Nede Posted August 3, 2011 Report Share Posted August 3, 2011 [img]http://img202.imageshack.us/img202/8413/451325.jpg[/img] Lore : When this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard: Gain 1000 Life Points. You can then select and activate 1 of the following effects: - Special Summon 1 Spellcaster-Type monster from your hand. - Send 1 card from your hand to the Graveyard, then draw 1 card. Rate and Comment ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 3, 2011 Report Share Posted August 3, 2011 2nd effect is OPed for the draw power you should have said you can draw 2 cards, but then discard 3 more from your hand. If you don't have that many to spare in your hand, then you can't activate the 2nd effect at all Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nede Posted August 3, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 3, 2011 Ok ok I will fix that,thx for the comment! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 3, 2011 Report Share Posted August 3, 2011 ok now it´s a little meh for effect but it balances, so I´ll give you 8.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nede Posted August 3, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 3, 2011 Wait I haven't change it yet,I will fix it later,I can't fix it now,but thx for the rating Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Therrion Posted August 4, 2011 Report Share Posted August 4, 2011 Broken until you get the chance to change it. Otherwise, I like the card. I have a soft spot for Spellcasters. 6/10 (8.8/10 when fixed) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nede Posted August 4, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 4, 2011 I will,just you wait,btw how about the OCG ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nede Posted August 4, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 4, 2011 FIXED!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 4, 2011 Report Share Posted August 4, 2011 drawing 2 and discarding 1 for the second effect is like Graceful Charity there's a reason why people said that card was too versatile........ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nede Posted August 4, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 4, 2011 You Have Any Suggestion For This Card? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 5, 2011 Report Share Posted August 5, 2011 make it drawing 2, but discarding THREE instead Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nede Posted August 5, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 5, 2011 I don't know, maybe I'm keeping this one, but the for the suggestion! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Time Psyduck Posted August 5, 2011 Report Share Posted August 5, 2011 Make the second effect draw 1 rather than two (unlike spells, monsters aren't a -1 in simply playing them, so to have an even trade , and make it send a card rather than discard (to prevent Dark World/Fabled abuse). Also, consider having the discard first, and then the draw, so you can't just drop what you drew if what you have is better. The first effect should have some limit, such as Level 4 or lower, or 1500 or less ATK, otherwise you could just drop something like Cosmo Queen, a level 8 with 2900 ATK, for more or less free. The ocg looks fine for the older style, although I'd make the 1000 compulsory, and when you select the effect, rather than an option in both effects: When this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, gain 1000 life points, and you can select and activate 1 of the following effects: - Special Summon 1 Spellcaster-Type monster from your hand. - Send 1 card from your hand to the Graveyard, then draw 1 card. Using the new ocg: When this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard: Gain 1000 Life Points. You can then select and activate 1 of the following effects: - Special Summon 1 Spellcaster-Type monster from your hand. - Send 1 card from your hand to the Graveyard, then draw 1 card. I've changed the draw effect, but not added any restrictions to what Spellcaster you can summon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Uchiha Sasuke XII Posted August 5, 2011 Report Share Posted August 5, 2011 OK card, but second effect is OPed. Kind of like Graceful, only on a smaller scale. There is a reason why Pot of Greed and Graceful Charity were banned, and this card's drawing power is just...Whoa. And you get to gain 1000LP. The first effect should have a restriction on the Level of the Spellcaster-type. I don't think a Level 7+ instant Special Summon is balanced. But that's just my opinion. Rewrite as you wish. I think I'll give 7/10 for your effort and since this is your first card, I shouldn't be too harsh. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nede Posted August 5, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 5, 2011 Hmm... Maybe You Are Right,I'll Fix It Later! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 5, 2011 Report Share Posted August 5, 2011 [quote name='Cyrus Angelius' timestamp='1312546451' post='5416160'] Hmm... Maybe You Are Right,I'll Fix It Later! [/quote] we're still waiting on the modifications. That going to happen soon? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glogatha Posted August 5, 2011 Report Share Posted August 5, 2011 hmmm...nice, maybe Draw 2 discard 2? that way its even...It's okay 7/10 re-rate when corrected. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Therrion Posted August 5, 2011 Report Share Posted August 5, 2011 [center][center]Yes I would like to see what you do to change it.[/center][/center] [center][center]My previous rating will most definantly change [/center][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nede Posted August 6, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 6, 2011 Ok,I'll Fix It If I Have A Chance, When this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard: Gain 1000 Life Points. You can then select and activate 1 of the following effects: - Special Summon 1 level 6 or lower Spellcaster-Type monster from your hand. - Send 1 card from your hand to the Graveyard, then draw 1 card. How About That? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Therrion Posted August 6, 2011 Report Share Posted August 6, 2011 [center][center]The first effect was fine.[/center][/center] [center][center]It was just the second effect to Draw 2 then discard 1. Drawing 1 is fine, or drawing 2 then discarding 2. Just don't make it net advantage if you draw more then 1 card.[/center][/center] [center][center]The life gain hardly mattered, so you can keep that.[/center][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nede Posted August 6, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 6, 2011 But my 2nd effect is Send 1 card from your hand to the Graveyard, then draw 1 card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Therrion Posted August 6, 2011 Report Share Posted August 6, 2011 [center][center]I know. That is perfect, was just saying you can make the 1st effect go back to what it was and re add the effect to net 1000 Life.[/center][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nede Posted August 6, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 6, 2011 No restrictions? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantasy Dreamz Posted August 6, 2011 Report Share Posted August 6, 2011 Nice card. The healer mage plays her part. My suggestion for the second effect, change it. Perhaps allow it to search up another healer mage from your deck to REALLY heal you up instead of drawing. You know, so it'll be like a more advance Nimble. This card will work well from hand and deck. 8.10 ~Dreamz~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nede Posted August 6, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 6, 2011 Thanks! But I Want To Make This Card Versatile and Balanced,I Think Your Suggestion Is Perfect,But I Rather Draw,I Will Use Your Suggestion On My Other "Mage",I Have 3 "Mage" Monsters Right Now,Not Only "Teresa, The Healer Mage"FIXED!! Thanks Time Psyduck! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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