GENMarco Posted July 24, 2011 Report Share Posted July 24, 2011 This is my first set of cards and there I think there pretty cool. Pleases rate With one added card [img]http://img854.imageshack.us/img854/4357/455645.jpg[/img] [img]http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/4357/455645.jpg[/img] [img]http://img827.imageshack.us/img827/4357/455645.jpg[/img] [img]http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/4357/455645.jpg[/img] [img]http://img29.imageshack.us/img29/4357/455645.jpg[/img] [img]http://img687.imageshack.us/img687/4357/455645.jpg[/img] [img]http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/4357/455645.jpg[/img] [img]http://img715.imageshack.us/img715/4357/455645.jpg[/img] [img]http://img808.imageshack.us/img808/4357/455645.jpg[/img] [img]http://img683.imageshack.us/img683/4357/455645.jpg[/img] [img]http://img40.imageshack.us/img40/4357/455645.jpg[/img] [img]http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/4357/455645.jpg[/img] [img]http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/4357/455645.jpg[/img] [img]http://img34.imageshack.us/img34/8049/455645e.jpg[/img] [img]http://img807.imageshack.us/img807/4357/455645.jpg[/img] [img]http://img834.imageshack.us/img834/4357/455645.jpg[/img] [img]http://img3.imageshack.us/img3/4357/455645.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~British Soul~ Posted July 24, 2011 Report Share Posted July 24, 2011 Black Chaos Dragon OCG fix: 1 Tuner + 1 or more Non-Tuner monsters This monster inflicts Piercing Battle Damage. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
おジャマ・キング Posted July 24, 2011 Report Share Posted July 24, 2011 Everything from Chaos Knight - Rakdos is OP. Lower their ATK and DEF. This is pretty good for your first cards. 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GENMarco Posted July 24, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 24, 2011 [quote name='~Burning Soul~' timestamp='1311493373' post='5382662'] Black Chaos Dragon OCG fix: 1 Tuner + 1 or more Non-Tuner monsters This monster inflicts Piercing Battle Damage. [/quote] Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
おジャマ・キング Posted July 24, 2011 Report Share Posted July 24, 2011 What about me? D: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Coldspectar Posted July 28, 2011 Report Share Posted July 28, 2011 Dark apprentince seems a little overpowerd for his effect. how about atk 750/Def 900? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GENMarco Posted July 31, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 31, 2011 BUUMMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GENMarco Posted July 31, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 31, 2011 BBBUUMMMPPP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
▪ατємυ▪ Posted August 1, 2011 Report Share Posted August 1, 2011 [color=#696969]To me, the effects are pretty bland. For almost all of these cards, there is one almost exactly like it. Rakdos' card text should be "This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, "Black Fire Ritual"." Not a Manilla-Card text. Also, since its Attribute is "Divine", its Type should also be "Divine-Beast", not "Warrior".[/color] [color=#696969] [/color] [color=#696969] [/color] [color=#696969]4/10 - Lacks originality. :/[/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Niv-Mizzet Posted August 1, 2011 Report Share Posted August 1, 2011 Rakdos deserves a better effect, you insult all of Ravnica with your pathetic portrayal of the Demon Lord! But seriously, that guy's a Magic card. And a fun one, too. Turning him into a vanilla ritual pretty much kills the idea of him. Oh, and he needs the text Atemu said. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GENMarco Posted August 2, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 2, 2011 [quote name='Atemu6669' timestamp='1312159680' post='5402992'] [color=#696969]To me, the effects are pretty bland. For almost all of these cards, there is one almost exactly like it. Rakdos' card text should be "This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, "Black Fire Ritual"." Not a Manilla-Card text. Also, since its Attribute is "Divine", its Type should also be "Divine-Beast", not "Warrior".[/color] [color=#696969]4/10 - Lacks originality. :/[/color] [/quote] Hows Rakdos now and this is my first card set i was just seeing if some one will like them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
reborn11 Posted August 3, 2011 Report Share Posted August 3, 2011 First cards? Okay bro,YOU.GOTTA.BE.KIDDING!!! For first set,10/10,you started out 10 times better than me. Unlike other newbie's sets,these have a specific effect theme to go with it,this involves more spells and traps,both using and negating them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~British Soul~ Posted August 3, 2011 Report Share Posted August 3, 2011 [quote name='GENMarco' timestamp='1311524124' post='5383220'] Thanks [/quote] sorry, this is what i meant (after looking at Piercing Moray) [b]If this card attacks a [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Defense_Position"]Defense Position[/url] monster, inflict [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Piercing"]piercing[/url] [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Battle_Damage"]Battle Damage[/url] to your opponent.[/b] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GENMarco Posted August 4, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 4, 2011 [quote name='reborn11' timestamp='1312379647' post='5410082'] First cards? Okay bro,YOU.GOTTA.BE.KIDDING!!! For first set,10/10,you started out 10 times better than me. Unlike other newbie's sets,these have a specific effect theme to go with it,this involves more spells and traps,both using and negating them. [/quote] After the first five i started get in better and better and now i got 18 cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
おジャマ・キング Posted August 4, 2011 Report Share Posted August 4, 2011 When a fusion mat is a specific monster, you don't put a 1 before it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GENMarco Posted August 5, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 5, 2011 [quote name='おジャマ・キング' timestamp='1312459528' post='5412841'] When a fusion mat is a specific monster, you don't put a 1 before it. [/quote] OCG Fix Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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