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[Striker] Jonaito, the Mystic Guardian


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[i]Cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. Must be Special Summoned by Tributing 1 Level 4 or lower DARK monster. When this card is Special Summoned: Decrease the ATK of all non-Dark Xyz monsters equal to their Rank x 300. When this card targets a Xyz monster for an attack: Detach 1 Xyz Material from the targeted monster. When this card is destroyed by a card effect: You can pay 500 Life Points; Discard 1 DARK monster from your hand.[/i]

Here I am again with another single. This time I tried to create an anti-Xyz monster (Only 7 out of the current 31 are DARK Xyz monsters). It also has DW support added for the heck of it.

Anyway, CnC?[/center]

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[quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1311115680' post='5370226']
"When this card is destroyed by a card effect: You can pay 500 Life Points; Discard 1 DARK monster from your hand."

<---explain to me what's the purpose of this effect in helping this specific card, Striker
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Like I said, I threw it in there for the heck of it for DW support. If you don't think it belongs there, I'll take it out.

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[quote name='Mr. Striker' timestamp='1311115452' post='5370217']
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[i]Cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. Must be Special Summoned by Tributing 1 Level 4 or lower DARK monster. When this card is Special Summoned: Decrease the ATK of all non-Dark Xyz monsters equal to their Rank x 300. When this card targets a Xyz monster for an attack: Detach 1 Xyz Material from the targeted monster. When this card is destroyed by a card effect: You can pay 500 Life Points; Discard 1 DARK monster from your hand.[/i]

Here I am again with another single. This time I tried to create an anti-Xyz monster (Only 7 out of the current 31 are DARK Xyz monsters). It also has DW support added for the heck of it.

Anyway, CnC?[/center]
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[b]OCG Fix:[/b] This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing a Level 4 or lower DARK Monster. When this card is Special Summoned, descrease the ATK of all non-DARK XYZ Monsters by their Rank x 300. When this card targets a XYZ Monster for an attack, detatch 1 XYZ Material from the targeted Monster. when this card is destroyed by a card effect, you can pay 500 Life Points to discard 1 DARK Monster from your Hand.

Due to it's Dark Wold helping effect, I'd change the name to "Jonaito, Mystic Guardian of the Dark World".

I like this card other than that.

8.6/10

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[quote name='Neos the Ancient' timestamp='1311116473' post='5370251']
[b]OCG Fix:[/b] This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing a Level 4 or lower DARK Monster. When this card is Special Summoned, descrease the ATK of all non-DARK XYZ Monsters by their Rank x 300. When this card targets a XYZ Monster for an attack, detatch 1 XYZ Material from the targeted Monster. when this card is destroyed by a card effect, you can pay 500 Life Points to discard 1 DARK Monster from your Hand.

Due to it's Dark Wold helping effect, I'd change the name to "Jonaito, Mystic Guardian of the Dark World".

I like this card other than that.

8.6/10
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Once again, I used, and prefer, the New OCG. I might consider the name however.

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