MaroonX Posted July 30, 2011 Report Share Posted July 30, 2011 [img]http://img577.imageshack.us/img577/9613/211287.jpg[/img] [size="2"][quote]1 Level 4 Tuner monster + 1 or more non-tuner Dragon-type Synchro monster. You can negate the effect of a Spell/Trap card that targets this card. Once per a turn, you can target 1 monster your opponent controls with an ATK higher than this card. Decrease that monster's attack until it's equal to the ATK of this card. Inflict damage to your opponent and gain Life Points to the ATK lost by this effect.[/quote][/size] I'm guessing the picture is probably overused, but idc about that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Omi Glad Posted July 30, 2011 Report Share Posted July 30, 2011 Well i liked it up to where you could "Banish" (new ocg) and then bring it back. Also a few key words got dropped. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MaroonX Posted July 30, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2011 oh... banish right... should i change it? also about the keywords thing, which ones are you referring? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Omi Glad Posted July 30, 2011 Report Share Posted July 30, 2011 [quote name='MaroonX' timestamp='1312009573' post='5400583'] oh... banish right... should i change it? also about the keywords thing, which ones are you referring? [/quote] I bolded the changes for you, as well as made an errada suggestion. You can negate the effect of a Spell/Trap card that targets this card. Once per a turn, you can select 1 monster your opponent[b]'s side of the field[/b] with an ATK greater than the ATK of this card[b]:[/b] Decrease [b]that monster's[/b] attack until it's equal to the ATK of this card[b];[/b] Inflict damage to your opponent[b]'s Life Points[/b] and gain life points to the ATK lost by this effect. [s]If this card is destroyed and sent to the graveyard, you can remove it from play. During your standby phase Special Summon it.[/s] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MaroonX Posted July 30, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2011 Thanks for the help. I added that last effect to make a reference to "Twilight" which is the time between dawn and sunrise, or in this case the standby phase. but i guess that's unnecessary lol. Btw is the synchro material monster for this card is ok? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
â–¼AlcaNdeRâ–¼ Posted July 30, 2011 Report Share Posted July 30, 2011 OCG corrections IMO: You can negate the effect of a Spell/Trap [b]C[/b]ard that targets this card. Once per turn, you can target 1 monster [b]your opponent controls[/b] [b]with an ATK higher than this card: the ATK of the targeted monster becomes half this card's ATK;[/b] Inflict damage to your [b]opponent[/b] and gain [b]L[/b]ife [b]P[/b]oints equal to the [u]ATK lost by this effect.[/u] <- I'm not so sure about the under line part but i know what you mean by that so i guess it's okay that way for the under line part. Picture is okay, for the effect i say it's balanced but I would add that this card can only be Synchro Summoned but maybe that's just me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 30, 2011 Report Share Posted July 30, 2011 overall the burn effect isn't going to be too much but why make the atk drain a PERMANENT effect? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MaroonX Posted July 31, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 31, 2011 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1312043658' post='5401290'] overall the burn effect isn't going to be too much but why make the atk drain a PERMANENT effect? [/quote] That's where cards like "Shooting Star Bow - Ceal" or "Twin Sword of Flashing Light Tryce" come in handy and wouldn't it be too weak if it wasn't permanent? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Resident Fascist Posted July 31, 2011 Report Share Posted July 31, 2011 Find me a level 6 monster with less than 500 ATK. NOW. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MaroonX Posted August 1, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 1, 2011 Alright. -Tounge Twister -Mokey Mokey King -Great Maju Garzett -Ojama King -Fortune Lady Earth -Helios Duo Megistus Looked it up with my wc 2010 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not-so-Radiant Arin Posted August 1, 2011 Report Share Posted August 1, 2011 [quote name='MaroonX' timestamp='1312158037' post='5402936'] Alright. -Tounge Twister -Mokey Mokey King -Great Maju Garzett -Ojama King -Fortune Lady Earth -Helios Duo Megistus Looked it up with my wc 2010 [/quote] You, sir, are a genius, but I don't think FL Earth counts, because isn't it a "????" ATK monster? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
drcrisis Posted August 1, 2011 Report Share Posted August 1, 2011 Bit underpowered, but so useful in SOME (not many) Fights. Most monsters with that much ATK that this card would counter are hard to get out AND can negate effects. Make this monster level 7, halfed attack when declares an attack Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 1, 2011 Report Share Posted August 1, 2011 [quote name='MaroonX' timestamp='1312153222' post='5402803'] That's where cards like "Shooting Star Bow - Ceal" or "Twin Sword of Flashing Light Tryce" come in handy and wouldn't it be too weak if it wasn't permanent? [/quote] But those cards are only useful in Guardian Decks. How often are they used in a NON-Guardian Deck? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MaroonX Posted August 1, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 1, 2011 [quote name='Devil's Advocate' timestamp='1312160257' post='5403015'] You, sir, are a genius, but I don't think FL Earth counts, because isn't it a "????" ATK monster? [/quote] lol maybe [quote name='drcrisis' timestamp='1312161304' post='5403050'] Bit underpowered, but so useful in SOME (not many) Fights. Most monsters with that much ATK that this card would counter are hard to get out AND can negate effects. Make this monster level 7, halfed attack when declares an attack [/quote] You're right about the first part, maybe decrease it's attack? or should i change the effect? i still wanted it to be a level 10 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1312168945' post='5403398'] But those cards are only useful in Guardian Decks. How often are they used in a NON-Guardian Deck? [/quote] Hmm... good point. guess i'll change the effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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