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Galaxtic Set UPDATE 2!! Balenced Out Gal 3 (again) AND ADDED NEW MONSTER.

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As long as this card is on the field, you special summon 1 Star Token (fairy-type/LIGHT/level 3/1200 ATK 1200 DEF) during your standby phase. As long as this card is on the field, you cannot normal summon or set any other monsters.




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This card cannot be normal summoned or set . This card can only be special summoned by the effect of "Star Summon". If you have any spell cards with "Galaxy" in their name in you hand, this monster gains 1000 ATK for each during you battle phase only. When this monster is removed from the field, your opponent must Banish the top 5 cards of their deck and lose 500 lifepoints for each monster banished from this effect.

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I need help with ideas to make this an archtype. PLEASE rate and help me become a better card maker!!!

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I Hate Snatch Steal Rookie

I Hate Snatch Steal

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As long as this card is on the field, you special summon 1 Star Token (fairy-type/LIGHT/level 3/1200 ATK 1200 DEF) during your standby phase. As long as this card is on the field, you cannot normal summon or set any other monsters.

[i]OCG correction: "During your Standby Phase, special summon 1 Star Token (Fairy-Type/LIGHT/level 3)ATK 1200 DEF 1200). You cannot normal summon or set any monsters".[/i]

[i]Since star tokens are special summoned, the 'other' is uneeded.[/i]

[i]The concent and execution are otherwise fine[/i]




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[i]This card needs a drawback, or it needs to be more specific as to what it applies to.[/i]
[i]Ex: "Monsters you control cannot be destroyed by battle. During your Standby Phase, pay 800 life points or destroy this card."[/i]
[i]Ex2: "Star Token"(s) you control cannot be destroyed by battle."[/i]

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This card cannot be normal summoned or set . This card can only be special summoned by the effect of "Star Summon". If you have any spell cards with "Galaxy" in their name in you hand, this monster gains 1000 ATK for each during you battle phase only. When this monster is removed from the field, your opponent must Banish the top 5 cards of their deck and lose 500 lifepoints for each monster banished from this effect.

I need help getting this guy some ATK and DEF. PLEASE rate and help me become a better card maker!!!!
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1st 2 card's comments are in the quote, the rest are here:

Glaxy 3:
This also needs a drawback of some sort or maybe make it like [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Heart_of_the_Underdog"]heart of the underdog[/url]?
Ex: "During your Draw Phase, you can draw 1 extra card and take 800 damage."
Ex2:'When you draw a "Galaxy" cards(s) you can reveal 1 of those monsters to draw 1 more card."

Star summon:
is mostly fine. Since spell cards cannot be tributed and ritual tributes generally match the level of the ritual monster, Just change it to: 'This card is used to ritual summon "Total Galaxy" from your hand or deck, you must also tribute monsters whose total levels equal 6 or more from your side of the field or your hand and send "Galaxy 1", "Galaxy 2", and "Galaxy 3" that you control to the graveyard.'

Total Galaxy 2300 ATK/3000 DEF:
I don't think you want this used with [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Advanced_Ritual_Art"]advanced ritual art[/url] so i added a clause to prevent that. Also, I tweaked the effects so they made more sense. "lose X life points" is vaild wording, however, "inflict X damage" is used unless there is a need to make the life point loss impossible to prevent with damage preventing effects: See The [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/The_Immortal_of_Thunder"]Immortal of Thunder [/url]for an example of what I mean by that.
"This card can only be ritual summoned with the ritual spell card, "Star Summon". (No other ritual summoning effect can be used.) At the start of your Battle Phase, you can reveal any number of "Galaxy" cards in your hand to give this card 1000 ATK for each revealed card until the end of the Battle Phase. When this card leaves the field, banish the top 5 cards of your opponent's deck and inflict 500 damage to your opponent for each monster banished this way."

Also, I assume you wanted the opponent to take the damage? (I recommed that) If not, then change the last sentence to: "When this card leaves the field, banish the top 5 cards of your opponent's deck and take 500 damage for each monster banished this way."

Dont sweat it, we were all new once. Some people just don't know how to be nice and help others out.

edit: galaxy 2 is posted twice

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Mew 2.0 Newbie

Mew 2.0

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[quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1313354129' post='5442678']

galaxy 3 is still OPed though

You should have said draw 2, but then you must banish 2 from your hand
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But then it'd be like not drawing at all. This way, its still beneficial play it. Besides, the whole point is to draw TG and SS.

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