Panda^.^ Posted November 11, 2011 Report Share Posted November 11, 2011 HELLO MAY I HAVE YOUR ATTENTION...... excuse me my YCM is messed up or my comp.. so my pictures even though its on the maker thingy the PIC wont come up... ive tried using the pics i used B4 cuz i thought it might be the new pics but sadly no.. all of them wont work. so expect my awesome cards ( i hope they r ) without pics..i hope someone could help me.. or tell me if u have the same prob\ EDIT: great F**k!!!!!the new cards wont upload now f**k F**k ahhhhh... i will post the name and the effect EDIT: Yay i found a loophole... Please comment your favorite one!! [Spoiler=Cygnus knights][Spoiler=NW][img]http://img3.imageshack.us/img3/2899/287930a.jpg[/img]x2MAX[/spoiler] If this card were to be special summoned, banish one card from your hand. This card can be special summoned by banishing 1 DARK monsters from your graveyard. Once per turn when this card is to be attacked by a level 7 or higher monster; negate the attack and the monster loses 300 ATK. [Spoiler=TB][img]http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/6705/287930i.jpg[/img]x2MAX[/spoiler] If this card were to be special summoned, banish one card from your hand. This card can be special summoned by banishing 1 WATER monsters from your graveyard. This card deals piercing damage. All monsters that your opponent controls loses 200 ATK and DEF. [Spoiler=BW][img]http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/6632/287930r.jpg[/img]x2MAX[/spoiler] If this card were to be special summoned, banish one card from your hand. This card can be special summoned by banishing 1 FIRE monsters from your graveyard. When your opponent declares an attack, you can sacrifice this card to destroy the attackign card. When this card is destroyed that way, special summon this monster at end phase. [Spoiler=WA][img]http://img443.imageshack.us/img443/276/287930h.jpg[/img]x2MAX[/spoiler] [Spoiler=DW][img]http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/6310/287930.jpg[/img]x2MAX[/spoiler] If this card were to be special summoned, banish one card from your hand. This card can be special summoned by banishing 1 LIGHT monsters from your graveyard. Once per turn draw 1 card; if it is a monster card,you can banish it to summon a lvl 4 or lower monster from your hand.[/spoiler] [Spoiler=Resistance][Spoiler=BM][img]http://img20.imageshack.us/img20/4042/287930e.jpg[/img]x2MAX[/spoiler] [Spoiler=WH][img]http://img5.imageshack.us/img5/6705/287930i.jpg[/img]x2MAX[/spoiler] If this card were to be special summoned, banish one card from your hand. This card can be special summoned by banishing 1 monster card from your graveyard. When this card destroys a monster by battle, deal damage to your opponent equal to his/her monster's level x200 [Spoiler=M][img]http://img15.imageshack.us/img15/3000/287930c.jpg[/img]x3[/spoiler] [/spoiler] wat you guys been waiting for!!! i believe it is VERY unique so...Hero's will be like HERO-XXXX somethin like that NEW[Spoiler=Hero] HERO-Aran [Spoiler=Aran] [img]http://img337.imageshack.us/img337/6705/287930i.jpg[/img][Spoiler=lore]This card can be special summoned by banishing 2 effect monster card from your graveyard. Once per turn when this card destroys a monster, this card can attack one more time. If this card has attacked twice in a turn, pay up to 3000 life points to destroy 1 card per 500LP. Once per turn send 2 spell cards from the field; when this card attacks, gain LP equal to the target monsters ATK, that card is not destroyed.[/spoiler][/spoiler] [Spoiler=Evan][img]http://img836.imageshack.us/img836/3589/287930u.jpg[/img][Spoiler=lore]If this card were to be special summoned, banish one card from your hand. This card can be special summoned by banishing 2 monsters from your graveyard. Once per turn discard up to 4 cards from your hand; destroy the set spell or trap cards equal to the amount of cards you discarded. IT SUPPORTS OTHERS XD[/spoiler][/spoiler][/spoiler] [Spoiler=CS][img]http://img638.imageshack.us/img638/3000/287930c.jpg[/img]x1[/spoiler] If this card were to be special summoned, banish one card from your hand. This card can be special summoned by banishing 2 WATER monster card from your graveyard. When this card is destroyed by a card effect special summon all banished WATER monsters banished from this card's effect. Once per turn roll a dice; if you roll a 1~2 draw 1 card. If you roll a 3~5 Special summon 1 Nautilus token (Machine/level1/WATER/3000/3000) until your end phase. If you roll a 6 destroy 1 monster on the field. ( only 1 per deck because if its 2, lets say CS in hand, use deck searcher, get another CS, then summon 2 thunder breaker, lay down the tributal lighnitin or watever( the summoned, destroy all) next turn destroy all, summon CS, banish 2 TB then the other CS from hand. use dice effect, use a card to destroy the CS on the field, summon TB,TB,CS then easily a end game ) fix OCG and many more please Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simping For Hina Posted November 11, 2011 Report Share Posted November 11, 2011 http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/user/105552-nightwalker/ :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Panda^.^ Posted November 11, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 11, 2011 i just got owned........... rate please or any comments except for humiliating me? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Welche the crab Posted November 11, 2011 Report Share Posted November 11, 2011 Hey! Don't take anything I'm about to say personally, I'm just trying to help! Effect: Hmm, from the way you worded it does this mean that if you want to SS it you need to banish a card from your hand? If so that is pretty interesting. Personally I would add in something that says if this card is destroyed by card effect you can return that banished card to your hand because as is this card isn't that strong. Can't say I've ever seen that idea before. Banishing two DARKs in the grave is good here because it makes this a lot easier to Summon. The negation effect seems okay, but I would even add more into it, like something about making the Level 7 or higher monster lose 500 ATK to spice it up. Stats: Well first thing to say is that this is a Level 6 with 2300 ATK. That is not common and I will tell you why. People don't want to waste their resources getting something with 2300 ATK out. I would definitely suggest raising that by 200 points. The fact that it's a warrior means it could be using with Immortal Bushi which would be interesting. DARK is of course a great attribute for any card and here it means that once this card is gone, it just becomes more fuel for a new copy of itself. Pic: I'm always hesitant to comment on a picture because I have experience making cards and finding that good picture can be quite tough, but here I need to raise a concern. That black background is just not right. Cards never have black backgrounds that I can think of. I would suggest either going into requests and getting in rendered and having a background stuck on, or if you want to you could just find a new picture. No rating or OCG advice here. Ratings are pointless numbers that no one puts any real thought into and I just suck at OCG. Hope this helped! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Panda^.^ Posted November 11, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 11, 2011 okok sure i would dfinately add lose atk by 300-500 raise atk but im still hesistent on bringing back the monster Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Welche the crab Posted November 11, 2011 Report Share Posted November 11, 2011 Well the thing is that having to banish a card really makes this not worth running today. If you really want no returning feature you need to raise the ATK and add in the ATK loss effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Panda^.^ Posted November 11, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 11, 2011 i just found out taht i had to banish 3 monsters so i fixe d it so i only had to banish 2fixed and added new card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Welche the crab Posted November 11, 2011 Report Share Posted November 11, 2011 Oh ya now it looks like something that could easily be played in a competitive deck. Pretty easy to bring out, good ATK, but you need to ditch a card. Nice! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Panda^.^ Posted November 11, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 11, 2011 thanksadded a card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 11, 2011 Report Share Posted November 11, 2011 really good pics you got there for Thunder Breaker, 200 atk/def loss is virtually nothing, make it more Blaze Blizzard is a bit too broken for its recycling effect. There's a reason why Heavy Storm is restricted Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Panda^.^ Posted November 11, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 11, 2011 fixed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 12, 2011 Report Share Posted November 12, 2011 not for Thunder Breaker it isn't I still see only the 200 atk/def gain right there Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Panda^.^ Posted November 12, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 12, 2011 oh sorry i didnt change the lore sorry Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 12, 2011 Report Share Posted November 12, 2011 all you changed it to was 200 to 300 overall that's not really much of a change you should have said 500 instead or something Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Panda^.^ Posted November 13, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 13, 2011 oh ok sure but isnt 500 a lot? if he had a lets say he SS a monster and had a level 7 monster, the lvl 7 was 2400 and the SS was a lvl 3 900 then its 2000/400 then i SS a wind archer destroy the SSed 400 monster 1600, then i destroy lvl7, 500 then i attack again with WA 2000, then its 3100 in one turn and if i had more it could be OTK since i can SS al of them in the same turn(if i had enough hand/grave material) but still im still accepting ur request since ur more, wise in YCM ways so im still sasking if i should change it but o well thats too situational so ill change it.added 3 new cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Panda^.^ Posted November 13, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 13, 2011 fixed and added 1 moreEDIT maybe i should make canon shooter level 7 since i can summon it with one monster, TBH im asking for ur opinion (Ragnarok1945) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 13, 2011 Report Share Posted November 13, 2011 for Wild Hunter, the burn effect should be fine for Cannon Shooter though, change the 1-3 effect that one kind of makes drawing a card WAY too easy to pull off, and that makes it slightly broken Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Panda^.^ Posted November 13, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 13, 2011 i found out the mistakes fixing it...... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 13, 2011 Report Share Posted November 13, 2011 you can make the draw card 1 effect still but make it like only when the dice hits 1 or 2, at the most Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Panda^.^ Posted November 13, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 13, 2011 how bout chaging the 1-3 for somethingthen how bout 1-2 draw 3-5 token 6 destroy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 13, 2011 Report Share Posted November 13, 2011 yeah, as I stated, you can change it 1 or 2 otherwise if you keep 1-3, then I'd say draw 1 card, but then during your end phase you must also discard 1 card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Panda^.^ Posted November 13, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 13, 2011 EDIT: fixed to level 7 and 1-2 3-5 6fixed how is it now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 13, 2011 Report Share Posted November 13, 2011 yeah also with regards to the token that is really high stats for the token, and you said nothing about they can't attack or anything seems a bit too easy, so you may want to look into that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Panda^.^ Posted November 13, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 13, 2011 because the thing only for 1 turn max so i thaought why not a thing that turns the tablse Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 13, 2011 Report Share Posted November 13, 2011 but 1 turn in many cases is all you need speaking of which I just noticed there's no level on the token Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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