Vladamier2ndattempt Posted November 16, 2011 Report Share Posted November 16, 2011 Undergoing renovations, images may disappear and will reappear, many changes have been done to my cards. Gotta update the ones here to match. [b](NEW CHANGES)[/b] #1 you may notice(if you've seen them before) attributes and types have changed. #2 new cards will show up here; not in spoilers, so you dont hafta hunt to see them. #3 as i am starting to get most of the set up and still lacking variety in the reviewers, i am dropping it to 2 new cards a day to allow time for everyone to see them; reviews or no. As of this update thier are 65ish cards in the set, but i dont have enough traps or spells for the set yet so that number will rise. Rate and Review at least one card, all reviews will be much appreciated. Thanks. [spoiler=Completed] [spoiler=Angels] [spoiler=Rahdar & Phakiel][IMG]http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t74/Deadwolf1987/Cards/DNA/AngelRahdarPhakielphp-2.jpg[/IMG][/spoiler] [/spoiler] [spoiler=Demons] [spoiler=Zagan][IMG]http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t74/Deadwolf1987/Cards/DNA/DemonKingZaganphp.jpg[/IMG] 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner Monsters This effect can only be activated during your Main Phase 2. Speacil Summon one "Demon Legion" Token (Fiend-Type/DARK/LEVEL 4/ATK 500/DEF 1500) face-up in defense position on your side of the field. Once per turn during your Standby Phase, You can Banish 1 "Demon Legion" Token you control to inflict 500 points of direct damage to your opponent.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Balam][IMG]http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t74/Deadwolf1987/Cards/DNA/DemonKingBalamphp.jpg[/IMG] 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner Monsters This effect can only be activated during your Main Phase 2. Speacil Summon one "Demon Legion" Token (Fiend-Type/DARK/LEVEL 4/ATK 500/DEF 1500) face-up in defense position on your side of the field. Once per turn during your Standby Phase, You can Banish 1 "Demon Legion" Token you control to destroy one Spell or Trap card on the field.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Paymon][IMG]http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t74/Deadwolf1987/Cards/DNA/DemonKingPaymonphp.jpg[/IMG] 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner Monsters This effect can only be activated during your Main Phase 2. Speacil Summon one "Demon Legion" Token (Fiend-Type/DARK/LEVEL 4/ATK 500/DEF 1500) face-up in defense position on your side of the field. Increase this monsters ATK and DEF by 100 for each "Demon Legion" on the field.[/spoiler] [/spoiler] [/spoiler] [spoiler=Needing to know if these need fixes and such(so help with these first please xD)] [spoiler=Traps] [spoiler=Demonic Possession][IMG]http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t74/Deadwolf1987/Cards/DNA/DemonicPossessionphp.jpg[/IMG][/spoiler] [spoiler=Apocalypse - the 4 Horsemen][IMG]http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t74/Deadwolf1987/Cards/DNA/Apocalypse-the4Horsemenphp.jpg[/IMG][/spoiler] [/spoiler] [spoiler=Spells] [spoiler=Lake of Fire][IMG]http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t74/Deadwolf1987/Cards/DNA/LakeofFirephp.jpg[/IMG][/spoiler] [spoiler=Horsemen War][IMG]http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t74/Deadwolf1987/Cards/DNA/Horsemen-Warphp.jpg[/IMG][/spoiler] [spoiler=Horsemen Pestilence][IMG]http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t74/Deadwolf1987/Cards/DNA/Horsemen-Pestilencephp.jpg[/IMG][/spoiler] [spoiler=Horsemen Famine][IMG]http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t74/Deadwolf1987/Cards/DNA/Horsemen-Faminephp.jpg[/IMG][/spoiler] [spoiler=Horsemen Death][IMG]http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t74/Deadwolf1987/Cards/DNA/Horsemen-Deathphp.jpg[/IMG][/spoiler] [spoiler=The 66 Seals][IMG]http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t74/Deadwolf1987/Cards/DNA/The66Seals2php.jpg[/IMG][/spoiler] [spoiler=The Broken Seals][IMG]http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t74/Deadwolf1987/Cards/DNA/TheBrokenSeals2php.jpg[/IMG][/spoiler] [spoiler=Forced Synchronization][IMG]http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t74/Deadwolf1987/Cards/DNA/ForcedSynchronizationphp.jpg[/IMG][/spoiler] [spoiler=Sacrificial Summoning][IMG]http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t74/Deadwolf1987/Cards/DNA/SacrificialSummoningphp.jpg[/IMG][/spoiler] [spoiler=Spiritual Tuning][IMG]http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t74/Deadwolf1987/Cards/DNA/SpiritualTuningphp.jpg[/IMG][/spoiler] [/spoiler] [spoiler=Angels(Types and Attributes being reworked atm)] [spoiler=Rorex][/spoiler] [spoiler=Af Bri][/spoiler] [/spoiler] [spoiler=Archangels(Types and Attributes being reworked atm)] [spoiler=Michael][/spoiler] [spoiler=Gabriel][/spoiler] [spoiler=Azrael][/spoiler] [spoiler=Uriel][/spoiler] [/spoiler] [spoiler=Fallen Angels] [spoiler=Lucifer][IMG]http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t74/Deadwolf1987/Cards/DNA/FA-Luciferphp.jpg[/IMG][/spoiler] [spoiler=Amduscias][IMG]http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t74/Deadwolf1987/Cards/DNA/FA-Amdusciasphp.jpg[/IMG] This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card returns to its owner's hand during the End Phase of the turn it is Normal Summoned or flipped face-up. This card can attack all monsters your opponent controls once each. This monster cannot attack your opponent directly. This Monsters ATK and DEF is equal to the number of "Fallen Angel" Monsters in your graveyard x 500 points.[/spoiler] [/spoiler] [spoiler=Demons] [spoiler=The Prince of Darkness][IMG]http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t74/Deadwolf1987/Cards/DNA/ThePrinceofDarknessphp.jpg[/IMG][/spoiler] [spoiler=The Beast][IMG]http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t74/Deadwolf1987/Cards/DNA/TheBeastphp.jpg[/IMG] This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of "The Broken Seals." The Special Summoning of this monster cannot be negated. This card cannot be destroyed by the effect of a Spell or Trap card that designates a target. During each of your End Phases Banish 1 "Fallen Angel" OR "Demon" card from your hand or field, if you cannot this monster is destroyed. Once per turn during your Main Phase 2, you can Banish 1 monster your opponent controls (take half the Banished monsters ATK in effect damage) and Special Summon 1 "Demon" OR "Fallen Angel" monster (5 Stars or less) From your graveyard. This cards ATK and DEF cannot be increased or decreased by the effect of any card (except its own). Increase this cards ATK and DEF by 50 for each Banished card.[/spoiler] [/spoiler] [/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 16, 2011 Report Share Posted November 16, 2011 careful with the pics, first two almost looked the same for Dark Ruler of the Underworld, you need to change the "special summoned" part Remember, Ritual Summoning IS a form of Special Summoning Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vladamier2ndattempt Posted November 16, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 16, 2011 I was not wanting him to be summoned by any other card like monster reborn and such. as far as the similiar images, i am not as creative with the mouse and screen as i am with the pen and paper XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 16, 2011 Report Share Posted November 16, 2011 then you should have said it can't be summoned except by the effect you wrote on the lore Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vladamier2ndattempt Posted November 17, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 17, 2011 yes, a valid point, however, this is the rough draft version of the cards, i am working out the kinks at this point in time Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 17, 2011 Report Share Posted November 17, 2011 wait, so this isn't the whole set here? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vladamier2ndattempt Posted November 17, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 17, 2011 no, this is a single card needing a second(third, fourth, etc...) opinion. This card comes mid 30 in the set i have so far, but i am worrying this card is underpowered for its restrictions. once i have completed the set and am needing a once over for OCG and tweaks i will release it for review, till then i just need help on the one card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 17, 2011 Report Share Posted November 17, 2011 well we can't tell if it's OPed or UPed until we see more of the set Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vladamier2ndattempt Posted November 17, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 17, 2011 so you cant tell me if 9 card tribute plus a per turn tribute is to much of a restriction on one card with 3900atk and 3500def? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 17, 2011 Report Share Posted November 17, 2011 not if you have something later in the set to get around it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vladamier2ndattempt Posted November 17, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 17, 2011 Ah, hadn't made it that far yet, kinda got stuck on this one and was wanting to resolve it first before moving on cause it would bug me for a bit. But, i will continue onwards and see what happens and see how it plays out then. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vladamier2ndattempt Posted November 18, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 18, 2011 I have added new cards, need opinions. And the the images for the horsemen cards will be changed. I just don't have anything better atm but i am wanting the effect reviewed, that's why its in with these. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 18, 2011 Report Share Posted November 18, 2011 this is one of the problems of adding TOO many cards into a set it's going to fry a guy's brain to find them all Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vladamier2ndattempt Posted November 18, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 18, 2011 Yea, i forgot to add names to each one, and because of a move and undo combo my Txt file containing a "glossary" has to be remade... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 18, 2011 Report Share Posted November 18, 2011 seriously though, you shouldn't have added so many all at once a person can only look at so many before they go crazy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vladamier2ndattempt Posted November 18, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 18, 2011 would you like me to remove some of them? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 18, 2011 Report Share Posted November 18, 2011 for the time being, and then put them up LITTLE BY LITTLE later on the thing is, if you put too many new ones up all at once, people will give you the "this is too much, the hell with rating this guy's cards" attitude Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vladamier2ndattempt Posted November 18, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 18, 2011 There, the heard has been thinned and some diversity remains, hope i didn't leave to many Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 18, 2011 Report Share Posted November 18, 2011 I still see no "NEW" next to the additions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vladamier2ndattempt Posted November 18, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 18, 2011 Didn't think i needed to as they are all new...but there its done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 18, 2011 Report Share Posted November 18, 2011 Lake of Fire is meh, just Dark magician of chaos's effect I'm unsure of Gabriel's 2 card draw power is too much or not Rhadkar and Phekel's 2 tribute ability you might want to specify a bit more on Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vladamier2ndattempt Posted November 18, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 18, 2011 So Rhadkar and Phekel's effect should read more like "This monster can be used twice as tributes for 1 summon. If this monster is used twice as tribute it counts as a 2 Star monster card." ??? As for Gabriel, I thought 2100/2600 was weak enough for the effect on a level 7 monster but i can lower his stats or raise his level if it needs to be done. And Lake of Fire's meh, gets used by other monsters in the set Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 18, 2011 Report Share Posted November 18, 2011 actually for Rhadkar and Phekel's effect I was thinking you can use it only for certain attributes for example Kaiser Sea Horse you can already do that for LIGHT Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vladamier2ndattempt Posted November 18, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 18, 2011 the effect of Kaiser Sea Horse can only be used for tribute summoning though. You cant use it for a ritual summon. Rhadkar and Phekel can be used for any type of summon. So it kinda does need the level restriction on the effect. But if i followed the example of the Kaiser Sea Horse on the attribute it would just end up being a remade Kaiser Sea Horse. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 18, 2011 Report Share Posted November 18, 2011 well then maybe give it type restrictions? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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