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Is it supposed to say "Soul Devourer"?

 

The wording of the card could be fixed like so:

 

This card can only be special summoned by removing 3 Dark monsters in your Graveyard from play. If this card destroys a Defense Position monster as a result of battle, increase your Life Points by half the ATK of the destroyed monster.*

 

Apart from that, I like it! Although the opinion and corrections of a newbie probably don't matter anyway.

 

*changes are in italics

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