DARKPLANT RISING Posted March 9, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 9, 2012 Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted March 29, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 29, 2012 Bump Writing Chapter 3. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alice Moonflowyr Posted March 30, 2012 Report Share Posted March 30, 2012 [quote name='Darkplant - VENOM' timestamp='1332991055' post='5893291'] Bump Writing Chapter 3. [/quote]Yay! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted April 8, 2012 Author Report Share Posted April 8, 2012 Chapter 3 updated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legend Zero Posted April 8, 2012 Report Share Posted April 8, 2012 Avance x Winda is the best pairing idea I've ever heard. Great chapter! It was a little weird to get use to the switch to first person, but your note at the bottom made it easier. As always, can't wait for more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brinolovania Posted April 8, 2012 Report Share Posted April 8, 2012 Yeah, the chapter was good but. But Avance's change from " Imma kill you k" to "Oh ok Imma hide you from baddies now" seemed a bit...rushed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted April 8, 2012 Author Report Share Posted April 8, 2012 [quote name='Pacmanexus' timestamp='1333903566' post='5906340'] Yeah, the chapter was good but. But Avance's change from " Imma kill you k" to "Oh ok Imma hide you from baddies now" seemed a bit...rushed. [/quote] Was half-afraid of that. Might re-write a bit of it. EDIT: Edited. Two paragraphs, but it was something I had forgot to write, so. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~British Soul~ Posted April 9, 2012 Report Share Posted April 9, 2012 Chapter 3 was great. At first i thought the change of person mid-chapter wasn't going to go down well, but surprisingly it worked quite well. Anyways, i can't wait to see what chapter 4 will bring. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brinolovania Posted April 9, 2012 Report Share Posted April 9, 2012 Oh god, how didn't I notice this earlier? Guys, Avance=III Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Cakey Posted April 29, 2012 Report Share Posted April 29, 2012 Well, [i]well[/i] done. I came in expecting something good, and you exceeded my expectations. You've really filled out the DT storyline. The only critique I have is that Noelia's lurking and omniscient council of vagueness is definitely the least interesting part of the story. Based solely on what I've read, you could [i]probably[/i] even cut all the scenes with Noelia without doing any damage to the story. That's just something to think about. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted May 2, 2012 Author Report Share Posted May 2, 2012 Noelia's OMG IT'S HER DREADED EVIL COUNCIL OF DEATH AND DOOM thing is (scheduled to) play a role later on in the story. Not very soon, though. Chapter 4'll prolly be about Lavals and Gem-Knights (with a tint of Steelswarms). I can't write any more about Gishkis until I can get a more clear art of Trial and Tribulation. Thanks for the comment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted May 8, 2012 Author Report Share Posted May 8, 2012 Bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Agro Posted May 25, 2012 Report Share Posted May 25, 2012 Dear god that made me feel good to read... and I don't feel good reading... most of the time. Anyway, now I REALLY want to talk DT storyline theory with you. Congratulations, you've succeeded in writing a compelling story in a foreign language. I'm impressed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted May 25, 2012 Author Report Share Posted May 25, 2012 Thanks. Exams made it hard for me to write up Chapter 4, but now that it's over it's currently being written. Expect it by Wednesday. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Agro Posted May 26, 2012 Report Share Posted May 26, 2012 [quote name='Darkplant - VENOM' timestamp='1337987894' post='5947013'] Thanks. Exams made it hard for me to write up Chapter 4, but now that it's over it's currently being written. Expect it by Wednesday. [/quote]I'll expect it on time... since I really need to put out a new chapter of my fic as well... better get that finished up. Anyway, I'm serious about talking about how you view the DT storyline... well maybe just with[url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Aquamirror_Cycle"] Aquamirror Cycle[/url] and the relationship between Emilia and Avance... because if it's a one-sided love story, it'd make for some cool tension and stuff. Yeah... anyway. What I repeat what I said about the next chapter: can't wait. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted May 28, 2012 Author Report Share Posted May 28, 2012 Well, yeah, the Emilia-Avance thing is pretty obvious from Aquamirror Cycle isn't it? Drafted Chapter 4. Will edit and revise, and post on Wednesday. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted May 31, 2012 Author Report Share Posted May 31, 2012 Chapter 4 is up. Chapter 5 will be about Avance, Winda, partially Steelswarms, and Vylons. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted June 8, 2012 Author Report Share Posted June 8, 2012 Bumped. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alice Moonflowyr Posted June 12, 2012 Report Share Posted June 12, 2012 I dont do much in the way of reviewing, but that was pretty darn cool man. Keep writing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Agro Posted June 13, 2012 Report Share Posted June 13, 2012 Very nice, only one or two grammar issues, nothing worth mentioning though. Might I suggest, as a format decision, though, to post each chapter in a post as a bump and merely link it in the OP, it will eliminate clutter in the OP and would mean that you don't need to wait for the unnecessary load time that editing it can do. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted June 19, 2012 Author Report Share Posted June 19, 2012 Yeah, but I don't want to change format in the middle of stuff. Thanks anyways. I think I can't update during June because of exams. Will update at least 1 (perhaps 2) chapters in July. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted July 10, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 10, 2012 Bumped. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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