scooby0323 Posted August 23, 2011 Report Share Posted August 23, 2011 Here's the card [img]http://img534.imageshack.us/img534/8629/40862.jpg[/img] EFFECT:This Card cannot be Normal or Set Summoned this Card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 3 "Six Samurai" cards when this card is Special Summoned it can gain one of the following Effects all of the following Effects Cannot be negated upon activation -This Card can only be destroyed by battle -Twice per turn you can negate the Effect of any Card and destroy it -This Card gains a Bushido Tokens each time it destroys a Spell/Trap cardBUMPBump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Marco Polo Posted August 23, 2011 Report Share Posted August 23, 2011 What is this I don't even.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tmgm529 Posted August 23, 2011 Report Share Posted August 23, 2011 The effects are to simple. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Marco Polo Posted August 23, 2011 Report Share Posted August 23, 2011 [quote name='tmgm529' timestamp='1314107619' post='5463480'] The effects are to simple. [/quote] ? How come, if you're thinking about that aspect then it's the opposite. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nu-Mou Knight Posted August 23, 2011 Report Share Posted August 23, 2011 Yay, another guy who knows nothing about punctuation. [quote name='scooby0323' timestamp='1314106809' post='5463430'] -Twice per turn you can negate the Effect of any Card and destroy it -This Card gains a Bushido Tokens each time it destroys a Spell/Trap card [/quote] Lolwut? I don't remember Bushido Tokens...I thought they were Bushido Counters. Plus, I thought we were only activating 1 effect. Unless he has some godly ability to attack Spell and Trap Cards, that third doesn't belong. I say 3/10 for effort. At least the pic was good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lunar Origins Posted August 23, 2011 Report Share Posted August 23, 2011 Oh god, so broken. OCG is quite a bit off, but not bad for a new guy. 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
scooby0323 Posted August 23, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 23, 2011 Nice ive seen effects worse than this that make no since but good grammar and everyone say its perfect but the grammars off a bit also it is a first card so why not deal with the issue by explaining the new user aka me not be a******s.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted August 23, 2011 Report Share Posted August 23, 2011 Card is a pain to summon. 3 Sams on the field is just painful. First effect is meh. Second effect is Shi En on steroids, and people hate Shi En already. Third effect makes no sense. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crystal Remnants Posted August 23, 2011 Report Share Posted August 23, 2011 Okay, a few things you should note: 1) Use punctuation. You know, those things that you use to end sentences and put breaks in the middle of sentences. Otherwise known as periods, exclamation points, question marks, and let us not forget the comma. Otherwise your effect is one big run-on sentence. 2) Your OCG is terrible. "Set Summoned" is not a term. It's "Normal Summoned or Set." And don't say "Can only be destroyed by battle." Say "Cannot be destroyed by card effects." 3) Scooby, your card effects are terrible. The first effect is okay, but nothing special. The second effect is ridiculous and just plain broken. The third effect is useless, since your card can only have one of three possible effects. If you choose the third one, then it looses the ability to even destroy spell/trap cards. Overall, Scooby, this card is bad. It's not the worst I've ever seen. But it's still very bad. The pic isn't good, the grammar is atrocious, and the effects suck. It looks like you tried, but the problem is that you are just like every other new user who comes straight to realistic cards to show off their work. You obviously have the want to make good cards, but you don't know enough to make them. I give this a 1/10, for trying. There's really nothing good about this card though. Also: [quote name='scooby0323' timestamp='1314109610' post='5463520'] Nice ive seen effects worse than this that make no since but good grammar and everyone say its perfect but the grammars off a bit also it is a first card so why not deal with the issue by explaining the new user aka me not be a******s.... [/quote] Don't try to justify the terrible quality of your card by saying you've seen worse on this site. It doesn't matter how bad other people are at making cards if you are just as bad as them, ESPECIALLY when you are quite possibly the worst person at using correct grammar on this site. And don't you dare call ANYONE here an a******. Everyone before me has commented in a completely fair and normal way. In fact, you should be glad they took the time to even comment on your work. If you can't take being told your cards aren't good, don't post them. Because I'm sure no one will miss them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lunar Origins Posted August 23, 2011 Report Share Posted August 23, 2011 [quote name='scooby0323' timestamp='1314109610' post='5463520'] Nice ive seen effects worse than this that make no since but good grammar and everyone say its perfect but the grammars off a bit also it is a first card so why not deal with the issue by explaining the new user aka me not be a******s.... [/quote] I don't take kindly to be called names, but I'll let it slide since you are new here. Don't throw insults around like that, and do try to work on your grammar. Reading posts from people like you tend to hurt my eyes. I believe a more "correct" OCG would be something along the lines of this: Cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This Card can only be Special Summoned by banishing 3 "Six Samurai" cards on your side of the field. When this card is Summoned, this card gains one effect of your choice (I don't know how to correctly word that) -This card cannot be destroyed by card effects. -You can negate the effect of a Spell or Trap card and destroy it twice per turn. -Put 1 Bushido Counter on this card each time a Spell or Trap card is destroyed. Not entirely sure if that is right, I was never any good at OCG. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Agro Posted August 23, 2011 Report Share Posted August 23, 2011 [quote name='Remnants' timestamp='1314119189' post='5463708'] If you can't take being told your cards aren't good, don't post them. Because I'm sure no one will miss them. [/quote] K.O. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crystal Remnants Posted August 23, 2011 Report Share Posted August 23, 2011 Oh, yes, correcting OCG. Forgot to do that. Still, read my above post. Also, Lunar is correct in that your posts are painful to read, and cause a lot of confusion. Cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. Can only be Special Summoned by banishing 3 "Six Samurai" cards on your side of the field. When this card is Summoned; It gains one of the following effect: -This card cannot be destroyed by card effects. -Twice per turn: You can negate the activation of a Spell or Trap card and destroy it. -Each time this card destroys a Spell or Trap card; Place 1 Bushido Counter on it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 24, 2011 Report Share Posted August 24, 2011 "Twice per turn you can negate the Effect of any Card and destroy it" Take out that effect, or at the very least drop it once per turn, and even then it's too much Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted August 24, 2011 Report Share Posted August 24, 2011 No just No Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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