Rivenroth Posted November 9, 2011 Report Share Posted November 9, 2011 Alright, I felt like making a card so... I made one! [s]I'll edit the picture when I decide I have time to, so don't comment about the lack of background[/s]. - Edited by BT. Aha! I got the text so tiny I'm tempted to not post the Lore just to test you people... I haven't familiarized myself with the current Card Grammar, so correct any mistakes you see, rate and uhm... Yeah. Oh, please give me some feedback too, reasoning for your rating and etc etc. [spoiler=This is a Spoiler] [img]http://img38.imageshack.us/img38/5569/toonyubel.png[/img] [spoiler=Lore] Cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. Must be Special Summoned from your hand by Tributing 3 monsters you control while you control a face-up "Toon World". When Special Summoned, destroy all other monsters on the field. During each of your End Phases, you must discard 1 card from your hand. If you do not, destroy this card. This is the only card your opponent can target for an attack. When this card is attacked: Negate the attack; Inflict damage to your opponent equal to the Level of the attacking monster x300. If "Toon World" leaves the field: Destroy this card; Both players discard their hands and draw cards equal to the number of cards discarded. [/spoiler] [/spoiler] Edit: BT. redid the card for me so, thanks to BT. for the background and making the card just generally prettier! Using BT's OCG correction as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Yairnet Posted November 9, 2011 Report Share Posted November 9, 2011 Loved the pic but, the effect is not all that special Even though, 10/10 Good Job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeoRWBY65 Posted November 9, 2011 Report Share Posted November 9, 2011 I like it. I give it 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tentacruel Posted November 10, 2011 Report Share Posted November 10, 2011 It's alright, but underpowered. Change it to 2 tributes and make it kill all cards on the field. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BTÂ Posted November 10, 2011 Report Share Posted November 10, 2011 OCG FIX: Cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. Must be Special Summoned from your hand by Tributing 3 monsters you control while you control a face-up "Toon World". When Special Summoned, destroy all other monsters on the field. During each of your End Phases, you must discard 1 card from your hand. If you do not, destroy this card. This is the only card your opponent can target for an attack. When this card is attacked: Negate the attack; Inflict damage to your opponent equal to the Level of the attacking monster x300. If "Toon World" leaves the field: Destroy this card; Both players discard their hands and draw cards equal to the number of cards discarded. For the old OCG it was great.. .needed capitalization.. pic is awesome... effect is awesome... I think Tributing should be two... btw I'm gonna PM u a gift for this awesome card! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Astro Dude Posted November 10, 2011 Report Share Posted November 10, 2011 Do a Toon Deedlit and I'll be impressed. Here: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=L2HMp6hUlTs&list=FL5Q3BieJEdb07bOpm3fBmcA&index=4&feature=plpp_video For inspiration. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BTÂ Posted November 10, 2011 Report Share Posted November 10, 2011 is this spam? I forgot to rate! 9.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rivenroth Posted November 10, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 10, 2011 [quote name='Tentacruel' timestamp='1320886354' post='5629434'] Change it to 2 tributes [/quote] I'm leaving it at 3 tributes just because. [quote name='Tentacruel' timestamp='1320886354' post='5629434'] Make it kill all cards on the field. [/quote] I considered that when I was making the card, but not only do I not like derping the whole field, but I was also too lazy to type up the 'Other than Toon World' sentence in there, because I'm lazy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tentacruel Posted November 10, 2011 Report Share Posted November 10, 2011 Ah, I see, it would nuke itself. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rivenroth Posted November 10, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 10, 2011 [quote name='Tentacruel' timestamp='1320928572' post='5630539'] Ah, I see, it would nuke itself. [/quote] Pretty much, yes. I do appreciate the input though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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