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Flame Wolves [First Attempt]

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[center][center]So, these are the first cards I've ever made. x__x;; They've been changed a lot since I first thought of the idea, and my boyfriend helped me with the wording and with fixing effects and stuff. I'm still not very confident in them, so feedback and comments would be greatly appreciated. ^^ Is there anything else I need? Do I need to fix anything? Is it balanced??? Thanks in advance! c:
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[center][center]The theme of the cards is life point damage and burning.
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[center][center]Flame Wolf's Territory[/center][/center]
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[center][center][img]http://img191.imageshack.us/img191/3651/215434.jpg[/img]
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[center][center]Lore: "All monsters with "Ookami" in their name gain 500 ATK. Once per turn, you can inflict damage to your opponent equal to half the original ATK of 1 face-up "Ookami" monster you control."
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[center][center]Ookami no Jikugisei
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[center][center][img]http://img854.imageshack.us/img854/3651/215434.jpg[/img]
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[center][center]Lore: "When this card is destroyed by battle, Special Summon 1 "Ookami" monster from your hand and inflict damage to your opponent equal to half of the Special Summoned monster's ATK."
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[center][center]Ookami no Moegaru
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[center][center][img]http://img705.imageshack.us/img705/3651/215434.jpg[/img]
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[center][center]Lore: "During either player's damage step, you can send up to 2 FIRE monsters from your hand to the Graveyard to have this card gain 1000 ATK until the End Phase for each sent."
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[center][center]Ookami no Okibi
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[center][center][img]http://img14.imageshack.us/img14/3651/215434.jpg[/img]
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[center][center]Lore: "During your Main Phase, you can send one FIRE monster from your hand to the graveyard to inflict half of the sent monster's ATK to your opponent."
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[center][center]Ookami no Wakai
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[center][center][img]http://img600.imageshack.us/img600/3651/215434.jpg[/img]
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[center][center]Lore: "When this card is destroyed, send 1 card in your opponent's hand to the Graveyard. If a monster was sent, inflict damage to your opponent equal to half the sent monster's ATK. If your opponent cannot send a card, send the top card of their Deck to the Graveyard and inflict 500 damage to their Life Points."
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[center][center]Ookami no Yakedo
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[center][center][img]http://img6.imageshack.us/img6/3651/215434.jpg[/img]
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[center][center]Lore: "When this card is Tribute Summoned successfully, inflict 200 points of damage to your opponent for each FIRE monster in your Graveyard. Once per turn you can tribute 1 FIRE monster you control to inflict 200 to your opponent for each FIRE monster in your Graveyard. Once per duel, you can tribute 1 monster you control to draw cards equal to its level."
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[center][center]UPDATE:
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[center][center]Wolf's Cry
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[center][center][img]http://img585.imageshack.us/img585/3651/215434.jpg[/img]
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[center][center]Lore: "When 1 of your "Ookami" monsters is selected as an attack target, discard 1 card to Special Summon 1 "Ookami" monster from your Deck. Then inflict damage to your opponent equal to half the original attack of the attacking monster."[/center][/center]
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[center][center]Ookami's Flare
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[center][center][img]http://img856.imageshack.us/img856/3651/215434.jpg[/img]
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[center][center]Lore: "Return 3 "Ookami" monsters from your Graveyard to your Deck. Draw 1 card."
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[center][center]A Cold Autumn[/center][/center]
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[center][center][img]http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/3651/215434.jpg[/img][/center][/center]
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[center][center]Lore: "During your opponent's 2nd End Phase after activation, destroy this card. Neither player can declare an attack while this card remains on the field. Up to twice per turn, you can send 1 FIRE monster from your hand to your graveyard to gain life points equal to its original ATK then inflict damage equal to half its ATK to your opponent."[/center][/center]
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[center][center]Incinerating Bite[/center][/center]
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[center][center][img]http://img198.imageshack.us/img198/3651/215434.jpg[/img][/center][/center]
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[center][center]Lore: "Tribute 1 face-up "Ookami" monster and inflict damage to your opponent equal to half its ATK. Then, destroy 1 monster on the field."[/center][/center]
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[center][center]I got all pictures from Google.
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[quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1315984930' post='5513946']
"When this card is destroyed, send 1 card in your opponent's hand to the Graveyard"

For Wakai, if this is a must, you need an alternative. In case your opponent has no cards in his hand or something
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Edited: "When this card is destroyed, send 1 card in your opponent's hand to the Graveyard. If a monster was sent, inflict damage to your opponent equal to half the sent monster's ATK. If your opponent has no card to send, send the top card of their deck to their graveyard, and they take 500." Is that any better? :3

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About Flame Wolf Territory, you should add a drawback, like needing to tributing the monster to inflict damage... imo if you add this, doesn't need to be half of the monster ATK

are you going to do any more of them? they would seem fun to burn your opponent
oh, just something to help: you want, you can use the new ocg, its kinda easy to use ^^

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[quote name='Touya' timestamp='1316033233' post='5514789']
About Flame Wolf Territory, you should add a drawback, like needing to tributing the monster to inflict damage... imo if you add this, doesn't need to be half of the monster ATK[/quote]

There's no need for a drawback if it only inflicts half the damage.

Meh, no complaints about the cards so far, other than Ookami no Wakai. Shits broken.

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[quote name='Power Play' timestamp='1316033555' post='5514800']

There's no need for a drawback if it only inflicts half the damage.

Meh, no complaints about the cards so far, other than Ookami no Wakai. Shits broken.
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If you don't mind me asking, how is Ookami no Wakai broken? o:

[quote name='Touya' timestamp='1316033233' post='5514789']
About Flame Wolf Territory, you should add a drawback, like needing to tributing the monster to inflict damage... imo if you add this, doesn't need to be half of the monster ATK

are you going to do any more of them? they would seem fun to burn your opponent
oh, just something to help: you want, you can use the new ocg, its kinda easy to use ^^
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I actually have a bunch more, but I haven't made the cards for them yet. I still need pictures, Tee-hee. But thanks for the input, it's really appreciated! ^^

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[quote name='Maeka' timestamp='1316033976' post='5514816']
If you don't mind me asking, how is Ookami no Wakai broken? o:[/quote]
Because its effect forces your opponent to discard 1 card AND take damage if they happened to send a monster, just because it got killed and went on a paranormal ragefest. See where I'm going with this?

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[quote name='Power Play' timestamp='1316034183' post='5514826']
Because its effect forces your opponent to discard 1 card AND take damage if they happened to send a monster, just because it got killed and went on a paranormal ragefest. See where I'm going with this?
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I remember when you used to be good... :mellow:
These actually look really well designed. Although, if I was you, I'd remove the last effect of Waiki just because it seems forced. Other than that, good job.

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[quote name='Power Play' timestamp='1316034183' post='5514826']
Because its effect forces your opponent to discard 1 card AND take damage if they happened to send a monster, just because it got killed and went on a paranormal ragefest. See where I'm going with this?
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Oh, ya, I see where you're going with that. What would you suggest I do to fix it?

[quote name='Alisa Illinichina Amiella' timestamp='1316034527' post='5514840']

I remember when you used to be good... :mellow:
These actually look really well designed. Although, if I was you, I'd remove the last effect of Waiki just because it seems forced. Other than that, good job.
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Awh, thank you! I only added the second effect because someone suggested I add more to Wakai's effect. I'll probably take off the second effect again. x3

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[quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1316061110' post='5515970']
Flare's effect is meh

as for Wolf's Cry, make a more specific Ookami monster.  Yes it's only half the atk for the burn, but still
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im curious as to your reason for having to specify. It seems fine to me

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[quote name='overloadpower' timestamp='1316065892' post='5516050']
nice cards i was thinking of making cards of wolves bcuz i love wolves and nobody made them but now i can sit, grab popcorn, wait for the updates :)
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xD Awh, thanks! That was MY reasoning behind making them! XD

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[quote name='overloadpower' timestamp='1316502744' post='5528153']
i love incinerating bite for some reason
wolves atum i dont get
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I personally love the picture. x3
A Cold Autumn is pretty much my version of Swords of Revealing light for the Ookami's. It also lets you put more wolves into the grave yard while burning. It sets up for Yakedo. c: I hope that helped explain!

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