saberoffate Posted June 18, 2012 Report Share Posted June 18, 2012 Fate Sasaki Kojiro Set, Give me critics and input please, thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyng's Old Account Posted June 18, 2012 Report Share Posted June 18, 2012 Because I'm nice (ha) I'll look at them, however here's a warning you'd best follow: no-one likes Attachments. You should upload your cards as images. Here's a tutorial you could make use of: [url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/229491-posting-your-cards/"]http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/229491-posting-your-cards/[/url] Card 1 - I hope you'll make more cards in the set, because as it is, she's under supported. Though fake types are fun, try stick to the normal ones so that they can receive support from other cards. (This would do well with Reinforcements of the Army). Card 2 - Simple searcher, very restricted, would again be better with a greater range of monsters to work with. Card 3 - Nuke = No. The Cost is not high enough, because you'll leave your opponent prone to your nasty Spells and Traps, or heck even a monster despite not attacking. For a beginner, not too bad. They need improvement, but it's natural for a fresh starter to not do as well as the rest. Have a look at the tutorials here: [url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/forum/12-tutorials/"]http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/forum/12-tutorials/[/url] Also, do some research before you make your cards, it never hurts to know what to work with. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
saberoffate Posted June 19, 2012 Author Report Share Posted June 19, 2012 Thank you very much for the feedback, and abour generic cards like ROTA, i'm also thinking about it, but maybe i'll makes spell cards like ROTA that can add Fate/servant type monster to hand, or something like that, hmm (monster reborm still works after all ^^) about tsubamegaeshi, how about, this card can only be activated when you have no cards in your hand and you cannot attack the turn this card is activated? that should very much put down its usefullness? sorry for bad english. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xi-3 Posted June 19, 2012 Report Share Posted June 19, 2012 [stops laughing] Kyng, you do know that Sasaki Kojiro was a legendary swordsman like Musashi, right? Also, he was a man. I agree with your comments, especially in regards to [i]Tsubame Gaeshi[/i]. This is merely a fast triple-strike sword technique, brought up to the level of a Noble Phantasm. Sasaki himself, as Fake Assassin was not the strongest of Servants. I'm not sure about the Searcher-type effect you get from Sasaki and his sword. I think the sword should boost his stats. Maybe [i]Tsubame Gaeshi[/i] could allow him to attack all of your opponent's monsters at once (via Speedblitz-type feat), or negate and destroy 1 Spell or Trap card. I could see Saber's [i]Excaliblast[/i] functioning as a card destroyer, though. I think you could reflect Sasaki better by calling him "Fake Assassin - Sasaki Kojiro" or "Servant Assassin - Sasaki Kojiro." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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