5329024']I'd run this over Gachi Gachi in Ojamas any day. Amazing. 8/10[/quote] Well, up until now, all Rank 2 monsters pretty much sucked... so it's not that hard to run [i]anything[/i] over Gachi Gachi [quote name='Ｔｈｅ ｂｌａｚｉｎｇ ＭＡＲＳ' timestamp='1309652470' post='5329036'][center][size="4"][b]DO WANT[/b][/size][/center][/quote] Me too, me too.... [quote name='Kokonoe' timestamp='1309654134' post='5329114'][font="Trebuchet MS"]Torrential Tribute three times in a single duel seems... =| But I have to say, this is a great Exceed. Good job. Also, yay Fiddlesticks.[/font][/quote] I know, 3 Torrential Tribute/Mirror Force may be overdoing it... does somebody know an efficient way to say "You can only use each of this banished cards once"? [quote name='BFG Studios' timestamp='1309664233' post='5329523']good effect first of all, great Xyz template and artwork, i lol'ed at the name;) , and I love Zombies! (not to sure why it's WIND though... oh well, not that important) 9.5 / 10 [/quote] Name was actually an accident. I wanted to write something with "Scarecrow" and started with "Screw" for some odd reason... the name was born [quote name='Xmon' timestamp='1309671556' post='5329773']8.5/10[/quote] [quote name='Shattered Sky' timestamp='1309674564' post='5329839']8/10 :3[/quote] Thank you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted July 3, 2011 Report Share Posted July 3, 2011 I love the card. Its name made me lol. It kinda reminds me of Scrap-Iron Scarecrow with its ability to negate attacks. I am also not quite sure why it is WIND, although I also don't see why not... Anyway very balanced and original. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SirtyStan Posted July 3, 2011 Report Share Posted July 3, 2011 Alright. Minor (MINOR) OCG fixes here. And yes, I care about the "Once per turn" clause. [b]When this card has no attached Xyz Material Monsters: This card cannot be destroyed by card effects.[/b] Once per turn, when your opponent's monster declares an attack: [b]You can[/b] Banish 1 Normal Trap Card in your Graveyard; Negate the attack. [b]Once per turn,[/b] during your opponent's turn: You can Detach 1 Xyz Material Monster from this card; Activate the effect of 1 [b]appropriate Normal[/b] Trap Card banished by this card's effect. Blargh. I changed the first sentence to match the new OCG and I added the "You can" clause in front of the first effect because: What if you don't want to discard a Normal Trap Card? And what will happen if you have no Normal Trap Cards in your Graveyard? Or is it a drawback? Also, I added the "Once per turn," clause and added the "appropriate Normal" clause because you can't activate a Magic Cylinder on your opponent's Main Phase 1. Other than those minor mistakes, it looks like a great card! 9.4/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Northern Sage Posted July 3, 2011 Report Share Posted July 3, 2011 [quote name='Spoon' timestamp='1309652032' post='5329016'] I almost forgot I used that tag a while ago... oh well, time to revive it [center][IMG]http://img40.imageshack.us/img40/3217/screwo.jpg[/IMG] [/center] Also: More LoL art! Edit: Just noticed that I forgot the "Once per turn" clause for the second effect... does anybody care? [/quote] [s]Since the monster doesn't have any screw-related things on it's body, the name can lead to some... unusual euphemism.[/s] Anyways, the trap thing is kind of overpowered, since it can lead to overuse with cards like COTH. 2 COTHs during your opponent's turn could probably turn into some insane OTK. Or maybe I'm wrong. Love the card otherwise. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spoon Posted July 6, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 6, 2011 [quote name='Nightwing the Dark Falcon' timestamp='1309709408' post='5330484'] I love the card. Its name made me lol. It kinda reminds me of Scrap-Iron Scarecrow with its ability to negate attacks. I am also not quite sure why it is WIND, although I also don't see why not... Anyway very balanced and original.[/quote] It is WIND because I say so... easy as that [quote name='Sirty_stan' timestamp='1309725395' post='5331084'] Alright. Minor (MINOR) OCG fixes here. And yes, I care about the "Once per turn" clause.[/quote] Alright, guess I'll add it... or some other form of restriction I can find. [quote]Blargh. I changed the first sentence to match the new OCG and I added the "You can" clause in front of the first effect because: What if you don't want to discard a Normal Trap Card? And what will happen if you have no Normal Trap Cards in your Graveyard? Or is it a drawback? Also, I added the "Once per turn," clause and added the "appropriate Normal" clause because you can't activate a Magic Cylinder on your opponent's Main Phase 1. Other than those minor mistakes, it looks like a great card![/quote] Well, limiting it to Normal Traps only has mainly practical uses. Continuous cards can't really stay on the field if activated this way, and using a Spell Speed 3 Trap with a monster effect that can only be, by definition, Spell Speed 2 or lower, could end in some problematic ruling questions. About the activation problem: I think "appropriate" doesn't help here, the main problem is that you really have to activate the card (with the right timing). It should also, if worded this way, ignore costs (like discarding a card for Raigeki Break). For now (because I don't know any better) let us assume that the effect how it's currently worded would ignore costs, but not conditions (such as Mirror Force's "When an opponent's monster attacks"). [quote name='Northern' timestamp='1309725821' post='5331090'] [s]Since the monster doesn't have any screw-related things on it's body, the name can lead to some... unusual euphemism.[/s] Anyways, the trap thing is kind of overpowered, since it can lead to overuse with cards like COTH. 2 COTHs during your opponent's turn could probably turn into some insane OTK. Or maybe I'm wrong. Love the card otherwise. [/quote] COTH is a Continuous Trap -> Doesn't work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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