Dream Guardian Luna

[Just Crouton]

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[color="#2F4F4F"][b]Dream Guardian Luna[/b][/color]
3 Level 1 Monsters
Once per turn: You can detach of this card's Xyz Materials; All other monsters you control gain ATK equal to this card's ATK until the End Phase. Each time a Level 1 monster you control is destroyed by battle, you can place it under this card as Xyz Material. When this card is removed from the field: You can Special Summon 2 Level 1 monsters from your Deck.

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[color="#FF8C00"][b]Pastel Magick[/b][/color]
This card's Level is also treated as 1. Rank 1 Xyz Monsters you control cannot be destroyed by battle. When this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard: Select 1 Level 1 monster; Place it under a face-up Rank 1 Xyz Monster you control as Xyz Material.

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[color="#FF8C00"][b]Magician of Hope[/b][/color]
Once per turn: You can discard 1 card to Special Summon 2 Level 1 monsters from your Deck; Their effects are negated and they cannot be used for a Synchro Summon. While this card is Xyz Material: The Xyz Monster gains 800 ATK.

[Just Crouton]

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[Just Crouton]

[Not-so-Radiant Arin]

lol Don't be discouraged by the lack of posts: people hardly ever spend their time here in this forum. And for us lucky few who do, we'd be happy to comment on your cards.

Ok, so...

I'm not that big of a fan of Xyz monsters yet, but I could tell right off the bat that, if this card were real, I would not hesitate to put it in my Deck, with some slight modifications. First, I believe the Pastel card has a bit much attack for a level 4 that can also be treated as a level 1. Maybe tone it down by 100 or 200. The Magician of Hope card is OP not because of the fact that the monsters can't be Synchro Material, but if you use Magician of Hope's effect to Special Summon 2 more, and them use them for a Exceed Summon, the Exceed monster would be hopelessly powerful (800 + 800 + 800 + 1200 = 3600). That's all I gotta say.

It looks promising, especially the artwork and the OCG.

Breakdown:

8/10 - Concept and originality
10/10 - OCG
8/10 - Artwork

Total: 8.66/10 (Excellent)

[MibeR]

3 Level 1 Monsters
Once per turn: You can detach of this card's Xyz Materials; All other monsters you control gain ATK equal to this card's ATK until the End Phase. Each time a Level 1 monster you control is destroyed by battle, you can place it under this card as Xyz Material. When this card is removed from the field: You can Special Summon 2 Level 1 monsters[b] from your Dec[/b]k. i thought it was its Xyz Material

This card's Level is also treated as 1. Rank 1 Xyz Monsters you control cannot be destroyed by battle. When this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard: [b]Select 1 Level 1 monste[/b]r; Place it under a face-up Rank 1 Xyz Monster you control as Xyz Material. >> From what?

Once per turn: You can discard 1 card to Special Summon 2 Level 1 monsters from your Deck; Their effects are negated and they cannot be used for a Synchro Summon. While this card is Xyz Material: The Xyz Monster gains 800 ATK. >> This card is super cute

[ragnarok1945]

for Luna, the only thing I'd change is the special summoning effect at the end

maybe consider putting some restrictions on the summoned monsters this way?

9.4/10