Nathanael D. Striker Posted November 12, 2011 Report Share Posted November 12, 2011 [center][img]http://www.iaza.com/work/110918C/iaza12049470411200.png[/img][/center] [center][size=1]Credit to Inferno Knight LC[/size][/center] [center]Hello my friends and welcome to Striker's Quick N' Easy. Thanksgiving is quickly approaching, yet I forgot to buy Turkeys for the feast. This is where you come in. Go out and buy me some Turkeys. The people who bring me the three best Turkeys will receive a little award.[/center] [center][spoiler=What you really will be doing][/center] [center]You are to create a Winged Beast-Type Monster. Simple right? I'll let your creativity figure out the rest. Also, post your card here.[/center] [center][/spoiler][/center] [center][spoiler=How your cards will be graded][/center] [center]I'll look at your cards from a realistic standpoint. I'll mainly look at its playability, balance, creativity, and Card Grammar. If you want a reason for the score you got, PM me.[/center] [center]Card Grammar: ?/20[/center] [center]Creativity: ?/25[/center] [center]Playability: ?/25[/center] [center]Balance: ?/30[/center] [center]Total: ?/100[/center] [center][/spoiler][/center] [center][spoiler=Prizes][/center] [center]1st Place: 200 Points and 3 Likes[/center] [center]2nd Place: 150 Points and 2 Likes[/center] [center]3rd Place: 100 Points and 1 Like[/center] [center][/spoiler][/center] [center][spoiler=Deadline][/center] [center]November 15th should do fine. If you need more time, PM me with a reasonable reason.[/center] [center][/spoiler][/center] [center][spoiler=Contestants][/center] [center]1. [b]Renji[/b][/center] [center]2. AggroDrago[/center] [center][b]3. Ramei11[/b][/center] [center][b]4. Blue-Eyes493[/b][/center] [center]5. [b]Merciless Overlord Knic[/b][/center] [center][b]6. Clear Vice Dragon[/b][/center] [center][b]7. Darkplant - FEAR[/b][/center] [center][b]8. n8thegr8[/b][/center] [center]9. White Archaic Daemon[/center] [center][/spoiler][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CMRenji Posted November 12, 2011 Report Share Posted November 12, 2011 Striker, I would like to join your contest, so I can practice my card making skills. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nathanael D. Striker Posted November 12, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 12, 2011 [quote name='◊Renji◊' timestamp='1321127761' post='5635331'] Striker, I would like to join your contest, so I can practice my card making skills. [/quote] Alright then, get your card in by the 15th. Preferably sooner because this type of contest runs quick. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CMRenji Posted November 12, 2011 Report Share Posted November 12, 2011 Awesome. Awesome to the max. I'll start making a new card asap. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Agro Posted November 12, 2011 Report Share Posted November 12, 2011 I'm in. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nathanael D. Striker Posted November 12, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 12, 2011 [quote name='AggroDrago' timestamp='1321130389' post='5635396'] I'm in. [/quote] Welcome good sir. I hope you enjoy the festivities. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Remei11 Posted November 12, 2011 Report Share Posted November 12, 2011 I'm in too. Gotta get back into this, after being away for a while. I'll get my card in pretty soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blue-Eyes493 Posted November 12, 2011 Report Share Posted November 12, 2011 No entry fee? If not, I'll join. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nathanael D. Striker Posted November 12, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 12, 2011 [quote name='Blue-Eyes493' timestamp='1321132141' post='5635466'] No entry fee? If not, I'll join. [/quote] Here is a rule of thumb: if a entry fee is not mentioned, there is none. Welcome to you and Remei. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CMRenji Posted November 12, 2011 Report Share Posted November 12, 2011 [center]Well, here's my card Striker. Tried messing around with counters, not sure if it's as useful as I think it is but oh well. [img]http://img27.imageshack.us/img27/2654/hyperwing.png[/img] [size=1]IC: Jazin Kay[/size][/center] [center] [i][b]When this card is summoned, you can send Spell and Trap Cards from your side of the field and your hand to the Graveyard; Place or remove any kind of counter on the field equal to the number of Spell and Trap Cards sent to the Graveyard. While you control this face-up monster; You may double the amount of counters you place on a card by paying 300 Life Points. When this card is destroyed; Remove all counters from either player's side of the field.[/b][/i][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Merciless Overlord Knic Posted November 12, 2011 Report Share Posted November 12, 2011 may I join?here's my card:[img]webkit-fake-url://AEECD55A-02CA-4034-914E-D125B091CD53/image.tiff[/img]that didn't work. I'll try another way Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Northern Sage Posted November 12, 2011 Report Share Posted November 12, 2011 Imma joining. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Merciless Overlord Knic Posted November 12, 2011 Report Share Posted November 12, 2011 It's not the best holo job but it's alright: [img]http://img585.imageshack.us/img585/3038/457223.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nathanael D. Striker Posted November 12, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 12, 2011 [quote name='Merciless Overlord Knic' timestamp='1321134859' post='5635587'] It's not the best holo job but it's alright: [img]http://img585.imageshack.us/img585/3038/457223.jpg[/img] [/quote] Accepted. Clear Vice Dragon is also in. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Northern Sage Posted November 12, 2011 Report Share Posted November 12, 2011 [img]http://img560.imageshack.us/img560/4134/393677.jpg[/img] [quote]Cannot be Special Summoned. During the End Phase of the turn this card was Normal Summoned or flipped face-up: Return it to it's owner's hand. When this card attacks or is attacked by a non-FIRE Monster: Destroy that Monster before damage calculation. Once per turn: You can target 1 FIRE Monster in your Graveyard: Banish this card and Special Summon the targeted monster.If this card is banished for the Special Summoning of a FIRE Monster: Once per turn: The Monster isn't destroyed by battle.[/quote] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted November 12, 2011 Report Share Posted November 12, 2011 Felt like joining. [IMG]http://i42.tinypic.com/zrhol.jpg[/IMG] Gray Phoenix the Masterdark 3x Level 4 DARK Monsters Once per turn: Detatch 1 of this card's Xyz Materials; Select 1 card on the field, and Banish it. Also, if this card would be destroyed: You can detatch 1 Xyz Material from this card, instead. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Remei11 Posted November 12, 2011 Report Share Posted November 12, 2011 This is my entry! =] [img]http://i1216.photobucket.com/albums/dd376/Ramei11/HarpyoftheCrimsonSky.png[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blue-Eyes493 Posted November 12, 2011 Report Share Posted November 12, 2011 [quote name='Blue-Eyes493' timestamp='1321137599' post='5635745'] Behold my mystical card: [img]http://img716.imageshack.us/img716/2190/464794.jpg[/img] [/quote] When this card is Normal or Special Summoned: It gains 100 ATK and DEF for each "Energy" monster on your side of the field. When this card is sent directly from your hand to the Graveyard; You can banish 1 "Energy" monster in your Graveyard to Special Summon this card in face-up Attack Position. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n8thegr8 Posted November 13, 2011 Report Share Posted November 13, 2011 ill join. Card will be up soon. EDIT: Here you go [img]http://img193.imageshack.us/img193/7222/212550.jpg[/img] This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. If this card is sent from your Deck to the Graveyard, you can equip it to one face-up "Dragunity" monster you control. A monster equipped with this card can attack your opponent's Life Points directly. Once per turn, while this card is equipped to a monster as an Equip Card by a card effect, you can Special Summon this card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nathanael D. Striker Posted November 13, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 13, 2011 Everyone accepted. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master White Posted November 13, 2011 Report Share Posted November 13, 2011 Can I still join? I'd like to, it'd tie in with the other contest I'm doing.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nathanael D. Striker Posted November 13, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 13, 2011 [quote name='White Archaic Dæmon' timestamp='1321195733' post='5637306'] Can I still join? I'd like to, it'd tie in with the other contest I'm doing.... [/quote] You can still enter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nathanael D. Striker Posted November 16, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 16, 2011 So, 7 people have there cards in. Well, here are the results in order of card entry. I gave a through review for the top 3. For everyone else, I just gave a score. [spoiler=Renji] [color=#666666][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3] [i][b]When this card is [u]Summoned:[/u] You can send [u]Spell/Trap[/u] Cards from your side of the field and your hand to the Graveyard; [u]place[/u] or remove any kind of counter on the field equal to the number of [u]Spell/Trap Cards[/u] sent to the Graveyard. While you control this face-up monster; You [u]can[/u] double the amount of counters you place on a card by paying 300 Life Points. When this card is destroyed; Remove all counters from either player's side of the field.[/b][/i][/size][/font][/color] [color=#666666][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3] [color=#000000]I'll start with your Card Grammar. Your Card Grammar had a few minor errors in it as you can see underlined. The card was easy to understand, even with the minor errors. 16/20[/color][/size][/font][/color][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3] [color="#000000"]I did enjoy you use of Counters, Renji. I don't see much cards that deal with Counters any more, but you brought creativity by doing that. 25/25[/color][/size][/font][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3] [color="#000000"]My main issue though is its playability for the first effect. I don't think people would even use the first effect. The second effect may be good for certain cards like Royal Magical Library (if people still use that), but the use is limited. 17/25[/color][/size][/font][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3] [color="#000000"]Now, I see some issues with balance. At the cost of 300 Life Points, you can double the amount of Counters on any particular card. Some cards like Vennominaga could use that to win quicker. That is one example, but you can get my point. 25/30[/color][/size][/font][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3] [color="#000000"]Overall, a decent card that is worth 83/100.[/spoiler][/color][/size][/font][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3] [color="#000000"][spoiler=Merciless Overlord Knic][/color][/size][/font][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3] [color="#000000"]Card Grammar: 18/20[/color][/size][/font][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3] Creativity: 12/25[/size][/font][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3] [color="#000000"]Playability: 13/25[/color][/size][/font][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3] Balance: 20/30[/size][/font][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3] Total: 63/100[/spoiler][/size][/font][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3] [spoiler=Clear Vice Dragon][/size][/font][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3] Cannot be Special Summoned. During the End Phase of the turn this card was Normal Summoned or flipped face-up: Return it to it's owner's hand. When this card attacks or is attacked by a non-FIRE Monster: Destroy that Monster before damage calculation. Once per turn: You can target 1 FIRE Monster in your Graveyard[u];[/u] [u]banish[/u] this card and Special Summon the targeted monster. If this card is banished for the Special Summoning of a FIRE Monster[i]: Once per turn: The Monster isn't destroyed by battle.[/i][/size][/font] [font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3] Card Grammar was great, I just had to nit pick some thing. I see nothing that can hamper me from understanding this card. Italics is just some confusion with the wording that doesn't hamper how I understand the effect. 19/20[/size][/font][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3] Ah FIRE, I used to run a FIRE Deck. Nice Catastor effect. I also like the use it has on and off the field. Creativity wise, good work. Playability wise, I would use this. It gives FIRE an edge. 23/25 for both.[/size][/font][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3] I don't see much worry for balance at all. It has use when it is destroyed, which makes up for the no Special Summon clause. Everything is in harmony. 30/30[/size][/font][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3] Overall, DO WANT! 95/100[/spoiler][/size][/font][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3] [spoiler=Darkplant - FEAR][/size][/font][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3] Your Card Grammar stuck with the basics and did reletively well. I would have like you to stretch ou further, but it was good. 19/20 (detatch is detach)[/size][/font][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3] Basic effect is basic. Not much to say about it creatively. 16/25[/size][/font][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3] The effect gets the job done, as well as its ATK. I think this would see use in a DARK Deck, probably Chaos as well. 25/25[/size][/font][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3] The 3000 ATK is an iffy. It increases playabilty, but questions balance for me. I think the ends justify the means though. 28/30[/size][/font][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3] Overall, a well made DARK monster that gets a 88/100[/spoiler][/size][/font][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3] [spoiler=Remei11][/size][/font][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3] Card Grammar: 15/20[/size][/font][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3] Creativity: 18/25[/size][/font][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3] Playability: 20/25[/size][/font][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3] Balance: 26/30[/size][/font][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3] Total: 79/100[/spoiler][/size][/font][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3] [spoiler=Blue-Eyes493][/size][/font][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3] Card Grammar: 14/20[/size][/font][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3] Creativity: 13/25[/size][/font][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3] Playability: 12/25[/size][/font][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3] Balance: 26/30[/size][/font][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3] Total: 65/100[/spoiler][/size][/font][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3] [spoiler=n8theg8][/size][/font][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3] Card Grammar: 13/20 (Used Old Card Grammar)[/size][/font][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3] Creativity: 10/25[/size][/font][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3] Playability: 20/25[/size][/font][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3] Balance: 27/30[/size][/font][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3] Total: 70/100[/spoiler][/size][/font] [font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3] 1. Clear Vice Dragon[/size][/font][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3] 2. Darkplant - FEAR[/size][/font][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3] 3. Renji[/size][/font] [font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3] Points and likes will be sent out today and tomorrow. Thanks for the turkeys and see you next time[/size][/font] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Agro Posted November 16, 2011 Report Share Posted November 16, 2011 Damn I waited too long... >_> oh well, do another one soon, will ya? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nathanael D. Striker Posted November 16, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 16, 2011 [quote name='AggroDrago' timestamp='1321420214' post='5645828'] Damn I waited too long... >_> oh well, do another one soon, will ya? [/quote] I may do another next week. These come out with no warning though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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