Ren✧ Posted July 19, 2011 Report Share Posted July 19, 2011 [center]This card is supposed to be like a more balanced version of [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Egyptian_God_Slime"]Egyptian God Slime[/url]. I could use some help with OCG and trying to make it more balanced. [/center][center][img]http://img685.imageshack.us/img685/8022/metallicalloyslime.png[/img][/center][center][center]"Metal Reflect Slime"+"Revival Jam"[/center][center]You can Special Summon this card from your Extra Deck by sending the above Fusion Material Monsters you control to the Graveyard("Polymerization" is not used). If you do, negate this card's effect, until your next turn. This Special Summon is counted as a Fusion Summon. If this card is removed from the field, you can banish monsters in your Graveyard that have a total Level of 10, to Special Summon this card. If you banish 4 or more monsters with the above effect in 1 turn, you can switch the ATK and DEF points of all face-up monsters on the field, until your opponent's next End Phase.[/center] [center]I added a new effect to it to make it more useful. I negated the effect for one turn if you do not use Polymerization. I raised the Defense of the card. Thoughts?[/center][/center] Credit to J u d a s for template Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted July 19, 2011 Report Share Posted July 19, 2011 Get rid of the "if you do, negate this card's effect" from the card, it makes the card pretty much worthless. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted July 19, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 19, 2011 Really? You don't think it would make it OP'ed? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted July 19, 2011 Report Share Posted July 19, 2011 [quote name='Nightwing the Dark Falcon' timestamp='1311094666' post='5369378'] Really? You don't think it would make it OP'ed? [/quote] What part of "worthless" don't you understand? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted July 19, 2011 Report Share Posted July 19, 2011 So if you dont use Poly, this card's effects are negated while face-up? OCG along with suggestion You can Special Summon this card from your Extra Deck by sending the above Fusion Material Monsters you control to the Graveyard(You do not use "Polymerization"). If you do, negate this card's effect and this Special Summon is counted as a Fusion Summon. If this card is destroyed as a result of battle and sent to the Graveyard, you can banish 2 cards from your hand to Special Summon this card, during the End Phase. If this card is destroyed by a card effect and sent to the Graveyard, you can Tribute 1 Level 5 or higher face-up monster you control to Special Summon this card. If this card is banished, you can discard 3 cards from your hand to Special Summon 1 "Revival Jam" from your Graveyard and Set 1 "Metal Reflect Slime" from your Graveyard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted July 19, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 19, 2011 [quote name='Power Play' timestamp='1311094870' post='5369387'] What part of "worthless" don't you understand? [/quote] Okay there is no need to be a jerk. @Syns: Thanks I will add the corrections and suggestions. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted July 19, 2011 Report Share Posted July 19, 2011 No problems, but yeah. Negating the effect of this card forever will not worth it. Maybe just only for 3rd turn negated? or less maybe? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted July 19, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 19, 2011 For now it just isn't negated. We will see what other people say and then I will edit from there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted July 19, 2011 Report Share Posted July 19, 2011 Yes, that would be better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 19, 2011 Report Share Posted July 19, 2011 I'm surprised it's lv9 since Metal Reflect Slime is lv10 3 cards just to get Revival Jam out and set Metal Reflect Slime to repeat the process? I would have said on that last effect if they're summoned this way you can't use them to special summon Metallic Alloy Slime Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted July 19, 2011 Report Share Posted July 19, 2011 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1311111214' post='5370059'] I would have said on that last effect if they're summoned this way you can't use them to special summon Metallic Alloy Slime [/quote] ...why? Look at the materials used to Summon it, then look at the costs. The costs are really high on the revival, so there is no need for him to add a no SS clause to the end. Really, Nightwing, you went too overboard with the costs for this card. Banishing 2 cards from your hand to SS it if it's destroyed by battle? Tributing a Level 5+ monster if it's destroyed by card effects? Discarding 3 cards if it's banished? Heck, get rid of the multiple effects, replace with "if this card leaves the field" and add a decent cost. Really, anything but banishing/discarding cards from hand and/or Tributing high level monsters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Garthfunkle Vii Backwards Posted July 19, 2011 Report Share Posted July 19, 2011 "Metal Reflect Slime"+"Revival Jam" You can Special Summon this card from your Extra Deck by sending the above Fusion Material Monsters you control to the Graveyard (You do not use "Polymerization").This Special Summon is counted as a Fusion Summon. If this card leaves the field, you can discard 2 cards from your Hand to Special Summon 1 "Revival Jam" from your Graveyard and Set 1 "Metal Reflect Slime" from your Graveyard. fair enough right ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted July 19, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 19, 2011 [quote name='Power Play' timestamp='1311114577' post='5370189'] ...why? Look at the materials used to Summon it, then look at the costs. The costs are really high on the revival, so there is no need for him to add a no SS clause to the end. Really, Nightwing, you went too overboard with the costs for this card. Banishing 2 cards from your hand to SS it if it's destroyed by battle? Tributing a Level 5+ monster if it's destroyed by card effects? Discarding 3 cards if it's banished? Heck, get rid of the multiple effects, replace with "if this card leaves the field" and add a decent cost. Really, anything but banishing/discarding cards from hand and/or Tributing high level monsters. [/quote] Alright I will redo it. Probably be tomorrow though. And I will raise the level because I forgot that one of the materials is a level 10. I will probably make it a level 10 and then raise is Defense to 4500. Or would the raise in Defense make it OPed? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted July 20, 2011 Report Share Posted July 20, 2011 Its call make it balanced and still playable Power Play. Tributing 1 monster is way to cheap, send the top cards is more way cheap. But discard 3 cards i agree that it is overboard but it is up to Nightwing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 20, 2011 Report Share Posted July 20, 2011 [quote name='Nightwing the Dark Falcon' timestamp='1311115867' post='5370234'] Alright I will redo it. Probably be tomorrow though. And I will raise the level because I forgot that one of the materials is a level 10. I will probably make it a level 10 and then raise is Defense to 4500. Or would the raise in Defense make it OPed? [/quote] well 3000 is a bit low, but 4500 is too high just make it at 3500ish or something Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted July 20, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2011 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1311140311' post='5371081'] well 3000 is a bit low, but 4500 is too high just make it at 3500ish or something [/quote] Okay thanks. I will get to editing it right away. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel of Silence Posted July 20, 2011 Report Share Posted July 20, 2011 I don't see how you saw it as OP really... Pic is good and fitting. OCG looks good. Seems balanced. Pretty useful overall. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted July 20, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2011 [quote name='Raving Star' timestamp='1311177520' post='5371726'] I don't see how you saw it as OP really... Pic is good and fitting. OCG looks good. Seems balanced. Pretty useful overall. 9/10 [/quote] Yeah actually I found it it was UP'ed. I changed the effect up quite a bit though so you may want to re-rate the card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweetie Belle Posted July 20, 2011 Report Share Posted July 20, 2011 [img]http://images4.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20100621231624/yugioh/images/b/be/OjamaCountryRGBT-EN-R-1E.jpg[/img] Says hi. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted July 20, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2011 [quote name='WinterKirby' timestamp='1311178271' post='5371760'] [img]http://images4.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20100621231624/yugioh/images/b/be/OjamaCountryRGBT-EN-R-1E.jpg[/img] Says hi. [/quote] Yes I know it is similar to Ojama Country. If you are not going to help make the card better don't post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweetie Belle Posted July 20, 2011 Report Share Posted July 20, 2011 [quote name='Nightwing the Dark Falcon' timestamp='1311179469' post='5371784'] [b]Yes I know it is similar to Ojama Country.[/b] If you are not going to help make the card better don't post. [/quote] That's not what I'm saying. This card, in conjunction with Ojama Country (plus an Ojama monster), or in fact, any card that switches ATK/DEF, makes for pretty much a free 3700 ATK monster. Especially if you negate his effect by not using Polymerization. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted July 20, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2011 [quote name='WinterKirby' timestamp='1311179664' post='5371789'] That's not what I'm saying. This card, in conjunction with Ojama Country (plus an Ojama monster), or in fact, any card that switches ATK/DEF, makes for pretty much a free 3700 ATK monster. Especially if you negate his effect by not using Polymerization. [/quote] Oh okay. Sorry to snap at you. Yeah one of my favorite decks to use is an Ojama Deck, so I kinda made it compatible with them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 20, 2011 Report Share Posted July 20, 2011 [quote name='Nightwing the Dark Falcon' timestamp='1311175582' post='5371659'] Okay thanks. I will get to editing it right away. [/quote] good enough for you to raise it, so I can give you the rate of 9.4/10 now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted July 20, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2011 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1311195756' post='5372436'] good enough for you to raise it, so I can give you the rate of 9.4/10 now [/quote] Thanks for the comment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cody Frost Posted July 20, 2011 Report Share Posted July 20, 2011 you know what? 4000 DEF seems like a good number for this card. It's still somewhat specific, so maybe 300 point bonus in its DEF would be kind of useful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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