Varionius Posted July 20, 2011 Report Share Posted July 20, 2011 I removed the template, because the card has been updated. [spoiler=Lore]Once per turn, if you control another FIRE monster, you can destroy that monster to make this card gain ATK equal to it's level x100 unti the End Phase. If this card battles a WATER monster, this card loses 300 ATK unti the End Phase. if this card battles a EARTH monster, raise this card's ATK by 300 until the End Phase. When this card is destroyed by battle, inflict 800 Damage to your opponent's Life Points.[/spoiler] Here is the card without the recolor: [img]http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/5674/447411.jpg[/img] Fell free to comment and rate the card and the recolor. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bocaa Posted July 20, 2011 Report Share Posted July 20, 2011 I love this card... 9/10 but it isn't awesome for the color...good job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Varionius Posted July 20, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2011 [quote name='bocaa' timestamp='1311146670' post='5371223'] I love this card... 9/10 but it isn't awesome for the color...good job [/quote] Tnx. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bocaa Posted July 20, 2011 Report Share Posted July 20, 2011 now is A-W-E-S-O-M-E 10/10 ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Varionius Posted July 20, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2011 [quote name='bocaa' timestamp='1311148941' post='5371244'] now is A-W-E-S-O-M-E 10/10 ^^ [/quote] Tnx. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyng's Old Account Posted July 20, 2011 Report Share Posted July 20, 2011 Can you post the lore in case of an OCG Fix? I like the overall concept, but the template...meh...it's just a recolor. So far 7/10. Impress me with the OCG and Balance. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Varionius Posted July 20, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2011 [quote name='Kyng of Ice' timestamp='1311154126' post='5371293'] Can you post the lore in case of an OCG Fix? I like the overall concept, but the template...meh...it's just a recolor. So far 7/10. Impress me with the OCG and Balance. [/quote] I already posted a textual lore, and as for the template, it is ment to be a recolor. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyng's Old Account Posted July 20, 2011 Report Share Posted July 20, 2011 Oh! Sorry 'bout the lore issue! I ddn't look hard enough. As for the recolor...meh...seems lazy to me. I don't like them that much. I like Xyz much more because rather than the new color, it has a distinguished pattern. So as for the recolor my opinion stands. Now, onto OCG What you wrote: Once per turn, if you control another FIRE monster, you can destroy that monster to make this card gain ATK equal to it's level x100 unti the End Phase. [u]If[/u] this card battles a WATER monster, this card loses 300 ATK unti the End Phase. [u]if[/u] this card battles a EARTH monster, raise this card's ATK by 300 until the End Phase. When this card is destroyed by battle, inflict 800 Damage to your opponent's Life Points. What you should've written: Once per turn, if you control another FIRE monster, you can destroy that monster to make this card gain ATK equal to it's level x100 unti the End Phase. When this card battles a WATER monster, this card loses 300 ATK unti the End Phase. When this card battles a EARTH monster, raise this card's ATK by 300 until the End Phase. When this card is destroyed by battle, inflict 800 Damage to your opponent's Life Points. Two tiny errors. So I can easily let it slide. Just remember, when is used much more than if. Balance... Well to be honest I think it's ok. It can gain super power, but it wont exceed 3000, and that'll only occur with a twelve star. So generally its fine. However I doubt it'd be run though. I'd have it's ATK higher especially for a six star. About 2100 maybe. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Varionius Posted July 20, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2011 Updated Update Log: [list][*]Raised it's ATK to 2100[*]Changed the ifs[/list] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyng's Old Account Posted July 20, 2011 Report Share Posted July 20, 2011 Sorry again! My last post din't have a rating! Well, now it's a defo 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Varionius Posted July 20, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2011 [quote name='Kyng of Ice' timestamp='1311155634' post='5371307'] Sorry again! My last post din't have a rating! Well, now it's a defo 10/10 [/quote] No problem, and tnx for the rating. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nathanael D. Striker Posted July 20, 2011 Report Share Posted July 20, 2011 Kyng, ifs are allowed. They allow effects to not miss their timing. As for the card, I'll update its OCG after my football practice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 20, 2011 Report Share Posted July 20, 2011 meh effect in mostly just gaining/losing effect if you were going to do that, you might as well also include effects for LIGHT, DARK, and WIND 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bobbyman46 Posted July 20, 2011 Report Share Posted July 20, 2011 The effect is good and pretty balanced. The card art is outrageously awesome. 8.5/10! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Varionius Posted July 21, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 21, 2011 Tnx for the ratings. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TRUE RULER^(Imper.Di ) Posted July 21, 2011 Report Share Posted July 21, 2011 I like it, as for addding DARK WIND nd LIGHT its a no go, it would take up too much space, besides DARK WIND and LIGHT are neutral to FIRE. IT is truly awesome 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glogatha Posted July 21, 2011 Report Share Posted July 21, 2011 Wow, even though it only increases and decreases, this is pretty good, an axe of dispair, and reverse trap in case of wter and this card would be a force to be reckoned with! 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TRUE RULER^(Imper.Di ) Posted July 21, 2011 Report Share Posted July 21, 2011 Areed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Varionius Posted July 21, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 21, 2011 [quote name='Deschwitat1170' timestamp='1311234686' post='5373680'] I like it, as for addding DARK WIND nd LIGHT its a no go, it would take up too much space, besides DARK WIND and LIGHT are neutral to FIRE. IT is truly awesome 10/10 [/quote] Jeah, Water counters fire, and fire counters Earth, and DARK, WIND and LIGHT are neutral. Tnx for the ratings everyone. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wrathos Posted July 21, 2011 Report Share Posted July 21, 2011 Pretty cool. I like how it destroys FIRE monsters instead of using them as tribute. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShiningGodMan Posted July 21, 2011 Report Share Posted July 21, 2011 awesome! 10/10, only thing is that it looks too epic to be lvl six, I can imagine it as a level 8 mabye? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Varionius Posted July 21, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 21, 2011 Jeah, but it's hard do find a level 6 dragon pic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zetsu-plant Posted July 21, 2011 Report Share Posted July 21, 2011 very very nice card and the effect is outstanding pretty much perfect 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Varionius Posted July 22, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 22, 2011 Tnx. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thecross Posted July 22, 2011 Report Share Posted July 22, 2011 I like the artwork; the effect is eh, but I think the OCG and idea make up for that. Nice work 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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