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[Brothar] Sword of Fire and Water

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[IMG]http://i.imgur.com/VL4aw.png[/IMG]

Sword render source: [url="http://browse.deviantart.com/resources/stockart/3drenders/?qh=&section=&q=#/d4fqrtr"]http://browse.deviantart.com/resources/stockart/3drenders/?qh=&section=&q=#/d4fqrtr[/url]
Fire C4D source: [url="http://browse.deviantart.com/fractals/rawfractal/?qh=&section=&q=c4d#/d381xg5"]http://browse.deviantart.com/fractals/rawfractal/?qh=&section=&q=c4d#/d381xg5[/url]
Water C4D source: [url="http://browse.deviantart.com/resources/stockart/3drenders/?qh=&section=&q=c4d#/d3a9w37"]http://browse.deviantart.com/resources/stockart/3drenders/?qh=&section=&q=c4d#/d3a9w37[/url]
Background source: [url="http://browse.deviantart.com/fractals/rawfractal/#/d4fqqmu"]http://browse.deviantart.com/fractals/rawfractal/#/d4fqqmu[/url]

Comment, give feedback, etc. Hope you like it.

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[quote name='Neo The Fallen' timestamp='1321891892' post='5656908']
Of course thnx dude!
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At least write in you sig that "this sig was made my Brothar" please. Thanks.

[quote name='Glitch' timestamp='1321908546' post='5657425']
And it looks pretty good, Thar. :D
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Thanks. Glad you like it.

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[quote name='Neo The Fallen' timestamp='1321984482' post='5659322']
I added in Photoshop -By Brother-
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You could possibly make it much bigger. As in Size 18 font outside the sig, put the whole sig in a spoiler.
His art was VERY good. HE deserves much more credit than that.

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[quote name='Neo The Fallen' timestamp='1322307234' post='5666621']
ok I will do right away. but can someone please tell me how to make spoiler? then I could add in the spoiler name "Sig by Brother"

EDIT= I completly agree with you sgrug4 this sword is GODLY and he deserve all the credit that can possible be just!!
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[spoiler=Sig by Brothar]*insert Sig here*[/spoiler]
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It doesnt make my spoiler work can you help me meanwhile I`ll just put Sig by Brother below it can someone help me?
EXMPLE:
[spoiler=Sig by Brothar][url="http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/542/vl4awcopy.jpg/"][img]http://img41.imageshack.us/img41/4614/vl4awcopy.jpg[/img][/url][/spoiler]

This is how I did it(i add the *)
[spoiler=Sig by Brothar][url="http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/542/vl4awcopy.jpg/"][img]http://img41.imageshack.us/img41/4614/vl4awcopy.jpg[/*img][/url][/spoiler]

EDIT: Nevermind I guess it just need to be posted to get this spoiled

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[quote name='Cursed Reaction' timestamp='1322335351' post='5667289']
Oversharpened, overcontrasted. Heavily burnt out. No depth in the slightest. The flow is going in two directions, which is really distracting. Not to mention there's no focal.

Not to mention that, to be honest, all your sources were really low-quality.
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Awesome. Thanks.

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[quote name='Cursed Reaction' timestamp='1322336114' post='5667337']
I can't tell whether you're being sarcastic or not, but I was giving criticism :S

Because, so far, this thread has contained no tips at all. I gave you some.
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Well usually when I say "Sig", it's not really a sig. It's just either a banner or a work of digital art with no particular style, just experimentation and expression.

Whether it was sarcasm or not, I'll leave that up to you, I guess. Nonetheless, criticism is becoming too bias for me nowadays. Everyone seems to think they know everything about doing something right when really, personally, they just have their own style more than anything.

That's just how I feel. I like it, however I do agree with the overly contrasting part.

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[quote name='Brothar' timestamp='1322337383' post='5667400']


Well usually when I say "Sig", it's not really a sig. It's just either a banner or a work of digital art with no particular style, just experimentation and expression.

Whether it was sarcasm or not, I'll leave that up to you, I guess. Nonetheless, criticism is becoming too bias for me nowadays. Everyone seems to think they know everything about doing something right when really, personally, they just have their own style more than anything.

That's just how I feel. I like it, however I do agree with the overly contrasting part.
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But no-one knows your style. Which isn't exactly gonna help when we're all criticizing. Mention in your OP what you were aiming towards. Then, we know what to say. Otherwise I stick to general art rules.

Near the top where the two C4Ds meet, perhaps to the middle-top of the piece, there is a very awkward piece of multicoloured noise. All pixelated.

The two cutout rectangle shaped things are just distracting to what I assume is the focal, the sword. It's some sort of attempt at framing, but it adds so little that you might as well remove it.

There is some attempt at blending the C4Ds to the sword, namely erasing parts that would be behind it, but there is just a pile of black mush where the two C4Ds have met.

Also, every so often, my eyes just drift away towards the background when you really should be looking at the focal. Use some sort of radial gradient from white to black just to keep focus on the sword.

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