gimmepie Posted November 21, 2011 Report Share Posted November 21, 2011 Please review . [img]http://img100.imageshack.us/img100/6504/490484.jpg[/img] Effect: This card is also treated as a synchro monster. You can special summon this card from your hand or deck by removing from play a Dragon synchro monster. You can send this card from the field to the graveyard to negate a monster or spell/trap cards effect and destroy it. If you do so special summon this card during the end phase of the turn this effect was activated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gimmepie Posted November 21, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 21, 2011 I'm thinking of increasing it's level and adding a field nuke effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 21, 2011 Report Share Posted November 21, 2011 for the summoning effect, you forgot to say WHERE you're banishing the Dragon synchro monster from as for its resummoning effect well it's good that its effect got negated and all but the fact is it has no effects while on the field, so it's weak Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blake Posted November 21, 2011 Report Share Posted November 21, 2011 [quote name='gimmepie' timestamp='1321895031' post='5656990'] I'm thinking of increasing it's level and adding a field nuke effect. [/quote] Why on earth would you do that? First off, I have to ask, how does a card not in the extra deck function as a Synchro Monster everywhere, as the text implies? You need to specify somewhere, like in the hand/field/Graveyard. The same goes for the Dragon synchro you are banishing- From WHERE? Now, onto the dragon itself, it's a walking, summoning from deck w/o Assault Mode Activate Stardust/AM for any dragon Synchro, which there is a Dragon Synchro for every level from 5 to 10, the level 10 being an OTK monster that, should it fail, is nothing but a beatstick. Its last effect is way too strong, and it's just odd overall. You need to change the last effect to negating only one type of M/S/T. And SSing THIS from the deck is hella broken. In fact, make it only SS from hand, make it a Nomi (AKA only SSd by itself), and then you might have something that's not horrendously broken, but Eclipse Wyvern exists, so I doubt it. Make it require just Stardust or something. It is really unoriginal as it just mirrors Stardust's variants, and its really broken. EDIT: There we go, OCG. This card is also treated as a Synchro Monster. You can Special Summon this card from your hand or deck by banishing a Dragon-type Synchro monster. When your opponent activates a card effect: You can send this face-up card to the Graveyard; Negate the activation and effect of that card, and destroy it; you can Special Summon this card during the End Phase of a turn this card was sent to the Graveyard by this effect. ... I think. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gimmepie Posted November 22, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 22, 2011 Thats why I'm thinking of making it: Lv10 "This card can be special summoned from the hand by banishing a level eight or higher, Dragon synchro monster from the field. When a card effect that would destroy a card(s) is activated you can activate this effect; Destroy all cards on the field. If you do so special summon this card during the end phase." Would that be better and more original? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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