Partangle the Candle Jangler Posted December 13, 2011 Report Share Posted December 13, 2011 The name should have been a bit different. Here it is: [IMG]http://i43.tinypic.com/142a1hj.jpg[/IMG] Once per turn, you can banish one Level 3 or lower Zombie-Type monster from your deck to have this card gain ATK equal to half the original ATK of the banished monster until the End Phase. Each time this card destroys an opponent's monster, put one "Grave Counter" on this card.This card gains 100 ATK and DEF for each "Grave Counter" on it. When this card is removed from the field, return a number of banished Zombie-Type monsters to their owners Graveyards up to the number of "Grave Counters" on this card when it left the field. This card cannot be destroyed by battle with a non Zombie-Type monster. Tell me what you think. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glogatha Posted December 13, 2011 Report Share Posted December 13, 2011 well, you took the pic from berserk dragon, but the effect is pretty nice, could become op'd but not often, glad you said ATK and not DEF thats for sure do not like your sig however Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Partangle the Candle Jangler Posted December 13, 2011 Author Report Share Posted December 13, 2011 [quote name='Glowfly' timestamp='1323815928' post='5704713'] well, you took the pic from berserk dragon, but the effect is pretty nice, could become op'd but not often, glad you said ATK and not DEF thats for sure do not like your sig however [/quote] I know about the picture I'm trying to find a different one but can't. Anyway thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 14, 2011 Report Share Posted December 14, 2011 cheap ripoff of Berserk Dragon atk gain effect should be fine the way it is last effect is meh, chances are your opponent will use card effects to get it off the field anyway plus banishing isn't really good, zombies like being in the graveyard Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Partangle the Candle Jangler Posted December 14, 2011 Author Report Share Posted December 14, 2011 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1323824788' post='5705186'] cheap ripoff of Berserk Dragon atk gain effect should be fine the way it is last effect is meh, chances are your opponent will use card effects to get it off the field anyway plus banishing isn't really good, zombies like being in the graveyard [/quote] I'm gonna change it a bit now and give a new picture. There done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 14, 2011 Report Share Posted December 14, 2011 the last effect still isn't really good, can still be very easily destroyed since non-zombies are common Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Partangle the Candle Jangler Posted December 15, 2011 Author Report Share Posted December 15, 2011 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1323905834' post='5707340'] the last effect still isn't really good, can still be very easily destroyed since non-zombies are common [/quote] Which effect are you refering to?[font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif][b][color=#ff0000][size=8]SOMEONE SAY SOMETHING![/size][/color][/b][/font] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted December 16, 2011 Report Share Posted December 16, 2011 So only Zombies can kill it. I have no problem with that. Card seems pretty fun. I don't see how this card relates to Berserk Dragon at all. Berserk Dragon attacks multiple times per turn and gets weaker every turn. This card gains temporal ATK boosts and won't die by battle unless your opponent has Monster Reborn or is playing Zombies too. What are the intended targets to banish with it? I can think of some Level 4 monsters used in Zombies, but I can only think of Plaguespreader for Level 3 or lower. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Partangle the Candle Jangler Posted December 16, 2011 Author Report Share Posted December 16, 2011 [quote name='~Applejack~' timestamp='1324003626' post='5710009'] So only Zombies can kill it. I have no problem with that. Card seems pretty fun. I don't see how this card relates to Berserk Dragon at all. Berserk Dragon attacks multiple times per turn and gets weaker every turn. This card gains temporal ATK boosts and won't die by battle unless your opponent has Monster Reborn or is playing Zombies too. What are the intended targets to banish with it? I can think of some Level 4 monsters used in Zombies, but I can only think of Plaguespreader for Level 3 or lower. [/quote] The picture for it used to be berserk dragon, but the effect was never like it so I'm not sure why he said that.... Well the main reason I have it level 3 or lower was to stop it from gaining too much atk, and I think that if it was Level 4 it might be OP'd a bit. I think this would actually be quite good for Skull Servant come to think of it, but there wouldn't be a big atk boost from it. Would it be OK though if it [i]was[/i] changed to level 4 or lower? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevin7653 Posted December 16, 2011 Report Share Posted December 16, 2011 well this is shure better than your last i would sayit is completly up until i saw the last effect saying that only a zombie can destroy it wich makes it a little op until you go up against a zombie type deck wich makes it up all over again also possibly to even it out a little you should add dragon and possibly fiend to yur list of monsters who can destroy it and also you should let grave counters add atk and def possibly 100 200 in total just a suggestion nice card 8.8/10[quote name='TheGreatEnguin' timestamp='1324047407' post='5710705'] The picture for it used to be berserk dragon, but the effect was never like it so I'm not sure why he said that.... Well the main reason I have it level 3 or lower was to stop it from gaining too much atk, and I think that if it was Level 4 it might be OP'd a bit. I think this would actually be quite good for Skull Servant come to think of it, but there wouldn't be a big atk boost from it. Would it be OK though if it [i]was[/i] changed to level 4 or lower? [/quote]you could raise the level one two three raise the atkk and def a little posibly or not or even make it lower make it atkn and def and make pernament of cousre thjis would completly change your card but still keep the base outline of it anyways thats all i have(for now...) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Partangle the Candle Jangler Posted December 16, 2011 Author Report Share Posted December 16, 2011 I actually think this would be much better as a level 6 that can banish 4 or lower but I'm not sure. [quote name='kevin7653' timestamp='1324048367' post='5710715'] well this is shure better than your last i would sayit is completly up until i saw the last effect saying that only a zombie can destroy it wich makes it a little op until you go up against a zombie type deck wich makes it up all over again also possibly to even it out a little you should add dragon and possibly fiend to yur list of monsters who can destroy it and also you should let grave counters add atk and def possibly 100 200 in total just a suggestion nice card 8.8/10 you could raise the level one two three raise the atkk and def a little posibly or not or even make it lower make it atkn and def and make pernament of cousre thjis would completly change your card but still keep the base outline of it anyways thats all i have(for now...) [/quote] The tokens adding a little ATK is a really good idea I'm going to add that now since level 3 zombies are all very weak (Zombie Dragon was the strongest I found and it only has 1600). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevin7653 Posted December 16, 2011 Report Share Posted December 16, 2011 glad my suggestion could make a difference Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Partangle the Candle Jangler Posted December 16, 2011 Author Report Share Posted December 16, 2011 [quote name='kevin7653' timestamp='1324075633' post='5711500'] glad my suggestion could make a difference [/quote] Glad for the advice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Althemia Posted December 16, 2011 Report Share Posted December 16, 2011 May I just say that you shouldn't listen to Gandorator, as this is an absolutely amazing card which would help Zombies A LOT. This is stupidly good and I am glad you made this. If Gandorator does read this, I would like him to know that this is [b]good card design[/b]. Keep up the good work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Partangle the Candle Jangler Posted December 16, 2011 Author Report Share Posted December 16, 2011 [quote name='-Tsubaki-' timestamp='1324076443' post='5711531'] May I just say that you shouldn't listen to Gandorator, as this is an absolutely amazing card which would help Zombies A LOT. This is stupidly good and I am glad you made this. If Gandorator does read this, I would like him to know that this is [b]good card design[/b]. Keep up the good work! [/quote] Thank you Awesome name BTW. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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