gimmepie Posted November 23, 2011 Report Share Posted November 23, 2011 I created this for my fanfic but thought that it might actually have some playability and plausibility to it. Constructive criticism and tips please. [img]http://img810.imageshack.us/img810/6504/490484.jpg[/img] Effect: You can only activate this card when monster reborn is in your graveyard. Pay half of your life points to special summon a banished monster or a monster from your graveyard as a DARK monster regardless of summoning conditions. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
groniack Posted November 23, 2011 Report Share Posted November 23, 2011 You can only activate this card when [u]"Monster Reborn"[/u] is in your graveyard. Pay half of your life points to special summon a banished monster or a monster from your graveyard as a DARK monster regardless of summoning conditions. I don't see anything wrong with this card. Maybe paying half your life points is too much but if your life points are very low it could be helpful. Nice pic. I really like it 9/10 good job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
·Toot Posted November 23, 2011 Report Share Posted November 23, 2011 When I started reading the effect I thought this was just a crap reborn lulz... like dark hole. Its actually pretty good. It can bring out any monster so long as you pay half your points. If this were real it would probably be limited though. Nice effect... pic is meh... Nice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gimmepie Posted November 23, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 23, 2011 Thanks for the good reviews people. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted November 23, 2011 Report Share Posted November 23, 2011 Pretty good actually. When I saw the title I got ready to rage on its stupidity and was pleasantly surprised to find that I wouldn't have to. Good job, truly. The OCG is pretty bad, but it looks like someone already gave you a correction. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gimmepie Posted November 23, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 23, 2011 Thanks for yet another good review. Why has everybody been expecting this to suck? lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 23, 2011 Report Share Posted November 23, 2011 Well getting monster reborn to the graveyard is easy, so this is easy to summon the fact that you can get ANY monster out of the graveyard and bypassing the summoning conditions is too OPed even with half your LP, it's just too low a pay depending on the monster what I'd do is say you pay like 1500 LP to special summon a monster (treated as DARK) from the graveyard, bypassing the summoning conditions however it must return to the graveyard during the end phase Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gimmepie Posted November 23, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 23, 2011 Half of your life points for one monster, regardless of the monster, is a serious cost. On top of that there are cards that could easily banish reborn from the grave, making this useless as you can only have one monster reborn in your deck. So realistically the only time you would have a small cost is when you were on your last legs, which would mean you were probably screwed anyway no matter what you summoned. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alice Moonflowyr Posted November 23, 2011 Report Share Posted November 23, 2011 Hey, this looks great. Awesome pic, good eff, all that. Dont listen to ragnarok. Its perfect. Aside from OCG, but I guess you already got a correction. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enguin Enguin Enguin Enguin Posted November 23, 2011 Report Share Posted November 23, 2011 I think this is really awesome. I agree with the person above me regarding ragnarok's advice. He doesn't sound like someone who's ever actually played Yugioh in real life or otherwise. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevin7653 Posted November 23, 2011 Report Share Posted November 23, 2011 nice card i think it may have some bad ocg and all 8/10may be a little underpowered to Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sgrug4 Posted November 23, 2011 Report Share Posted November 23, 2011 [quote name='Rupert Giles' timestamp='1322079006' post='5661517'] Hey, this looks great. Awesome pic, good eff, all that. Dont listen to ragnarok. Its perfect. Aside from OCG, but I guess you already got a correction. [/quote] Ragnarok gave 100 times the feedback you did Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enguin Enguin Enguin Enguin Posted November 23, 2011 Report Share Posted November 23, 2011 [quote name='sgrug4' timestamp='1322084094' post='5661666'] Ragnarok gave 100 times the feedback you did [/quote] I have nothing to add to what people have previously said but here's a breakdown like you wanted: -The picture is very good, high quality and makes sense for the card. -It should say "Monster Reborn" in capitals and quotation marks but the first comment said that. -Ignoring summoning conditions is a good thing because your losing half your Life Points anyway. -It's very awesome. Happy? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Therrion Posted November 23, 2011 Report Share Posted November 23, 2011 [center]This + Lightsworn would be a little much, don't you think? They have a chance of milling it, and this could bring back their beloved Judgement Dragon. Though Halfing LP then paying 1000 may cost you game in longrun.[/center] [center]Nice synergy with Lavalval Chain.[/center] [center]Creative also, 8.4/10[/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sgrug4 Posted November 23, 2011 Report Share Posted November 23, 2011 [quote name='TheEnguinMaster' timestamp='1322084489' post='5661681'] I have nothing to add to what people have previously said but here's a breakdown like you wanted: -The picture is very good, high quality and makes sense for the card. -It should say "Monster Reborn" in capitals and quotation marks but the first comment said that. -Ignoring summoning conditions is a good thing because your losing half your Life Points anyway. -It's very awesome. Happy? [/quote] Was i talking to u? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Therrion Posted November 23, 2011 Report Share Posted November 23, 2011 [center]sgrug, you WERE talking to him o-o[/center] [center]XD[/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sgrug4 Posted November 23, 2011 Report Share Posted November 23, 2011 [quote name='Gagaga Girl' timestamp='1322088198' post='5661845'] [center]sgrug, you WERE talking to him o-o[/center] [center]XD[/center] [/quote] s*** i meant rupert. SORRY SORRRY! Rupert was being an ass to Ragnarok, even though the amount of feedback he gives will always be better. Idk why he told ppl not to listen to Ragnarok. How ignorant. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gimmepie Posted November 24, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 24, 2011 A) Thanks for all the positive reviews people. Please no Ragnarok bashing in here. Everybody is entitled to their opinion and Ragnarok did have some interesting points to make. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 24, 2011 Report Share Posted November 24, 2011 gimmepie, just make another card in this set or something so we can move to another topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gimmepie Posted November 24, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 24, 2011 It was a single... I guess I will consider another card to go with it though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Panda^.^ Posted November 25, 2011 Report Share Posted November 25, 2011 yay u make decenet cards nwo congratssss Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted November 25, 2011 Report Share Posted November 25, 2011 Great idea for a card. All changes I can think of have already been suggested, though the name sounds a bit strange to me. Maybe "Dark Rebirth"? Anyways, great work. I love seeing originality and creativity. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 25, 2011 Report Share Posted November 25, 2011 [quote name='gimmepie' timestamp='1322176845' post='5663389'] It was a single... I guess I will consider another card to go with it though. [/quote] No problem, I only suggested it because I didn't want what was happening in posts 9-17 to continue Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sgrug4 Posted November 25, 2011 Report Share Posted November 25, 2011 [quote name='gimmepie' timestamp='1322169726' post='5663072'] A) Thanks for all the positive reviews people. Please no Ragnarok bashing in here. Everybody is entitled to their opinion and Ragnarok did have some interesting points to make. [/quote] YES please, explain that to all the narrow minded people in YCm -___- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gimmepie Posted November 26, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 26, 2011 I'm going to keep this card the way it is I think, also I'm not going to make anything to go with it (it will stay a single. I am still looking for reviews now. Thanks for all the positive feedback guys. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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