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[left]Credit: Template by LC edited by me[/left]
[left]Nexus Circle by DG[/spoiler][/left]
[left][spoiler=CARDS][spoiler=AHERO-EN000 (Armored HERO Plas-max)]
[url="http://img443.imageshack.us/img443/379/0plasmaxxq.png"][img]http://img444.imageshack.us/img444/9249/0plasmax.png[/img][/url]
Can be Special Summoned [i][b](from your hand)[/b][/i] if you [b][i]control no[/i][/b] Monster Cards. If Summoned by this effect, this card gains 600 ATK and DEF. When attacked by a monster who has 500 or more ATK higher than this card: You can discard 2 card from your hand; The attacking monster is banished. If the monster is banished successfully, this card is switched to Defense Position.[/spoiler]
[spoiler=AHERO-EN001 (Armored HERO Fiendman)]
[url="http://img822.imageshack.us/img822/2490/1fiendman.png"][img]http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/2490/1fiendman.png[/img][/url]
If this is card is Tributed to Tribute Summon a "HERO" monster, this card is treated as 2 Tributes. [i](Can be treated as 2 Tributes?)[/i] Once during each of your turns, you can Tribute 1 monster you control to gain 1 of the following effects for the turn:
• This card can declare an additional attack.
• Special Summon 1 "Armored HERO" monster (from your hand or Deck.)
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[spoiler=カード][spoiler=AHERO-JP000 {Ａ・ＨＥＲＯ プラズマン (Armored HERO Plasman)}]
[url="http://img80.imageshack.us/img80/963/0plasman.png"][img]http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/963/0plasman.png[/img][/url]
for effect look at English version (Armored HERO Plas-max)[/spoiler]
[spoiler=AHERO-JP001 {Ａ・ＨＥＲＯ デーモンマン (Armored HERO Demonman)}]
[url="http://img836.imageshack.us/img836/5135/1demonman.png"][img]http://img694.imageshack.us/img694/5135/1demonman.png[/img][/url]
for effect look at English version (Armored HERO Fiendman)[/spoiler]

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the jap is not 100% accurate... its also just for show...

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[quote name='Chaos Sonic' timestamp='1319845889' post='5605168']
New HEROS?!

SWEEEEET!!!

Plas-Max is awesome!! Can't see anything wrong with it ^^
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wow thanks chaos...

u understand name right... Plasma (the flamable gas (also doing with effect)) + Max

and jap heroes always end in man or lady... so Plasma + man

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Wouldn't you usually post more than one of these if you're making an archetype/sub archetype?

Anyways, to the card.. it's really confusing. Its effect doesn't specify what spell and trap it destroys when summoned; do they have to be yours or they could be your opponent's? Fix that up. The 500 LP cost basically makes no difference too, don't know why you put that in. Also, the 300 ATK boost is nothing for a 1200 ATK monster (depending on how you reword the first effect, maybe you should fix this one as well).Why not just make it a 1500 ATK monster with no ATK boost? It just seems unnecessary. Furthermore, when attacked, it's effect is apparently not optional, so then what happens if you don't have cards in your hand to discard? Is the discard a part of the effect or a cost for its banishing effect? It doesn't seem clear at all to me.

Anyways, its effects are just really random.. :/
UP'ed as well, (if to SS you need to destroy a spell/trap YOU control that is)

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[quote name='Gandorator' timestamp='1319847918' post='5605228']
Wouldn't you usually post more than one of these if you're making an archetype/sub archetype?

Anyways, to the card.. it's really confusing. Its effect doesn't specify what spell and trap it destroys when summoned; do they have to be yours or they could be your opponent's? Fix that up. The 500 LP cost basically makes no difference too, don't know why you put that in. Also, the 300 ATK boost is nothing for a 1200 ATK monster (depending on how you reword the first effect, maybe you should fix this one as well).Why not just make it a 1500 ATK monster with no ATK boost? It just seems unnecessary. Furthermore, when attacked, it's effect is apparently not optional, so then what happens if you don't have cards in your hand to discard? Is the discard a part of the effect or a cost for its banishing effect? It doesn't seem clear at all to me.

Anyways, its effects are just really random.. :/
UP'ed as well, (if to SS you need to destroy a spell/trap YOU control that is)
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I just started and am working on new ones...

thnx I will be updating shortly

sorry if confusing

PLAS-MAX UPDATED THNX TO GANDORATOR

anything [b]BOLDED[/b] and [i]ITALICIZED[/i] are like little OCG fixes i noticed i could make... mistakes are still in card tho

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[quote name='BT.' timestamp='1319848776' post='5605237']
I just started and am working on new ones...

thnx I will be updating shortly

sorry if confusing

PLAS-MAX UPDATED THNX TO GANDORATOR

anything [b]BOLDED[/b] and [i]ITALICIZED[/i] are like little OCG fixes i noticed i could make... mistakes are still in card tho
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Alright, the effect is now much better in my opinion.
Just a couple of OCG fixes (yet I'm not an expert on this, so take it with a grain of salt)

[quote][i] If you control no Monster Cards, you can Special Summon this card from your hand[/i][font=Georgia]. If Summoned by this effect, this card gains 600 ATK and DEF. When attacked by a monster [i]that[/i] has 500 or more ATK than this card,[i] you can activate the following effect[/i]: Discard 2 cards from your hand; [i]Banish the attacking monster[/i]. If this effect resolves, switch this card to Defense Position. [/font][/quote]

Anyways, I think maybe you could change it to "discard 1 card" as well, or more like "send 1 card from your hand to the Graveyard", since 2 cards is a bit much imo for such an effect.

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[size=1]hey ragnarok.... [/size]

adding Demonman

Fiendman/Demonman is up

thnx for voters in poll for rating 9s and 10s even though it was 1 card....

Next is Armored HERO Machinegunner / Ａ・ＨＥＲＯ マシンガンマン (Machinegunman)

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Fiendman's a good card, although I don't recall there being a lot of double tribute HEROs, except Neos (I take it you're going to make double tribute A-HEROs? )

Anyways, for this sort of effect, and its level being 5, maybe you'd want to increase his ATK a little (2200-2300 maybe)

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[quote name='Daemon' timestamp='1319919170' post='5606474']
What is the concept of this set? The just seem to be random effects. I know HEROes are mainly based on SS and FS. The cards are alright except the new on is OP'd. I can be used as a double tribute and can SS 1 HERO monster OR declare and additional attack.
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no concept '.'

btw thats why i wants a small atk... it was 1900 first

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