Tomiix Posted November 19, 2011 Report Share Posted November 19, 2011 I love playing machines. I use often the destroy GearTown and Summon tactic with Gadjiltron and combo it with Cybers and Machinas. I use Red, Yellow, and Green Gadget also. Now I have seen some pretty sweet new XYZ monsters, and I know of the existence of Wind-Up Zenimaister, who I use. But I wanted a XYZ more personal to my play style. Now since the card generator is currently experiencing some problems. (Blank Images and no XYZ card support) I edited in the picture myself using paint (which is very tedious). If anyone wants to convert this card into a XYZ, I will give you some major points. So without further-ado here is the card. [spoiler= Cranked Gadjiltron Dragon] [img]http://img3.imageshack.us/img3/9694/crankedgadjiltron.png[/img] When this card is summoned destroy all monsters on your field. Once per turn, you can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card. This card gains 300 Atk and Def for each Machine in either players graveyard until the end of your turn. When there is no Material on this card Cranked Gadjiltron can not attack directly. [img]http://img3.imageshack.us/img3/1641/gadjiltron.png[/img] Credit to Image goes to Omegawave @deviantart [url="http://omegawave.deviantart.com/"]http://omegawave.deviantart.com/[/url] [/spoiler] Please rate this card and be a critic! I can use the advice. Allow me to make final edits before making this card a XYZ, as I want it to appear to be a great card. Also, no need to troll guys. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not-so-Radiant Arin Posted November 19, 2011 Report Share Posted November 19, 2011 If you wanted to make the card into an Xyz Card, feel free to use this site: http://www.yugico.com/ It pretty much works the same way as it would on here. Sign in, make card, save it, profit. Now......for the actual card: [quote]When this card is summoned destroy all monsters on your field.[/quote] Even loljitron Dragon doesn't destroy all of your monsters when you go to Summon it. I find this effect to be a real nuisance, especially when you have that 2x Machina Fortress out on the field. [quote]Once per turn, you can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card. This card gains 300 Atk and Def for each Machine in either players graveyard until the end of your turn.[/quote] Dat Mirror match would be so horrendous. It really only should affect your Graveyard, otherwise this is taking beatdown to a new extreme. I would suggest giving it the Ancient Gear clause anyway, because it fits in with the theme anyways. [quote]When there is no Material on this card Cranked Gadjiltron can not attack directly.[/quote] And then the Leviathan Dragon clause to top off the balance. There definitely needs to be some improvement on this card. That ATK and DEF gain is just butt-hurt when it comes to attacking, so that definitely should be changed to the Ancient Gear Clause. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweetie Belle Posted November 19, 2011 Report Share Posted November 19, 2011 [quote name='Tomiix' timestamp='1321730643' post='5653091'] When this card is summoned destroy all monsters on your field. [/quote] In addition to everything the above said, all includes itself, so the card is pretty pointless. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tomiix Posted November 19, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 19, 2011 What would be the point of XYZ summoning it if it was just like the normal one? Some kind of benefit thats not like the actual card would be helpful. Also the destroy effect is maily there to benefit its detach effect. Though I see your point on how mutch of a nunsence it could be. @ Discord true, that would be a problem XD How about this: If this card attacks your opponet cannot activate any Spell/Trap cards until the end of the Damage Step. Once per turn you can discard 1 Material to use its effect. This card gains 300 Attk and Def for each Machine in your Graveyard. When there are no Material monsters attached to this card this card cannot attack your opponent directly. [IMG]http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/809/crankedgadjiltron2.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 20, 2011 Report Share Posted November 20, 2011 but the effect is relatively meh for just gaining atk/def the no spell/trap activation in the battle step is just ancient gear rip off Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DestinyGame Posted November 20, 2011 Report Share Posted November 20, 2011 [quote name='Dante v. Nero' timestamp='1321731206' post='5653126'] If you wanted to make the card into an Xyz Card, feel free to use this site: [url="http://www.yugico.com/"]http://www.yugico.com/[/url] It pretty much works the same way as it would on here. Sign in, make card, save it, profit. [/quote] How can I upload the card from this site to ycm forum Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tomiix Posted November 20, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 20, 2011 @rag, thats the point, its a tribute to the origanal card but its better than it. @shin Save the picture (on pc right-click save picture) thant go to imageshack or any image uploading site that provides you the image code. Then copy paste to the post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tomiix Posted November 21, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 21, 2011 *Bump* Anymore advice? Or is it a good card? I could use a rating. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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