Angel of Silence Posted July 17, 2011 Report Share Posted July 17, 2011 I always liked the cards that dealt with Chain Links. So here's something similar: Chained Plasma Dragon [img]http://img594.imageshack.us/img594/7219/107744w.jpg[/img] Lore: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by it's own effect. When there is a Chain Link of 3 or more cards, you can Special Summon this card from your hand. Your opponent cannot activate cards in response to this Special Summon. Whenever there is a Chain Link of 2 or more cards, discard 1 card to increase this card's ATK by the amount of cards in the chain x 400. If this card's ATK becomes greater than 3200, decrease this card's Level by 2 and reduce this card's ATK to 0. Once per turn, when there is a Chain Link of cards, you can select 1 card in that Chain Link and Negate that card's effect and destroy it. If this card is used as a Synchro Material Monster, add this card to your Deck. Then shuffle your Deck. Comments and criticism welcomed. OCG updated thanks to Mr. Striker. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Varionius Posted July 17, 2011 Report Share Posted July 17, 2011 Cool pic, awesome effect, I can see a good use of this card. 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 17, 2011 Report Share Posted July 17, 2011 Chain toying, quite the impressive effect I doubt it'll get up to the 3200 atk mark so easily anyway, so it should be balanced out 9.2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel of Silence Posted July 17, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 17, 2011 Bumpity Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nathanael D. Striker Posted July 17, 2011 Report Share Posted July 17, 2011 [spoiler=Old OCG]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by it's own effect. When there is a Chain Link of 3 or more cards, you can Special Summon this card from your hand. Your opponent cannot activate cards in response to this Special Summon. Whenever there is a Chain Link of 2 or more cards, discard 1 card to increase this card's ATK by the amount of cards in the chain x 400. If this card's ATK becomes greater than 3200, decrease this card's Level by 2 and reduce this card's ATK to 0. Once per turn, when there is a Chain Link of cards, you can select 1 card in that Chain Link and Negate that card's effect and destroy it. If this card is used as a Synchro Material Monster, add this card to your Deck. Then shuffle your Deck.[/spoiler] [spoiler=New OCG]Cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. Must be Special Summoned by it's own effect, and cannot be Special Summoned other ways. When there is a Chain Link of 3 or more cards: You can Special Summon this card (from your hand). Your opponent cannot activate cards in response to this Special Summon. Whenever there is a Chain Link of 2 or more cards: Discard 1 card; Increase this card's ATK by the amount of cards in the chain x 400. If this card's ATK becomes greater than 3200: Decrease this card's Level by 2 and reduce this card's ATK to 0. Once per turn, when there is a Chain Link of cards: You can select 1 card in that Chain Link; Negate that card's effect and destroy it. If this card is used as a Synchro Material Monster: Add this card to your Deck. Then shuffle your Deck.[/spoiler] Playability: 9/10 OCG: 8/10 Balance: 8/10 Creativity: 10/10 Name: 5/5 Pic: 5/5 Total: 45/50 Great card Star. I gave both OCG versions since I was nice. I would have only posted the New OCG. Keep it up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel of Silence Posted July 17, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 17, 2011 [quote name='Mr. Striker' timestamp='1310945669' post='5364199'] [spoiler=Old OCG]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by it's own effect. When there is a Chain Link of 3 or more cards, you can Special Summon this card from your hand. Your opponent cannot activate cards in response to this Special Summon. Whenever there is a Chain Link of 2 or more cards, discard 1 card to increase this card's ATK by the amount of cards in the chain x 400. If this card's ATK becomes greater than 3200, decrease this card's Level by 2 and reduce this card's ATK to 0. Once per turn, when there is a Chain Link of cards, you can select 1 card in that Chain Link and Negate that card's effect and destroy it. If this card is used as a Synchro Material Monster, add this card to your Deck. Then shuffle your Deck.[/spoiler] [spoiler=New OCG]Cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. Must be Special Summoned by it's own effect, and cannot be Special Summoned other ways. When there is a Chain Link of 3 or more cards: You can Special Summon this card (from your hand). Your opponent cannot activate cards in response to this Special Summon. Whenever there is a Chain Link of 2 or more cards: Discard 1 card; Increase this card's ATK by the amount of cards in the chain x 400. If this card's ATK becomes greater than 3200: Decrease this card's Level by 2 and reduce this card's ATK to 0. Once per turn, when there is a Chain Link of cards: You can select 1 card in that Chain Link; Negate that card's effect and destroy it. If this card is used as a Synchro Material Monster: Add this card to your Deck. Then shuffle your Deck.[/spoiler] Playability: 9/10 OCG: 8/10 Balance: 8/10 Creativity: 10/10 Name: 5/5 Pic: 5/5 Total: 45/50 Great card Star. I gave both OCG versions since I was nice. I would have only posted the New OCG. Keep it up. [/quote] Thank you! Especially thank you for the Old OCG. I'll update it now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted July 17, 2011 Report Share Posted July 17, 2011 It's pretty useless, actually. :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel of Silence Posted July 17, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 17, 2011 [quote name='Power Play' timestamp='1310946414' post='5364221'] It's pretty useless, actually. :/ [/quote] Would you please explain a little more? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted July 18, 2011 Report Share Posted July 18, 2011 [quote name='Raving Star' timestamp='1310946512' post='5364224'] Would you please explain a little more? [/quote] Apologies for my rather frank approachs to the card. Keep in mind that I review cards in the matter on how they would fare in the metagame. Frankly, I believe that the people in RC should to the same, because that's what RC stands for, Realistic Cards. Anyways, the card is bad because just to Summon it, you have to use 2 of your cards. Sadly, it's not worth it. Furthermore, it's just weak in terms of ATK. The ATK gain is just too situational, because it requires 5+ cards to get a decent ATK for it. Also, the fact that the last effect, being optional, makes it useless as well. Why may you ask? Because it misses the timing. You're already discarding 1 card for the ATK gain, so you've missed the chance to use the negation effect. I might be mistaken on this one, but I'm pretty certain that I'm not. And if I am, well, better luck next time. Lastly, I say this, just get rid of the ATK gaining effect and give the card some bloody decent stats. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LRPXD Posted July 18, 2011 Report Share Posted July 18, 2011 wow I was about to post a Chain Monster until this showed up anyway nice card the effects as always you showed your creativity with the chain links increasing this card ATK equal to the Chain Link is pretty cool. 9.2/10 nicely done sir Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted July 18, 2011 Report Share Posted July 18, 2011 [quote name='LRPXD' timestamp='1310947613' post='5364257'] wow I was about to post a Chain Monster until this showed up anyway nice card the effects as always you showed your creativity with the chain links increasing this card ATK equal to the Chain Link is pretty cool. 9.2/10 nicely done sir [/quote] As I stated before, the way the ATK is raised on this card, is just too inefficient, and with the other problems I brought up, the current version of the card is not worth to take up a slot of the Realistic Cards section. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted July 18, 2011 Report Share Posted July 18, 2011 I like the way you explain it with polite Zandaa ^^, i agree, this card need more base ori ATK. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted July 18, 2011 Report Share Posted July 18, 2011 [quote name='Maha Guns' timestamp='1310949329' post='5364317'] I like the way you explain it with polite Zandaa ^^,[/quote] I'm bothered, not like me to explain it in that way. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LRPXD Posted July 18, 2011 Report Share Posted July 18, 2011 [quote name='Power Play' timestamp='1310948658' post='5364285'] As I stated before, the way the ATK is raised on this card, is just too inefficient, and with the other problems I brought up, the current version of the card is not worth to take up a slot of the Realistic Cards section. [/quote] I know that it's ATK increase isn't going to be a much of a game changer but at least he showed creativity in his card which I find lacking in the RC section but don't get me wrong as much as I hate seeing simple cards with short useful effects some are pretty good and can help change this game. I like it when card makers be creative with their cards like this one its a refresher from the typical RC cards whenever or not it's useful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel of Silence Posted July 18, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 18, 2011 Thanks for the criticism. Good to hear. Anyway: Should I increase the amount of ATK gained per card? I'll make the ATK gain optional as well. That may help it a bit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted July 18, 2011 Report Share Posted July 18, 2011 No, just add some base ATK. For about 2000+ more Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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