Mask of Darkness Posted January 30, 2012 Report Share Posted January 30, 2012 [quote name='~~Xiahou Dun~~' timestamp='1327943080' post='5789586'] You're kidding, right? Just rate the damn card. These cards are never going to make it into the real world anyway, so why bother commenting on "Card Design"? And another thing, how is that helpful critique? Does it change the entire way the effect is worded? Does it change the monster's ATK/DEF/Level? No. [/quote] Wow, the topic owner thanks me for the critisicm and then you get angry at me for it. Besides, I did rate the card in an earlier post, I've just been kinda thinking about the above stuff and decided to post it. Obviously this will never be a real card, but this is the realistic card section, so why not treat it like it is just a designer for Konami posting a pre-design and letting us comment on it? I am a rather casual player, so while I do care about stats and stuff, I still like my cards to have appeal. I'm also a bit of a nerd and don't like when things break a pattern, which made the name and design negatively stand out to me. edit because DickAnderson asked me to rate the new cards: Ceris looks really cool! I could've sworn there was a Defender of the Dark World, but I just checked and there does not be one, and I wouldn't mind being defended by this guy. However, it is really easy to special summon as it would find a lot of use in Dark World decks (Which is the point, I guess) and so just having him in your hand would probably let you get him out easy as either your womsters would get destroyed or they wouldn't and you could get out the two monsters needed to summon him. Overall, a good card but I think the SS effect may be a bit OP. Maybe if it gets discard from your hand to the graveyard you could sacrifice a Dark World monster to SS it? The new Dark World is better as it gives you a +700 instead of +400. Dark World Dealer could probaly use a new name as it if very close to Dark World Dealing and doesn't seem to fit. Maybe Dark World Safcrifice? It seems like a weaker Dien Keto, bute DK did get banned so that may not be bad. Mordant is rather freaky looking. I don't see much wrong with the effect though. I could really use it as I run a traditional Dark deck with Graceful Charity, so it would be might helpful to draw then. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DickAnderson Posted January 31, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 31, 2012 To Mask of Darkness's first comment: I didn't Ceris be able, to be SS because of the OP effect of once that effect has been activated it can't be stopped. I made that card like that because I have never seen another card like that, besides a Dark World Structure Deck has so many cards that allow you to revive your cards it's unreal. Toy your "Dark World Dealer" comment: Yea, I know. I tried to think of a better name that could fit with dark world but I just couldn't at the time. I made this card because I wanted to match my "Dark World Vortex" card. I wanted a card to go with the dark world deck and give you some extra life points. So all my cards can be played perfectly, and help all the other Dark World cards that are out there. Thanks for the comments, you've given the one of the best comments so far that has helped me (and compliments). I am going to make a nine card set that goes perfectly with each other and all the other Dark World cards. (Nine cards is what usually goes in a traditional pack of cards when you buy, so I wanted to do that.) Edit: I will make a new topic in the finished set section, when I have made my complete set of nine cards for Dark World (I only wanted to make a pack for Dark World decks only, then I am going to continue to make sets for other decks). Yet again none of this artwork is mine, I used Adobe Photoshop CS5, and the after effect program on this card. So it is borrowed, then altered. I am going to keep posting my new cards here as I make them, until I have made my set. =) Auburnn, Deceiver of Dark World: [img]http://img857.imageshack.us/img857/299/544953.jpg[/img] Effect: When this card is destroyed (by battle), and sent to the graveyard or is banished. Target one card on the field, destroy that card. I made this card because there are no Dark World cards that are like this. When you buy the structure deck it comes with two cards that aren't a Dark World card, so you can't get them back without a monster reborn or reincarnation card. This is my reason behind making it. Plus it goes with the cards I have made so far! =) /Bump To promote the new card I put in the edited post above. Edit: My new card I made Dark Shield: [img]http://img193.imageshack.us/img193/299/544953.jpg[/img] Effect: When this card is activated, place 3 Guard Counters on this card. You may place 1 Guard Counter on any monster you control. If that card were to be destroyed, remove 1 Guard Counter from it instead. When this card has no Guard Counters on it, destroy this card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DickAnderson Posted February 1, 2012 Author Report Share Posted February 1, 2012 Chyan, Devastator of Dark World: [img]http://img20.imageshack.us/img20/299/544953.jpg[/img] Effect: If this card is discarded to the graveyard or banished from your hand by a card effect, Special summon it (this card cannot be special summoned in any other way). When this card is special summoned, destroy all cards on your side and your opponents side of the field (you may only activate this effect once). When this effect is activated this card may not attack your opponent's life points directly until the 3rd End Phase of your turn after activation. Edit: Sacrificial Seal of Dark World: [img]http://img718.imageshack.us/img718/299/544953.jpg[/img] Description: Tribute one monster you control with 2000 or more ATK and select one of your opponents monsters that they control; The target that you selected has their ATK and DEF halved. When the target is destroyed, destroy this card. When this card is destroyed you and your opponent take 1000 life point damage.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DickAnderson Posted February 1, 2012 Author Report Share Posted February 1, 2012 OK guys I have finished all of my nine cards in this Dark World set! PLEASE, PLEASE rate them in every way I want to get them perfect before I post them in the Finished Sets section. Auburnn, Deceiver of Dark World: [img]http://img7.imageshack.us/img7/299/544953.jpg[/img] Effect: When this card is destroyed (by battle), and sent to the graveyard or is banished. Target one card on the field, destroy that card. Bone, Minion of Dark World: [img]http://img862.imageshack.us/img862/299/544953.jpg[/img] Effect: When this card is destroyed by battle; Special summon this card onto your side of the field. When this card is special summoned this way you can attach this card to one other monster you control as an equip card. The monster equipped with this card gains 800 ATK. When this card is destroyed as an equip card, banish it. Ceris, Defender of Dark World: [img]http://img4.imageshack.us/img4/299/544953.jpg[/img] Effect: This card can only be special summoned (from your hand) if a card you control with "Dark World" in its name is sent to the graveyard. Once every other turn you can activate one of these effects: Both players discard a card; Choose a spell or trap card on your opponents field. If you guess what type it is, destroy it. These effects cannot be negated, or stopped (Even if this card is destroyed, banished or returned to the hand). Citrin, Devastator of Dark World: [img]http://img515.imageshack.us/img515/299/544953.jpg[/img] Effect: If this card is discarded to the graveyard or banished from your hand by a card effect, Special summon it (this card cannot be special summoned in any other way). When this card is special summoned, destroy all cards on your side and your opponents side of the field. When this effect is activated this card may not attack your opponent's life points directly, until the 3rd End Phase of your turn after activation. Dark Shield: [img]http://img535.imageshack.us/img535/299/544953.jpg[/img] Effect: When this card is activated, place 3 Guard Counters on this card. You may place 1 Guard Counter on any monster you control. If that card were to be destroyed, remove 1 Guard Counter from it instead. When this card has no Guard Counters on it, destroy this card. Dark World Trade: [img]http://img841.imageshack.us/img841/299/544953.jpg[/img] Description: Tribute one monster you control with 2000 or more ATK, to increase your life points by 1000. Dark World Vortex: [img]http://img844.imageshack.us/img844/299/544953.jpg[/img] Description: All monsters on field with "Dark World" in there name, have there ATK Increased by 500. All other monsters have there ATK decreased by 200. You can pay 1000 life points to return this card from your graveyard, to your deck (your deck is then shuffled). Mordant, Ambassador of Dark World: [img]http://img217.imageshack.us/img217/8387/544953e.jpg[/img] Effect: When this card is discarded (from your hand) to your graveyard by a card effect, you can special summon this card from your graveyard. When this card is special summoned this way, this card gains 800 ATK until your 2nd End Phase after this card has been special summoned. Sacrificial Seal of Dark World: [img]http://img808.imageshack.us/img808/299/544953.jpg[/img] Description: Tribute one monster you control with 2000 or more ATK and select one of your opponents monsters they control; The target that you selected has their ATK and DEF halved. When the target is destroyed, destroy this card. When this card is destroyed you and your opponent take 1000 life point damage. That is my set for Dark World I want as much criticism as possible and please tell me if I have any grammar issues. Also post your ideas on what could make them better and more balanced. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mistery Hunter Posted February 1, 2012 Report Share Posted February 1, 2012 you know as for drott there are easier cards to summon and that are even stronger take " gorz the emiciery of darkness as an example he can get summond when you take even 1 point of damage and has 2700 attackyou know as for drott there are easier cards to summon and that are even stronger take " gorz the emiciery of darkness as an example he can get summond when you take even 1 point of damage and has 2700 attackand also dark world trade name is confusing with the deal so you shoud change it to a bit more specific name like dark world tribute/sacrifice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DickAnderson Posted February 1, 2012 Author Report Share Posted February 1, 2012 [quote name='Mistery Hunter' timestamp='1328097884' post='5793520'] and also dark world trade name is confusing with the deal so you shoud change it to a bit more specific name like dark world tribute/sacrifice [/quote] Thanks that sounds allot better to, changed! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blake Posted February 1, 2012 Report Share Posted February 1, 2012 Whoa, too many cards to look at, at the moment x.x But ignore mystery hunter, because the Gorz comment was stupid. Gorz deserves a ban whether it gets it or not. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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