supershade Posted March 1, 2008 Report Share Posted March 1, 2008 here it is note i dont own kirby this is just for fun Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
supershade Posted March 1, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 1, 2008 no comments come on i know you have some plz tell me how i did Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
supershade Posted March 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 2, 2008 no comments come on well heres #2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Dude64 Posted March 2, 2008 Report Share Posted March 2, 2008 WOw..lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Slime Lord Posted March 2, 2008 Report Share Posted March 2, 2008 Meh, too much white. And the comics and your sig are extending the page. And that annoys me slightly. And I never imagined Kirby as the the cocky and arrogant Dante-like hero. In the Subspace Emissary in SSBB, he runs away and bails on Zelda when the evil guys show up. And make sure you use capitalization and commas. They're your friends. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
supershade Posted March 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 2, 2008 thanks i remember that for future issues all posted here Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrazyKev Posted March 2, 2008 Report Share Posted March 2, 2008 They're kinda weird...But somehow funny... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
supershade Posted March 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 2, 2008 lol thats exacly why i did this lol working on third Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slash Posted March 2, 2008 Report Share Posted March 2, 2008 lol they're sorta funny :lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Best Male 2008 Posted March 2, 2008 Report Share Posted March 2, 2008 too much white, not that much to look at. not overaly funny :s Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
supershade Posted March 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 2, 2008 here is the third one ps. i need help in questions look at hellp thxs Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Best Male 2008 Posted March 2, 2008 Report Share Posted March 2, 2008 shouldn't this go in showcase? and at least make it look like they fight :s Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
supershade Posted March 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 2, 2008 sorry i was rushing i had to go some wheres thanks for honosty i appreciate iti need a back groud of a stadium or a site for backgrounds on sprites Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cael Posted March 2, 2008 Report Share Posted March 2, 2008 I'm going to be blunt. These are bad. They aren't funny. You need to learn to use proper grammar and punctuation. You need backgrounds, you need to describe the fights in more detail, and you need to work on the dialouge. If we're going to rate this, I give it a 2/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
supershade Posted March 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 2, 2008 i just said i needed backgrounds Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted March 2, 2008 Report Share Posted March 2, 2008 paint right? anyway this is in the wrong place. ask for a mod to move it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
supershade Posted March 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 2, 2008 thanks ok iwill Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SOUL Posted March 6, 2008 Report Share Posted March 6, 2008 Awesome! Plz make more!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TAG Posted March 6, 2008 Report Share Posted March 6, 2008 eh.....nothing very interesting. 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
supershade Posted March 6, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 6, 2008 Note i have made a revised page in show case thank you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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