ChubbyCheeks Posted July 17, 2011 Report Share Posted July 17, 2011 These are my first cards that I made since I joined Yugiohcardmaker.net Please tell me if I need to change them and I need to make improvements. Please rate, comment, and su....wait its not Youtube >.< [img]http://img692.imageshack.us/img692/9989/449209.jpg[/img] This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set except by Tributing 3 Machine-Type monsters. When this card is Normal Summoned, destroy all monsters on the field. [img]http://img714.imageshack.us/img714/9989/449209.jpg[/img] If this card is used for a Synchro Summon, this card can also be treated as a Non-Tuner monster. [img]http://img824.imageshack.us/img824/9989/449209.jpg[/img] This card can be Normal Summoned without Tributing. If you do, destroy 1 monster on your side of the field. Once per turn, you can pay 500 Life Points to destroy 1 face-down card on the field. This card can be used as 2 Tributes for a LV. 8 monster or higher. If you use this effect, pay 500 Life Points [img]http://img193.imageshack.us/img193/9989/449209.jpg[/img] When this card is Normal Summoned, all Machine-Type monsters on your side of the field gain 500 ATK. You can destroy 1 Spell card on your side of the field to Special Summon 1 Level 4 Machine-Type monster from your hand. I hope you guys like it , I know the images are bad and the cards are random, but I just started so Sorry :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyng's Old Account Posted July 17, 2011 Report Share Posted July 17, 2011 #1 destroys itself. #2 would be very useful. #3 is very unique. Nice job. #4 is OK. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not-so-Radiant Arin Posted July 17, 2011 Report Share Posted July 17, 2011 [quote]I know the images are bad and the cards are random, but I just started so Sorry :/[/quote] That's alright, we all were beginners at one point. [quote]This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set except by Tributing 3 Machine-Type monsters. When this card is Normal Summoned, destroy all monsters on the field. [/quote] This card doesn't seem all that bad. It's a Beast King Barbaros, except it only destroys monsters on the field. I will have to say though, having 3500 ATK and 4000 DEF that destroys all monsters on the field and not being able to Special Summon it back is baad. [quote]If this card is used for a Synchro Summon, this card can also be treated as a Non-Tuner monster.[/quote] I like the idea that this card brings, but unfortunately, I seem to be the only one around to break the bad news to you: this card's effect couldn't really run that great. People might abuse this card's effect for something far worse. [quote]This card can be Normal Summoned without Tributing. If you do, destroy 1 monster on your side of the field. Once per turn, you can pay 500 Life Points to destroy 1 face-down card on the field. This card can be used as 2 Tributes for a LV. 8 monster or higher. [b]If you use this effect, pay 500 Life Points.[/b][/quote] On this card, you would spell out "LV" as "Level". Minor OCG problem. Actually, I'd consider it medium OCG problem, because there are people that run "LV" decks out there, and if they weren't paying attention, might mistake this card as a "LV" card when it really is "Level". But forgive me, I got sidetracked. The bold part is what I wanted to emphasize. Why should you have to pay Life Points to summon a monster? [quote]When this card is Normal Summoned, all Machine-Type monsters on your side of the field gain 500 ATK. [b]You can destroy 1 Spell card on your side of the field to Special Summon 1 Level 4 Machine-Type monster from your hand.[/b][/quote] There really should be a limit to the number of times you can activate this card. Otherwise, you can Spam Special Summons during your turn. Since all of the other cards rely on Normal/Tribute Summoning, I've taken the liberty of re-working this card's effect so it seems more balanced, but still keep the general effect. [quote]When this card is Tribute Summoned, all Machine-Type monsters on your side of the field gain 500 ATK. You can destroy 1 Continuous Spell Card on your side of the field to Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower Machine-type monster from your hand. [b]You can activate this effect as many times as the number of monsters you used to Tribute Summon this card. This card cannot declare an attack the turn you activate this effect.[/b][/quote] Not bad at all, especially for a beginner. 9/10! EDIT: I lied... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 18, 2011 Report Share Posted July 18, 2011 Earth Trooper's last effect you were supposed to say destroy all OTHER monsters on the field. Also if you do that, then you should also add in that it can't attack on the turn it's summoned 8.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChubbyCheeks Posted July 19, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 19, 2011 [quote name='Kyng of Ice' timestamp='1310945830' post='5364204'] #1 destroys itself. #2 would be very useful. #3 is very unique. Nice job. #4 is OK. 8/10 [/quote] Thaanks for the rating man.[quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1310963758' post='5364993'] Earth Trooper's last effect you were supposed to say destroy all OTHER monsters on the field. Also if you do that, then you should also add in that it can't attack on the turn it's summoned 8.3/10 [/quote] LOL thanks for telling me that. I forgot that it destroyed itself. and thanks for the rating. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Love of Ghibli Posted July 19, 2011 Report Share Posted July 19, 2011 Well everyone caught the first monster, the second is very good, the third would be FANTASTIC if it were named Scrap War Chimera, and the fourth sounds like one of the old school boss monsters where it doesn't have the greatest of effects but its is still okay. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChubbyCheeks Posted July 20, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2011 [quote name='Beginning446' timestamp='1311102761' post='5369671'] Well everyone caught the first monster, the second is very good, the third would be FANTASTIC if it were named Scrap War Chimera, and the fourth sounds like one of the old school boss monsters where it doesn't have the greatest of effects but its is still okay. [/quote] Thaaanks dude and yea the third one was the hardest to name. I did consider Scrap, but since it was half bio and half machine, then I just named it Bionic , thaanks though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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