Saiba Aisu Posted February 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 14, 2008 Thanks, Static! I'm glad you like them. :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted February 14, 2008 Report Share Posted February 14, 2008 Well, what can I say? They are great man ^_^I really do look foward to you posting more cards, you are an awsome card maker ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted February 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 14, 2008 Thanks, Yankee. I really hope these are viewed with good will by all, since I'm really excited about this set and how it's working out. I really just love it. ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted February 14, 2008 Report Share Posted February 14, 2008 Well, they are good, so, don't worry ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CandleJack Posted February 14, 2008 Report Share Posted February 14, 2008 The new cards look great! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted February 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 14, 2008 Aww, thanks, Jack! I'm really glad you like them. The next 2 new ones will probably be monsters, to keep things fluid. ^^ Updated with 1 new card-Fading Commitment, and the credit for the name goes to Matskaga (Deity Mitsu). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chevalier Posted February 14, 2008 Report Share Posted February 14, 2008 Yet again, great appendages,Great Job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RiffMaster Alex Posted February 14, 2008 Report Share Posted February 14, 2008 love the new ones cyber! You have a very good theme going here! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kei-kun Posted February 14, 2008 Report Share Posted February 14, 2008 awesome set dude! 10/10 and OMG Haruhi Avatar! XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seth Posted February 15, 2008 Report Share Posted February 15, 2008 Excellent cards! One of the best sets that I've seen so far! Pics are awesome, most effects are good, and they are pretty balanced.Pics- 9/10Effects- 9.5/10ATK / DEF- 9/10Overall- 9.1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Supreme Gamesmaster Posted February 15, 2008 Report Share Posted February 15, 2008 These are goood cards. I'll do my best to critique them. The Heart-Broken Maiden: If you think about it, this card is utterly useless. The effect reads, If you take an amount of Battle Damage equal to 1000 or higher from a battle involving this card, select and take control of the monster that battled with this card. When a monster on your side of the field that was affected by this card's effect is destroyed, it is sent to the Graveyard of its original owner and you discard 1 card. If "The Heart-Broken Maiden" is destroyed or removed from the field, switch control of all monsters affected by this card's effect to your opponent. I know what you're trying to say, but one critical bit of text is missing; the card doesn't negate the attack in which the battle damage is taken, so control of the attacking monster switches to you and right back to your opponent. The effect ought to read, If you would take an amount of Battle Damage equal to 1000 or higher from a battle involving this card, negate the attack and take control of the monster that battled with this card. When a monster on your side of the field that was affected by this card's effect is destroyed, it is sent to the Graveyard of its original owner and you discard 1 card. If "The Heart-Broken Maiden" is destroyed or removed from the field, switch control of all monsters affected by this card's effect to your opponent. This way, it isn't destroyed as soon as its effect activates. Plus, you don't take the battle damage. I know it seems really nitpicky, but it's these little things that shape the great card maker. Fading Commitment: Read the right way, it's incredibly broken. You can Special Summon it from your deck at any time, instantly dealing 1000 points of damage to your opponent's LIfe Points, because the effect doesn't outline the fact that you have to have it sent to the deck by its effect. Since it would be difficult to word this, I recommend changing the effect so that it's sent to the Graveyard rather than the deck. I know, this is also extremely trivial, but any player running the card could interpret it that way. In order to make it less broken, I also recommend making it so that the Battle Damage "fades," so that its effect couldn't be used infinitely, and it would better fit the title. At the beginning of your Battle Phase, you can Special Summon this card from your Graveyard to your side of the field in face-up ATK position. When this card is Special Summoned from your Graveyard, inflict 1000 points of damage to your opponent's Life Points. The next time you activate this card's effect, reduce the amount of damage inflicted to your opponent's Life Points by 200 points. Or something to that effect. I'm only trying to be helpful here, don't hold me hostage. These cards are great, don't get me wrong. I just think that if you were playing a game with them, you could twist the effect by reading the text wrong. Just saying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CandleJack Posted February 15, 2008 Report Share Posted February 15, 2008 This would be an awesome deck. Also, I see you changed your avatar.Edit: Did you ever find the original pic from the one card? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted February 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 15, 2008 @Org:Thanks, bud. ^^ I appreciate it.@Alex:Thanks, Alex, I'm glad you like them! :3@Kei-KunThanks, Kei! :3 And of course, I love that show...@SethThanks Seth, I truly appreciate that. These are good cards. I'll do my best to critique them. The Heart-Broken Maiden: If you think about it' date=' this card is utterly useless. The effect reads, If you take an amount of Battle Damage equal to 1000 or higher from a battle involving this card, select and take control of the monster that battled with this card. When a monster on your side of the field that was affected by this card's effect is destroyed, it is sent to the Graveyard of its original owner and you discard 1 card. If "The Heart-Broken Maiden" is destroyed or removed from the field, switch control of all monsters affected by this card's effect to your opponent. I know what you're trying to say, but one critical bit of text is missing; the card doesn't negate the attack in which the battle damage is taken, so control of the attacking monster switches to you and right back to your opponent. The effect ought to read, If you [b']would[/b] take an amount of Battle Damage equal to 1000 or higher from a battle involving this card, negate the attack and take control of the monster that battled with this card. When a monster on your side of the field that was affected by this card's effect is destroyed, it is sent to the Graveyard of its original owner and you discard 1 card. If "The Heart-Broken Maiden" is destroyed or removed from the field, switch control of all monsters affected by this card's effect to your opponent. This way, it isn't destroyed as soon as its effect activates. Plus, you don't take the battle damage. I know it seems really nitpicky, but it's these little things that shape the great card maker. I appreciate your concern, actually, I admire you for taking the time to write this much. However, my card obviously says: ^^ A crucial little detail to miss, don't you think? However, I thank you for your concern and desired well-being of my cards. I truly respect that. Also, if I negated the damage, that would quickly make her extremely overpowered. Damage is the only thing that keeps this Set in check-without it, I am way overboard. Fading Commitment: Read the right way' date=' it's incredibly broken. You can Special Summon it from your deck at any time, instantly dealing 1000 points of damage to your opponent's LIfe Points, because the effect doesn't outline the fact that you have to have it sent to the deck by its effect. Since it would be difficult to word this, I recommend changing the effect so that it's sent to the Graveyard rather than the deck. I know, this is also extremely trivial, but any player running the card could interpret it that way. In order to make it less broken, I also recommend making it so that the Battle Damage "fades," so that its effect couldn't be used infinitely, and it would better fit the title.[/quote'] You have a very solid point. However, again, you have missed a very crucial detail... Did you spot it? "During your next Battle Phase," meaning that if you don't summon her at that specific point in time, you cannot Special Summon her from the Deck via her own effect later. This is why I think the only real danger to her comes from me using recruiter monsters of some sort. At the beginning of your Battle Phase' date=' you can Special Summon this card from your Graveyard to your side of the field in face-up ATK position. When this card is Special Summoned from your Graveyard, inflict 1000 points of damage to your opponent's Life Points. The next time you activate this card's effect, reduce the amount of damage inflicted to your opponent's Life Points by 200 points. Or something to that effect. I'm only trying to be helpful here, don't hold me hostage. These cards are great, don't get me wrong. I just think that if you were playing a game with them, you could twist the effect by reading the text wrong. Just saying.[/quote'] On the contrary, I am readily thankful for your help-I'll think about weakening Commitment a bit, and I appreciate all you've done. Just read little more carefully next time, mmk? ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chevalier Posted February 15, 2008 Report Share Posted February 15, 2008 So everything Supreme said doesn't count? XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted February 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 15, 2008 Eh sort of, Org. I've updated with another "romance" card, but one that explores a darker side of loss, and the mourning for a dead lover. Behold, my Undying Romance! :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JerryFreelance Posted February 15, 2008 Report Share Posted February 15, 2008 Oh gosh thassa lot of cards... Heart-Broken: "As long as this card remains in face-up Attack Position, it cannot be destroyed by battle. (Damage Calculation is applied normally)" "If you take battle damage equal to 1000 or more involving this card, ..." You don't need to say "the owner's grave" just, "the grave". Very nice effect, but it could be a bit broken... Ritual summon card: ... Blood-stained: Nice card! I'm not sure if it's better than sonic bird, but it is very nice nonetheless. Good idea ;) 7/10 Fragile Innocence: "Once per turn, during your Main Phase, select 1 of your opponent's face-down Spell or Trap Card(s) on the field. If it is a Trap or Quick-Play Spell Card, your opponent must activate it unless the timing is incorrect. If the timing is incorrect, then the selected card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard. This monster cannot be destroyed during your turn. When this card destroys a monster by battle, draw 2 cards from your Deck." Even though it only has 500 ATK, you can totally boost its ATK with equips, so it's still broke =/ I'll come back later for the other cards ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CandleJack Posted February 15, 2008 Report Share Posted February 15, 2008 I've seen the pic on your new card before. Also, it looks great. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted February 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 15, 2008 Thanks for taking the time to help and comment, Bhim. Darn it, Jack! >_< lol, I will see if I can find another. Thanks for the heads-up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CandleJack Posted February 15, 2008 Report Share Posted February 15, 2008 Thanks for taking the time to help and comment' date=' Bhim. Darn it, Jack! >_< lol, I will see if I can find another. Thanks for the heads-up.[/quote'] I've never seen the pic used in a card, but i have the original. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted February 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 15, 2008 Oh, ok. Thanks Jack. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flamez Posted February 15, 2008 Report Share Posted February 15, 2008 I just read your new set of cards. Very impressive stuff as always. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dryad Posted February 15, 2008 Report Share Posted February 15, 2008 C.C., I simply adore this set you made ♥ - ♥, I can actually see myself using many of these cards :D 5 Stars :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted February 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 16, 2008 Ty, Rose. :3 I can, too. And thanks, Flamez, I appreciate it. ;) Anyone else?More to come. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kizzi Posted February 16, 2008 Report Share Posted February 16, 2008 Wow. Nice new cards. Some could be overpowered at times, but not too much. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted February 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 16, 2008 Update! 1 new card added. Credit to Dongaboy for the card effect-I tinkered with the image a bit. So, yeah! :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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