Maynard Kemp Posted November 5, 2011 Report Share Posted November 5, 2011 Well the God of the End Pic is the same for now. Have not found any to satify my wants of the card. I really do not care though how many people use it though. [img]http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/9213/511162.jpg[/img] Effect: As long as this card remains face up on the field during each player's End Phase: Place 1 End Counters on each face-up monster, except "God of the End". Monsters lose 500 DEF for each End Counter on them. Destroy a monster if its DEF becomes 0 by this effect. This card's DEF is equal to the combined Levels of all End Counters on the field x 500. [img]http://img52.imageshack.us/img52/9213/511162.jpg[/img] Effect: If this card would be destroyed by effects using End Counters instead of sending it to the graveyard sent it to your hand. If this card attacks an opponents monster degrees that cars ATK and DEF by the number of End Counters on it x 300. [img]http://img822.imageshack.us/img822/9213/511162.jpg[/img] Effect: After activation, place 7 End Counters on this card. During each of your turns you can move 1 End Counter from this card to another face-up card that you can place a End Counter on. When there are no End Counters on this card, destroy it. [img]http://img696.imageshack.us/img696/9213/511162.jpg[/img] Effect: If this card is destroyed by battle, or by your opponent's card effect while it is a Monster Card, equip it to a monster your opponent controls during the End Phase with 3 or more "End Counters". Take control of the equipped monster. [img]http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/9213/511162.jpg[/img] Effect: Once per turn, you can place 3 End Counter on 1 monster your opponent controls. If you activate this effect, this card cannot attack during this turn. [img]http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/9213/511162.jpg[/img] Effect: Remove all "End Counter" from your the field. Increase your life points for ever "End Counter" removed from play x 200. [img]http://img252.imageshack.us/img252/9213/511162.jpg[/img] Effect: Remove up to 5 "End Counters" on the field. Draw up to the number of cards from you deck as the number of "End Counters" removed by this effect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alice Moonflowyr Posted November 5, 2011 Report Share Posted November 5, 2011 Pic is majorly overused. OCG is meh. Eff is alright. 5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anti-Apocryphal Posted November 5, 2011 Report Share Posted November 5, 2011 [quote name='Maynard Kemp' timestamp='1320452905' post='5617868'] Here is a card I have made and is my first card ever. I am not sure about making a set around him or not. If I do make a set around him it will be my first set ever. So I would like feed back on anything I could improve on, and if you think I should make a set around him. [img]http://img593.imageshack.us/img593/9213/511162.jpg[/img] Effect: As long as this card remains fac up on the field during each player's End Phase: Place 1 End Counters on each face-up monster, except God of the End. Monsters lose 500 DEF for each End Counter on them. Destroy a monster if its DEF becomes 0 by this effect. This card's DEF is equal to the combined Levels of all End Counters on the field x 500. [/quote] I'm pretty sure "End" is supposed to be quoted like "End". You've forgotten ":" and ";" in the OCG as well. Overused picture, as stated. Alright effect. [6.7/10] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Agaming Posted November 5, 2011 Report Share Posted November 5, 2011 don't post in another person's thread unless givin permission As for the card, pic as said is overused try and find another cool pic. OCG meh minor spelling errors but the effect itself is good, almost like the Alien cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anti-Apocryphal Posted November 5, 2011 Report Share Posted November 5, 2011 [quote name='Dark Heart' timestamp='1320507409' post='5618895'] [b]don't post in another person's thread unless givin permission[/b] As for the card, pic as said is overused try and find another cool pic. OCG meh minor spelling errors but the effect itself is good, almost like the Alien cards [/quote] What? You don't need permission to post in a thread. What forum are YOU talking about? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted November 5, 2011 Report Share Posted November 5, 2011 [quote name='X-Judgement' timestamp='1320507518' post='5618901']What? You don't need permission to post in a thread. What forum are YOU talking about? [/quote] There is a time and a place to be a Grammar Nazi, and this is not one of them. You know what he meant. As for the card this topic is supposed to be about, I like how it's main effect is reminiscent of Osiris' anime effect. Speaking of Osiris, although its stats are listed as "X000 / X000", you should put "?" for the DEF of this card, which is dictated by the "total number" of End Counters, not their "combined Levels", as counters do not have levels. It would take a while for this effect to destroy some monsters, especially because there are cards that could do destruction far more easily, and this proves to be a double-edged sword because it could ultimately destroy your own monsters. The concept of this card is good, but it could have been done better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anti-Apocryphal Posted November 5, 2011 Report Share Posted November 5, 2011 Actually I don't. I honestly don't know what he means by 'need permission to post'. I would like to know why I'm a 'Grammar Nazi,' and why I got a warning. I'm very confused about it because I don't even know what I did that was so wrong, I even looked in the rules of this section and the rules of YCM and couldn't find anything. I can take a warning and a yelling at, but it's a little ridiculous unless I know exactly what I did. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted November 5, 2011 Report Share Posted November 5, 2011 You reported Heavykevy for posting a card in this thread, and that is what Dark Heart was referring to. It just seemed like you were getting on his case for not being clear with his post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maynard Kemp Posted November 6, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 6, 2011 I had no idea that pictures got overused but I guess it would happen a lot since most people do not have the skills to make their own and need to use search engines like google. I will try to find a better pick. As of the effect I know it is like a double bladed sword and I like that about it. It requires the user of this card to know what he is doing or he will just be hurting himself/herself. I will try to improve on the effect more, however, I do not want it to become an actual god card. I had the intention on making this card a leader of a set that worked together so I tried to watch its power. I was thinking 2 End Counters per an end phase yet that just seemed to powerful and impossible to manage when dealing with your own creature(s). The OCG is hard to get a hold off though because its been a while since I last played Yu-Gi-Oh. I used other cards as resources to get the idea of it. Thanks for your support and I will get to editing to it. One last thing, I know some forums can be a little touchy when it comes to creating new threads so when I do get ready to post the series of End Counters do I have to post it as a comment on this one to reveal the rest or can I create a whole new thread for them while it still introduces this card? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted November 6, 2011 Report Share Posted November 6, 2011 If you want to make this part of a set, then you can either create an entirely new thread for the set or simply edit the first post. I would prefer if you edited the first post and changed the title of this thread so that you are constantly adding to the series. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anti-Apocryphal Posted November 6, 2011 Report Share Posted November 6, 2011 [quote name='Phantom Roxas' timestamp='1320537528' post='5620079'] You reported Heavykevy for posting a card in this thread, and that is what Dark Heart was referring to. It just seemed like you were getting on his case for not being clear with his post. [/quote] So..let's see if I'm getting this right. I report Heavykevy for posting a card and don't say anything about it. Dark Heart comes and says not to post without permission, yet not stating as to whom he is talking- it can only be assumed from my point-of-view that he's talking to me because he doesn't quote Heavykevy. Then I respond because I think that he's talking to me, and that's when you come in. It was just some miscommunication. If Dark Heart would of quoted Heavykevy, this wouldn't of happened. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted November 7, 2011 Report Share Posted November 7, 2011 If it was miscommunication, then that's understandable. I've withdrawn the warning, so let that be the end of that. By the way, Maynard Kemp, I never said you should have made this into a god card. I was simply noting the similarities between this card and Osiris/Slifer. I get that you made the card a double-edged sword so that they player can strategize, but then the player's priority becomes actually using the card right instead of winning the game. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maynard Kemp Posted November 7, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 7, 2011 Okay well I have updated the Set with some extra monsters and spells that take use of the End Counters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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